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Presyce vs the metaphor
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I'll rip out your vocal cords and use them "To Floss", while your "salad" is gettin "tossed",
Somebody call "Red Cross", this cat just got caught up in my "Lyrical Holocaust All you did was "Recycle" your "Recital" but I'm too "Spiteful"... Then I'll kick you in the mouth and leave your name "Untitled"... You on your “knees” more than a “Muslim family” in deep “Prayer”,... Flow got your rhymes “skipping” more than a“jump rope”and “Cheap CD player”... I didn’t wanna "fight you" I just called you a faggot to "spite you"... Dispite that you scream when you see a day care coz little boys "EXCITE you".... Mass-iv-soul' jab-u-low'the last-u-seen-ill-flow'was in a Original'class-sick-video' ... i stop heart's like "resperrator's"'then digest-the-hater 'leave ya body to rest-in-crator's'... |
now spit your shit son unless i got you too scared
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kool spit that shit in 30 min son
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yo check it
dog battleing me you got more nuts...than some used condoms/ you lost this battle... and im still stuck wit the problem of writers soloum/ this guy came as a newbie under the name of presynce/ changed a couple of letters around...cuase he didnt want us to know he was a fag and a fan of nsynce/ dog your lines garbage...and played out like sega genesis/ my lines are pousinous...i guess we can say there venonemiss/ dog you couldnt stop a heart...if you played a major role like aids/ spit lyrics like bullets... and watch graze the top of your fade/ like your sig say dog im'a put you on hard wood...cause im in the upper class of sick/ after this battle you gonna be on my dick ima suck up...another win like a tick/ |
sorry for the miss spelling
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uppin for some votes people
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close but i'll give it up to the first cat, dont wunna go up, but its not metaphor, only reason is because muslim family line, i was feeling, dawg yo words is too BIG, i aint dumb or nuthin, but not everyones gunna know wut u was talkn bout...keep doin ya'll thang though
v/pryce...oh yea |
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135202
oh yea, hit this up |
ok dog i thinkin your throwing hate votes now
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uppin
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haha dick ride your votes if you want but anymore votes
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the meta took this he had some illl puches
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FUCK THAT VOTE that was a hate vote EXPLAIN MORE CAN SOMEONE TAKE AWAY HIS VOTE UPPIN
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EXPLAIN IT MORE erase that vote that was DEF a dick ride
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I think Precyse took this. He had good wordplay and chose some tite vocab in his rhymes. I wasnt really feelin metas until that last closing line. If your rhymes were as tite as that closing, you woulda won dogg. But precyse took this with better punches, vocab, and wordplay.
Vote-Precyse Vote on these: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136079 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135031 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136136 |
I'll rip out your vocal cords and use them "To Floss", while your "salad" is gettin "tossed",
Somebody call "Red Cross", this cat just got caught up in my "Lyrical Holocaust 8/10. a lil stretched is why this wasnt a 10 opener All you did was "Recycle" your "Recital" but I'm too "Spiteful"... Then I'll kick you in the mouth and leave your name "Untitled"... 7/10. it's still ok. You on your “knees” more than a “Muslim family” in deep “Prayer”,... Flow got your rhymes “skipping” more than a“jump rope”and “Cheap CD player”... 9/10. still a lil stretched. I didn’t wanna "fight you" I just called you a faggot to "spite you"... Dispite that you scream when you see a day care coz little boys "EXCITE you".... 7/10. lil boys thing gettin played Mass-iv-soul' jab-u-low'the last-u-seen-ill-flow'was in a Original'class-sick-video' ... i stop heart's like "resperrator's"'then digest-the-hater 'leave ya body to rest-in-crator's'... 7/10. we doin bars or lines? overall you had decent flow, nice wordplay and ok structure. 7/10. dog battleing me you got more nuts...than some used condoms/ you lost this battle... and im still stuck wit the problem of writers soloum/ 8/10. good opener, would have been better as a closer. this guy came as a newbie under the name of presynce/ changed a couple of letters around...cuase he didnt want us to know he was a fag and a fan of nsynce/ 6/10. sound like somethin my sister might say if I was buggin da hoody dog your lines garbage...and played out like sega genesis/ my lines are pousinous...i guess we can say there venonemiss/ 6/10. not sure of the direction with your structure. dog you couldnt stop a heart...if you played a major role like aids/ spit lyrics like bullets... and watch graze the top of your fade/ 9/10. last part lets the first line down. 8/10 to the first line. like your sig say dog im'a put you on hard wood...cause im in the upper class of sick/ after this battle you gonna be on my dick ima suck up...another win like a tick/ 8/10. decent closer. overall I'ma have to give the thing a 7/10. in event of a tiebreaker I'll go by the fact that meta got2 6's and pres didnt get nothin lower than a 7 vote: presyce |
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Presyce took this 1 better stuture puches mutis everything
good battle pk was ok ok puches ok everythign but Presyce took it plz return the fav on 1 of the battles in my sig |
Presyce Punches were hard & they landed... Structure was pretty decent... Flow was pretty good... Vocab was good too...and easy to read it... the meta Punches were good too not as hard tho… Structure was good.. Flow was decent and tha... Vocab was pretty decent... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
shit precise had the baddest punches and the most awesome flow i have ever seen. his shit was dope throughout, vote goes to precise.
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pre won dis 1 easy he had better punches better pers he verse was 10x better than the other guy h windis 1
pz out battle cloed if u ever got 4 vote u need it closein pm me n ill close it with my vote |
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