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State Capitol Vs one-man-band
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no d/r cv or biting BLIND SPIT 2 hours to spit after check in good luck... |
orright man checkin in... and i just wanna say that again... NO DICKRIDERS...
make your check in man.. then its 2 hours from there |
jea check in................................................ ........................
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Intelligence, 0, I mean, kid thought David and Galiath was a fairy tale..(sig)
Only Time You spittin' sick is when your openin' my sent mail..(ANTHRAX) Stated Himself One-Man-Band 'Cause no crew would accept His Wackness.. And Your Flow is Horrid, Only time you show emotion is when your auditioning for an actress..(sig) Band's Lines are Cold, I thought You'd be used to the cali weather by now.. (profile) You Garbage Pal, The Trash Multi's You Spit Got Me wondering, HOW?!?.. Kid Already Said it himself "No Dickriders!", Guess the outcome in this battle won't be hard to decide.. one-man? X-man? no, claims he spits "beast"ly, but his own Monsterous Lines Will Leave him Petrified.. Mad Cuz No One Returns the votes on his battles, No band, not everyones a dickrider like you.. Spit Ty-phoon's, Your still on elevation level One, Rappin' With baboons.. Sit tight dont worry, you won't know what hit 'cha.. dont worry fam......i took a picta.. http://images.google.ca/images?q=tb...om/knockout.gif |
aight
yo ill rip ya curses-n-all, read em, and ya rhymes never-have-shook-me.. drop'd 50 verses-or-more, heard-it-before, kid u just a veteran-rookie.. How noobs-this-kid be, Just like his sig, ill black, blue n bruise-him-swiftly.. get a new-name-quickly, "CapiTol"? howbout "how-to-use-the-shift-key".. Fuck ya raps, instead Ill straight slay ya middle-ribs-n-head-bitch.. Im not riddled-from-ya-record, i know you only eat little-kids-for-breakfast.. sorry bout this, but i got to be dope, otherwise this fight-'ll-be-worse.. Cos if i come wack, all the voters might think i was biting-ya-verse.. This battles a one sided gamble.. no ones even viewin-ya-bet.. an old name like "killah bwoy".. how u gon win if u aint reach puberty-yet?.. I'll Slay-n-kill-ya. punches, flow, whatever, my whole game-is-iller.. forget about ya lines, rhymes n verses.. cos shit, even ya name-is-filler.. Rappin-complex, clappin-wit-techs, spray packets-a-threats.. follow-that.. heres a tip: why not treat it like the vets dicks you suck, n swallow-rap.. if u didnt get some punches... killah bwoy was his old name.. and that black and blue line was referring to the colours of his sig... in case he changes em |
lol... yeah he changed his sig.. dont think for this battle though cos it was blind spit... but yeah.. used to be black n blue
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damn i thought you werent as good as that...i should of dropped harder...didnt know..LOL oh well...uppin this
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HA! ... is all i have to say... but yeah... uppin... btw, you reckon i coul join your crew?? i posted in the tryout thread but nobody replied..
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uppin for votes............................................. ..
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.............................uppin................ ........... dont sleep on this
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ok.state lines were stretched..that sorta ruined ur structure..i felt ur punches hit solid though on ther other hand..i didnt like your ender..try to kep all your lines the same length u feel? u called him a dickrider alot we got the point..dayum lol it got annoying.. overall 17.3/20 |
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your verse was fairly good..but he owned u in strucutre dont put ur lines in that group of four its highly newbish..his strucutre was better you used better multies and meta4's..but your punches didnt hit hard with an exeption of a few this was a close..but ur weaker punches lost you this battle..very close proud of both but there has to be on winner..thats state capitol.. overall 16.9/20 my vote:state |
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I felt one man band took this one...capitol shoulda came harder and with more multis...one man band is definitely good with those..i liked his punches better also
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Damn state, u bit off a line from my battle against one man...
My line was like: " no wonder he a one man band, its cuz no one can stand his wackness/ whishes he had a right hand man but left alone when shit happens/" Maybe u jus came up wit it too the wackness line too, but w/e... |
nah man i dont think state would bite... and that kinda stuffs used in pretty much every verse against me... uppin
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DROP A VOTE ON THIS BATTLE AND I'LL BE SURE TO DROP ONE ON THIS RITE AFTER U VOTE ON MINE PC http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135130
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lol not even i wuldnt even bite...especially someone im better then..thaz stupid..and One mand is that pics of u with the fro?
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nah nah... just a buddy that helps me mix n edit.. hes wearin one of my t-shirts though.. haha..
man dont just go round sayin you better than people, its pretty fucked... no hate but just lettin ya know |
uppin for votes.... cmon..........................
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uppin... vote honestly... no d/r..................
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ok state good drop alot of personals like the 3rd bar but your opener was super weak.9th and last line aint rhyme and your flow was good basically the same as mans flow.man good opener and good wordplay on the second bar.4th line was a hard hitting personal and 8th line 'biting ya verse'lol.so band wins with better punches and harder personals.
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uppin this shit....
