Aznbl4ckrice vs. Tha Metaphor
 

aight dawg rulez r simple:

10-16 linez
No hater/crew/ etc votez.
No feeding.
u got 1 hr when u check in...

GL dawg.

make up your mind dog how long do i got or you spittin first
hurry up for my comp start messin up

Aight guezz ill spit first. here we go...

yo dawg metaphor ur jus a figure of speech/
yo ryhmez u spit are juz copies of otha rapperz, u leech!/
Yez i wuz bored when i wanted to do diz battle/
tie a noose around ya neck and have u ride the saddle/
shoot my gat see how long round tha rope u can handle/
waitin az yo face turnz purple witcho eyez buldgin out/
his body hung off thiz lil rope, surrouned by a crowd/
Hey metaphor! yo live on tv u mus be rlly proud!/
u got yoself wutchu wanted, fame to be known/
Battle me again ill puncture ur brain wit yo nose bone!/
I'll take yo body and burn it like the bark on tha tree/
juz shmokin ya azz up like a couple poundz of weed/
If ya family dont think ya death wuz right and disagree/
I'll be doin drive-byz at jo house constantly/
goin back and tellin yo baby gurl dat yo dead/
end diz shit wit all the innocense and the tear shed/

aight...yo turn dawg.

yo check it

this guy came on the battle feild equipt with a warter gun/
supersoakers will do u know good...so make like speedy gonzallis and run/
this nigga a bootleg killer...I guess we can call him the copy cat/
you can call me cactus jack...cuase im leaveing you under the mat/
living in a mansion and on tv is better than living in my honda/
we know the results of this cuase im ice cube...and you the anaconda/
if my familey disagreed it was only cause im gettin the death penalty for puttin you in a grave/
we dont need to battle again you save whatever you had to say...like a new rode u just got fucken paved/
dog like sig say im yo tutor so obey my fucken commands/
im done wit this cat now the votes is in demmand/

my bad its suppose to be (like your sig say)

i had to hurry dog comp been fucking up

uppin for votes

yo, neone gonna put some votez on dis shit?... bla bla

Votez............................................. ....... there 50 characters Lol

this was 16 lines vs 10?? thats wack

flow: Aznbl4ckrice
punches: tie
diss:tie

vote: Aznbl4ckrice for better flow and more focus it seems,

but having 10 lines vs 16 is wack....

can ya vote in my battle

Yo Both Of U Were Cool It Wuz A Close Battle But Meta Got It Because Of The Harder-hittin Punchlines

Azn Ur Shit Wuz Good But The Structure Waz A Bit Fucked And It Lost Its Way Around The End.
If U Work On The Structure And Some Punchlines U B Cool!

Don't Sleep On Marx
Vote Marx Vs Lyondred
Marx Vs Slugga

AZN:fav verse-yo dawg metaphor ur jus a figure of speech/
yo ryhmez u spit are juz copies of otha rapperz, u leech!/

Meta:fav verse-dog like sig say im yo tutor so obey my fucken commands/
im done wit this cat now the votes is in demmand/

basically i liked AZN's verse cause he had better flow and vocab
aslo his shit went together well

vote:AZN

yo return the favor

deilquint vs. mad stylez

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need more votez on dis battle...to close this shit up.

uppin more votez for dis battle...need to close this shit.

uppin votez all

man i gotta vote 4 METAPHOR
he came way harder wit his flow
his punches hit harder 2 makin it
tough on AZ
V/METAPHOR

yo vote 4 deez battles
amayze vs novakane
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749

murda-gram
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136506

2hard2lose
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487

forgotten flow
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031

peace

metaphor had the punches and the flow

metaphor got my vote

imma have to go with azn cuz meta just wusnt focused like how he went with like a 27 sylable outta nowhere and trhat aint gunna work. plus azn's punches hit harder but u both need to lern whut a damn personal iz....

yo bigc learn how to spell so your shit understandable damn i thought my spelling was bad

iight pplz i voted 4 azn bcuz he had better flow structure n also punches. The emtaphor wuz iight but i didnt like hiz freestyle as much no hate dawg> Voted 4 Azn

iight azn return da favor wen ya get da chance iight 1

ima go with azn rhyme was way better, structure was better feeling it alot more lot better punches , metaphor learn how to spell otherwise your structure needs work and , do pick a new word play no hate though