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ILL Tempa vs. THUGZY
Rulez: 10-16 Linez No Crew No Hate No D/R No Recyclin No Feedin Checkin Sometime Tomorrow (July 17th) Verses Due by Midnight Central Time on July 17th You Drop First |
Well, considering you haven't seen this yet, i'll reset tha rules when you reply here.
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ok,checkin in.gonna key summet nah.
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bitch,think before ya flow,and go recylclin ya rhymes more/
ya metaphors aint workin,so recylclin bins is where they go/ a hit with so many punches ya cant count/ ma rhymes embarres ya,that ya loose ya tempa no doubt/ u aint ill,just dont wanna tell evrybody ya caught clap/ dont bother replyin,go visit the clinic then come back/ they call me tyson,way that i eat these emcees/ they call u baby,the way u fuckin always seem to feed/ am the sickest emcee,guaranteed to kill the mic/ a get ya bitch to suck ma dick,til she starts soundin like barry white/ a locked the game,av u boxed up like david blane/ starve ya all crew,til none of ya bitches remain/ make u cry like lists of poverty, verbally slice ya heart dude/ spittin sharp like lines of harpoons,until this threads tied and cant move/ a remove whackness from this site,thats ya entire name damaged/ jam so many decibles down ya ear,that ud start to loose balance/ |
Iight i just saw this.....Have mine up in like 15 min.
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ok,no problem g!
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Realize I’m very-nice I’ll burn u till u crumble-to-ashes It’s like I’m jerry-rice and you that cat fumblin-passes I can’t be compared-to so consider me matchless Spit hot I dare-you, my flowz get peeps bumbin like a mattress You think you ill, in you there’s no hood you’re pure whackness Kid fa real, your no good like small clothes on a fat bitch You’re no problem I easily crush you, wit all these multi’s and metaphors I’ve seen ya battles, they’re things that you hope-fully don’t take credit for You wouldn’t be sick even if you had six viruses This nigga “blows” dick like he’s got bad “sinuses” Is he ill?…...hell-no-med’s-checked Congratulations on your new l-o-s-s |
Let Tha Voting Begin!
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nice verse g!uppin...................
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Uppin 4 votes............
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Damn this shit is gonna get slept on. Uppin!
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Damn could someone vote on this shit lol. UPPIN!!!!!!!
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lol,uppin this mother fucker........................we will return votes,leave links............
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cant vote on this as thugzy co leader of my crew. so jus consuder this as an uppin for ya both.
but eres what i think it was a close battle personals.. both punches..thugzy word play... ILL Temper dont know who id go with if i could vote coz this shyt was close |
VOTE!
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OMG...Ill Tempa maaaaaan...I'm likin the punches and the rhyme scheme ta go with it. Almost rhymin perfectly with the rhymes in the middle of the lines too. I'm likin it. T had a good verse but Ill just had lines in there that stunned me. Good closure ILL. You Kill'd em in the punches, metas, and structure. Ill tempa gets mah vote.
Vote-Ill Tempa Vote on these: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136079 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135031 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136136 |
okay battle....
Punches-Tempa by a bit Personals-Thug...saw a couple name plays but they werent that gr8 Multi's-Tempa Wordplay-Tempa Creativity-Tempa...close but some of Thug's were childish Opener-tempa Closer-Thug...i thought tempa's was whack Overall-Ill Tempa....a more solid verse plz vote on this battle of mine thats been slept on and needs to get sum'd up.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133764 |
wtf cant i poll?
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damn,i aint never complain,but GEE,u sound like u dickridin,dint even leave no feed back on me,good or bad,pure dick ride,but i think ill,uve won this battle,but uve put it on only so many posts can vote,shunt av done tht................oh well...uppin!!!!!!
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Uppin 4 votes..........
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P P I N 4 V O T E S! |
Uppin 4 Votes................
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Uppin......
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uppin for a nigge.. drop a vote guys
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god damn u people up to much
vote ill tempa verse was much better in all categorys specially punchs them killed off thugzys punchs byfar structure was again ill tempa ay thugzy drop the // shit an get some creativitie an wordplay to help ya punchs stand out an make people wanna read ya verses dog ill tempa the double rhymes was coo butnot neccesary goood verse though |
Thug... Need better rhymes and structure dawg... Not like ur punches were hitten though... Basically... Elevate... Ill... Pretty nice... Good rhymes, punches, structure, and flow... V/Ill
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137958 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Hit this up |
damn ILL tempa that was hott!!nice wordplay,punches and flow.I was feeling your verse.
THUGZY,your verse was ok but it wasnt at the level of ILL.It was kind of ABC most of the time.most of your lines were played out-lioke your trash bin line.just try to find new wordplay and youll be better.your structure needs improving. ILL,work on some better wordplay too but it was real good as it is. v/ILL Tempa |
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