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.:VA:. (D2R) vrs shadow (mos.)
50 line maximum verse due 11.59 monday evening topic: you discover life on another planet...expand.... no crew obviously no hate no d/r |
D2R check. |
nice we got him checkin..goodshit.good luck lets get this crackin
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this is a childish topic, request a change.
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dont be a bitch ur leader picked it u can request a lick on my ball sack faggot
also..if u dont spit ill have yur ass dqued without hesitation..grow balls and live it up like a man |
looks like i got you worked up...! just make sure you drop by tomoro.
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cape canvril, florida
no-show it is exactly 11:59 herepreparing for lift off its early and still pretty dark- lil nervous but reasuring my self."u can do this mark"- i get on equipment as i plan to blast into tha sky- i remember wondering will i survive or will i die- i gather up my crew as its time to go into space- you can taste the mornin dew as it brushes ur face- we climb into the shuttle- knowing we could be ehadin fo trouble- |
mosaic wisn the crew battle thats 2 no-shows destien to rhyme pulled today...close this battle strobe..
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shadow-topic: you discover life on another planet...expand...
First off..all you did was talk about lift off..so expand on that..he coulda wrote the shittiest lines ever and if they were at least on topic he would of merked your newb ass |
wow, both ur verses were.........OH HOLD ON..........someone didnt even post!!!! look at that shit....lmao......as for u justify...read before u post
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i read, maybe you should read you dickridin nigglet =)
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its only 10:14 here, and my verse is almost done, i still have an hour and a half
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VA, dont worry son you can write a newb ass verse and still beat this little bitch
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QUOTE=shadow]
topic: you discover life on another planet...expand... this tale resides where your mind cannot connect with simple logics. misperceived by books or comics, yet egerly told by textual phonics. the southern star that rotates saturn awaits a land of endless murder. this globe id soonly visit, an accident not a hour beyond or a meter further. these creatures most resemble a breed of sainthood scriptures. no time to lose, my words bring ease to ears as they paint you pictures. bluntly put, i crashed my trasportation on this star to score a glimpse. i discovered a virgin earth due to miscalculated coordinance. the human Limitations that rests here, is easily overcome by a newer sent. I greet a few citizens to renounce my peace, they provide me food so jubilent. Yet by night fall, the whole surface changed the tone to kill in lessons. My entire crew stood weary to this unkown race, blamed apon faulty impressions. We find ourselves with a burden that withstands a nucleic political trial. Weap with ridicule denial, as I tremble in the dark writing a journal of this critical profile. I thought my greet of peace would proclaim my erge of friendliness to these urbans. treat jews like persians, these people couldnt live holy even with a thousand sermons. My ship is captured and my people are tired yet still flee hastily. As we scurry this furious path I wish with all my heart this was just a trance of make believe. I yearn to wake up but I cant shake the reality, then a stagger to faithless terrain. I lay unconscious of the real or phacade, and a drift into three sorrowed hours of pain. My eyes arise and muscles strain, to find myself beyond enemy lines. They have taken me captive, alone bear and aiking. This remedys crime. With abnormal perspectives of torture, twelve tons of water has been flushed into my face. Why chase a foreign supremecy, I should have abided to limits I was given by grace. My heart beat pumps an echo slower as every drop flows into my skull. The mass of deadly liquid is countless, it now feels like an open wound from a rifle. Brain slips into a mental silence, my head aches of like a drunk in need to stay sober. But my eyes focus clear, my head is not drenched, and I awake to a frat house realizing.... ....its just my routine hang over. |
yah...that totally owned shadow...very nice verse VA, something to be proud of
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get off his dick-i won you spit late-the crew battle is ours...i already told strobe..faggot...
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thats just as late as VA's post and some people live in different timezones you fuckin cock monger, his verse wasnt late..he owned your ass..now stfu and take the L like a man
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Ayo Both Verses Were Tight...
