Kingz vs CarsonJetX2
 

1-2mins max
any beat
no hate
no crew
no d/r
no feeding
verses due by midnight on tues

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Checked'
NO DR means no one that isn't in audio battles regularily....

Just clearin that up. no Front Line'ers.

K. I'm done.
Kingz
Really only like 40 seconds of verse.
But I'm swamped wit Collab's and other Battles. So it's short and early-1

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133452 -- yo can either of you drop honest votes here-- me and tempa will return the favor once both of you have dropped.

Kingz vs Carsonjet
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/pdepmusic.htm

hmmmmm....


---kingz-...decent verse... shoudla came back and shadowed it to define ur punches.... but u had soem decent punches.... alotta personals.... but delivery was kinda wack.... even thoguh its a slow beat u shoulda found a way to keep more words in it... u slowed down for the beat whhich didn't sound good...

carson-- in a 40 second drop.......... nice flow...and with punches ur delievery comes offf nice.... smooth sound... not as choppy as teh kingz... liked the beat... brings a def look... nice punches and personal.....

overall... CarsonJ



.....and...Kingz....lmao when u said herb... u pronouced it with a (ha) ....instead of (erb)...

F.Y.I.

thx for the advice

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thats the way ur supposed to pronounce it not with a silent h

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both had tight verses.....

carson-

nice verse man, sick beat n some nice effects in, but this was too short i know u sed ya busy but it didnt give u enough time to get out more solid punches, but wot u did spit was ill with gud flow n tight tempo.....

8/10


kingz-

tight verse again with some real tight punches, i thought anyway, loved the spittin literally line that shit was ill n again gud production which both y'all had. flow was gud, not great but gud enough......intro = no, but apart from that a real soilid tight verse which gives u my vote here.

peace

v/kingz

Carson- nice beat, i liked it, lyrics had a little too much effect, made it hard to understand at points, punches decent nothing special. too short

Kingz- NIce drop, slow beat helped your delivery as well as you had nice punches and personals, very easy to hear vocals. nice closer, renaming carson, car been sonned.

Vote- Kingz

no hate but some advice to carson clear up your vocals a little bit, your punches would be easier to hear. nice beats, but the effects take away from your drop.

I said the same thing my self.^on this one.

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no offense dude. but its an audio. u dont have to up 4 times a day.

not tryna start nuttin but. like half the posts in here are u uppin.
the battle's not fallin off the front page. no matter what.-1

word. pretty tight battle over all

Kingz- Your flow seemed a bit lagged at parts of ya song, wasnt really feelin ya beat. You has some pretty dope personals i liked that shit about vendetta, and when the beat drops in the song, you timed that shit pretty nice, not bad i also liked the last personal after the beat finished.

Carson, your drop was tight, you flowed really hot to the beat. You didnt really come strong with ya personals, its aiight tho, the effects were pretty tight hard to hear at times tho. I loved this beat, it was dope. You got him production wise, and Flowing wise. HOT

good shit
my vote goes to carson

Carson - Aight.... Nice punches I was feelin the mets line and shit...Flow was good... effect was a little much...u should just double ya voice up. Beat was nice to...but i dont vote by that

Kings - I liked your verse, beat is old but it doesnt matter...
Punches I felt were okay... i heard the sonned line i used a line like that my self, similar not exact.. Delivery was cool... I dont know though

I vote for Carson... why? Because even though the effect was a little to much.. i still felt his delivery/flow and punches better, I think if kings would thrown some personal more on his name or something not jus that vendetta battle it would been better.

VOTE - CARSON

No Hate- take this as constructive criticism not bashing--

Carson- your decent, but the production work with the effects is no good- it makes ya verse sound really sloppy and hard to understand and theres very little of your own voice left for the listener-- verse was o.k from what I can understand-- you better than some of the other cats makin audios here but you still gotta work on your sound alot.

Kingz- You came nicely- I thought it was dope in the flow when your accent came through cuz that shit is original to me- your flow was pretty steady and your pronounciation was good so your punches hit well, the intro was a little messy but the verse was strong... Vote Kingz.

uppin (to put all my active battles together. lol. ;))

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Votes. Uppin. -1.

uppin...............................leave links and i will return the favour

^^^

return the favor....
dont say that in my battles or i will report you.
i dont care if it's not called cheating. dont say it. uppin

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Carson: First thing i noticed is the mic needs to be turned up a bit, or maybe possibly your voice. Some lines I couldn't hear over the beat. I liked this line a lot: "Trying to win with DQs, but you still lose" Nothing else really that I noticed too much, but awesome flow and delivery (except for volume thing).

Kingz: Oh shit, your flow wasn't the illest thing I've ever heard, but this fucking line was awesome: "You put times 2 next to your name to try and double your power"

this one caught my eye also: "On the mic it's like you spittin...literally"

So, elementary breakdown:
Flow: Carsonjetx2
Punches: Kingz
Vocab: Neither
Multies: Neither

So, it's tough, but I really enjoyed Kingz a lot, so vote Kingz. Major props to Carson though, it was a good battle. One of the better ones I've seen.


The Wig requested vote be removed

lol damn Carson u sound like a bitch no hate but u do ur voice is wack............. i aint votin cuz doesnt seem like i need to Kingz we still gotta battle.......

pz

~1~

stop swayin, i aint even battling u..ur battling king chris

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uppppppppppin damn c'mon....................................

my votes on kingz he was fast and he had a better beat and his rhyme was great keep it up homes and ill vote on more peace

lmao. not an audio head.
fast...good beat.....
3-3 still uppin