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ok now.. omg and state you both know ya'll my niggas.. so there shoul dbe no question bout this bing a hate vote.. dick ryding vote or nething like that..
state: your verse wasent the hottest i seen from you fam.. iv seen you rip cats like poor peoples tee shirts.. this just gave him paper cuts.. you had iight lines in there.. Band's Lines are Cold, I thought You'd be used to the cali weather by now.. (profile) You Garbage Pal, The Trash Multi's You Spit Got Me wondering, HOW?!?.. ^prolly one of your best lines... id give this verse like a 5.9-6.1/10 cant deside.. wasent uo to your stadards.... omb: thats structure withthe devided paragraphs and hyphens gotta go.. but what you were spittin was pretty hard ish.. my fav lines: This battles a one sided gamble.. no ones even viewin-ya-bet.. an old name like "killah bwoy".. how u gon win if u aint reach puberty-yet?.. I'll Slay-n-kill-ya. punches, flow, whatever, my whole game-is-iller.. forget about ya lines, rhymes n verses.. cos shit, even ya name-is-filler.. Rappin-complex, clappin-wit-techs, spray packets-a-threats.. follow-that.. heres a tip: why not treat it like the vets dicks you suck, n swallow-rap.. theres more..i thought this verse was pretty damn hott.. out of 10, that shit waslike a 7.9.. flow was on point.. punches were hittin.. ery thing was there cept that busted ass structure nigga.. off that ish foreal.. |
I gotta give statethis vote.....his verse was just ovarall better..this was a hott battler..on man band...u had some killler multies..but the punches slacked a littel bit...u could have done it a little better...but....state i liked ur struc....wordplay,punchlines ....personals.......nice overall battle..one man band..next time make ur struc all in 1 i know u was trying ot make it look neat but it kinda threw me off to keep taking breaths when tryiing to flow ur rhyme...but ur shit was hott but i do not think it was hott enough to win..nice drop both of ya!!!!
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Intelligence, 0, I mean, kid thought David and Galiath was a fairy tale..(sig)
Only Time You spittin' sick is when your openin' my sent mail..(ANTHRAX) weak opener Stated Himself One-Man-Band 'Cause no crew would accept His Wackness.. And Your Flow is Horrid, Only time you show emotion is when your auditioning for an actress..(sig) just saw a similar line in another battle about 5 minutes ago...filler Band's Lines are Cold, I thought You'd be used to the cali weather by now.. (profile) You Garbage Pal, The Trash Multi's You Spit Got Me wondering, HOW?!?.. no real punch.. ok line but not for a battle Kid Already Said it himself "No Dickriders!", Guess the outcome in this battle won't be hard to decide.. one-man? X-man? no, claims he spits "beast"ly, but his own Monsterous Lines Will Leave him Petrified.. easily ya best line... stick with this kinda shyt Mad Cuz No One Returns the votes on his battles, No band, not everyones a dickrider like you.. Spit Ty-phoon's, Your still on elevation level One, Rappin' With baboons.. trash line...already called him a dick-rider...find another idea Sit tight dont worry, you won't know what hit 'cha.. dont worry fam......i took a picta.. weak closer and structure of last line was fucked... 5/10 yo ill rip ya curses-n-all, read em, and ya rhymes never-have-shook-me.. drop'd 50 verses-or-more, heard-it-before, kid u just a veteran-rookie.. cool opener... not an OH SHYT line but fairly decent How noobs-this-kid be, Just like his sig, ill black, blue n bruise-him-swiftly.. get a new-name-quickly, "CapiTol"? howbout "how-to-use-the-shift-key".. nice multi's but not a hard hit at all Fuck ya raps, instead Ill straight slay ya middle-ribs-n-head-bitch.. Im not riddled-from-ya-record, i know you only eat little-kids-for-breakfast.. was ok... coulda hit harder sorry bout this, but i got to be dope, otherwise this fight-'ll-be-worse.. Cos if i come wack, all the voters might think i was biting-ya-verse.. nice punch here... picking up steam now! This battles a one sided gamble.. no ones even viewin-ya-bet.. an old name like "killah bwoy".. how u gon win if u aint reach puberty-yet?.. I'll Slay-n-kill-ya. punches, flow, whatever, my whole game-is-iller.. forget about ya lines, rhymes n verses.. cos shit, even ya name-is-filler.. WHOA! these 4 lines were brutal! nice shyt right there Rappin-complex, clappin-wit-techs, spray packets-a-threats.. follow-that.. heres a tip: why not treat it like the vets dicks you suck, n swallow-rap.. lmao at the closer...good shyt O 7.5/10 and that's only cuz i seen you spit way harder! |
OMB got this in my honest humble opinion...he got harder punches and u can tell this battles been slept on...it's old omb writin style...u've elevated hella since this but OMB's was pure multi burnin fya multies left right and centre which resulted in hard hittin punches and damn u got the flow on lock on this too...props to the verse was dope.
Decree Wun we cool and all but i agree wit ya u shoulda come harder...he got you on this i'm afraid an aight verse but i know ur style and i know aight...aint good enough... v/OMB RTF in ma sig (except OMB as he can't vote in his own battle lol) |
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