LYRICALLy I Think That VA Won This Hands Down... He Had A Crazy Vocabulary And Nice Flow... Buuuuut, At Times He Strayed From The Given Topic... So I Mean, This Was Hard To Judge Cuz VA Did Take It Lyrically But This Is A TOPICAL Battle And The Topic Is Most Important... I Think That I'ma Give This To Shadow, Based On What I Just Said... But If VA Made His Story Line Alittle More Clear Then He Coulda Taken This Easily... But This Is Gonna Be A Good Back Because The Votes Are Gonna All Come Down To Personal Prefferance... Between If You Think Lyricism Or Content Is More Important... Vote- Shadow... And I'd Apreciate It If You Two Could Return The Favor And Check This Rhym... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136282 ... Thanks Alot Peoples... ~One~ |
looks like va beat shadow to me no qusitions asked
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it had a cool beat and good rhymeing skill although the other guys was good too i still think you wow no qusitions asked
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well can i ask you a question? if this is text how can i ahve a beat?
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Both good verses.. but i think its an upset.. VA in my eyes had a better verse.. Both had very good verses but Va's lyrics were deep as hell and i could like picture everything that he wrote in my head. Flow was good on both sides.. VA had streched lines at times but still had a good verse.
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thanx uppin, slang if you liked my verse, drop a vote please. UNO
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uppin, this para el tiempo de numero dos...
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hmm..i sence some dickriding going on here..energy why dont u change ur name .::VA's bitch::.
and then stroll over to sandiego california and suck his penis..cock rider |
i dont need D/r i clearly beat you...ive never used D/r... im the one whos been beaten 3 times by my opponents using D/r, thats y i hate rapbattles.com its full of newbs, i hate regular front lines mostly, OG is way better...i never asked ne one to vote for me, so just b/c your loosing dont me you have to blame me for D/r.
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Va, you came alot deeper, i felt ya lines i could imagine them going on a shit. Tight rhymes hot flow, and i liked it because it actually told a story Shadow, ya shit was alright, Kinda short, but quick and to the point. Nice rhyming, although if i didnt read the topic i wouldnt of known what ya were spittin about. Nice job overall. Vote: Va |
damn why the 150 post count to vote? sorry cant vote :|
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so herbs cant vote..much like you
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That was a good battle both verses was tight I enjoyed both But I have to say that I enjoyed Shadow's more cuz VA fell off topic in a part but got back on still he messed up
sHADOW VERSE WAS GOOD AND STAYED ON TOPIC THE WHOLE TIME I ENJOYED HIS BETTER NO HATE TO VA BUT SHADOW GOT THIS SO MY VOTE GOES TOOOOOOOOOOO THE ONE AND ONLY SHADOW!!!!!!!!! LOL |
uPPin
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Shadow Wins By the Fact VA Was Late And Verse Wasnt Really Good
Bestline- these creatures most resemble a breed of sainthood scriptures. no time to lose, my words bring ease to ears as they paint you pictures. 8/10 cape canvril, florida preparing for lift off its early and still pretty dark- lil nervous but reasuring my self."u can do this mark"- i get on equipment as i plan to blast into tha sky- i remember wondering will i survive or will i die- i gather up my crew as its time to go into space- you can taste the mornin dew as it brushes ur face- we climb into the shuttle- knowing we could be ehadin fo trouble 9/10 lol Nice Va If You Wouldve Had It On Time You Might Had A Chance But Dats Not Fair 4 Me 2 Vote 4 You And You Was Late..Winner-Shadow |
Look every one, my verse was not late, strobe even sed so, its not late b/ shadow did not specify 11:59 (easter or pacifc) he just put 11:59, so that means i can post anytime before 11:59, im in pacific, our times our differnt, so stop voting b/c he says i was late, these are all swayed votes..and will be voided if the reason is cuz i was late. period, i was not late, ask strobe.
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uPPin
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Alright, people keep sayin your verse was late VA? maybe they're just too big of retards to understand that people live in different time zones...shadows first drop wasnt even 15 lines...then he had someone else post a full one 3-4 posts after your drop...shadow, shut the fuck up and quit trying to sway votes, callin people dick riders because they vote honest? you just need to sit their, shut your cocky little mouth and let the people vote
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justify take a long look at yourself and ur posts in this thread,,,,,,,YOUR THE DICKRIDER...and everyone can see this.....you Dick Lovin Fruitbasket....uppin for the crew........
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need some votes. ill return the favor, with a fair vote.
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hve i missed sumthin?.shadows verse woz only ten lines.
it woz gud.but v.a wins simply because there woz more of it......... |
this battle was all fucked up....but keep the votes comin, leave links.
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uppin for votes and links.
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