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Mad Dog (D2R) VS Lethal Lunatic (Mos)
Aight we lining up now i take it so heres the rules...
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Aight Destined 2 Rhyme up in here now representing the crew...co-leader Mad Dog it's the general here yet again takin a crew and smashin it 2 pieces...LETS GET IT CRACKIN...
(Verse) This guys gonn know not to play wit fire like a guy wit 1st degree burns, So he steps up to me to get that undefeated record scorned... ...bitch u don't know i'll make u learn, Lethal Lunatic na more like Tom Thumb waitin to get trod on, Dawg u lil in this game...how in hell u gonn step up to me son? Consider urself sonned u brought this on urself Looney playin outta tune Coz Elmer Fudd got his catch of the day... ...Shhh "i-i-i've hunt down Lethal Lune" Think yo crews tough mosaics?...easy to crack wit a lil hammer... ...it's all it takes to cease this Well we reppin sldege hammers... ...consider ur crew in pieces/ :laugh: Yeah u right u are ill don't come near me u a hazard to all EMCEES A self confession in ur sub-title a self diss too... ...don't ever come back on this board EVER...PLEASE Eugh if u diseased stay away dawg fuck this i'm out |
His crew reunited to find another dick 2 ride (D2R)
Cuz wen his spits is like another bitch inside This cat aint a dog he’s a straight up bitch His whole life and record is an internet glitch His sig has a bulldog so his rhymes are bull-shit Go at him, diss him and he’s still cool-wit-it This is just an easy success wit no contest I spit back twice the size cuz Im god blessed It’s not a tobacco in his mouth it’s tonyself’s dick (avatar) Destine 2 rhyme? your only destined to spit shit This Dog is mad cuz this cat is beatin him I rip to death like I ripped the grim blah quicl key |
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nice battle..break down
opener:lethal punches:both flow:mad structure:both worplay:none vocab:mad personals:both closer:mad overall:mad dog nice battle..... lethal would have won if he had a better closer Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ok i'ma have to go with mad dog cause his shit was more complex and the style was better i like the punch that both had but i think mad dogs were harder. didn't like the hyp that was put in it
lethal i got it but no need for the bold letters. definally so good lines but it was pretty simple. my vote mad dog |
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Mad Dog: 6/10 Your Structure Seems Off To Me..Not Really A Nice Flow but You Had Sum Nice Personals Laced Within Your Punhces. You Had 2 Fillers But The Other Punches Were Nice.. Overall Nice Drop. Lethal Lunatic:4/10 If You Woulda Added More Personals With Creativity You Woulda Took This. Your Structure and Flow Was Decent. Just Add More Creativity and Personals With Your Punches. Vote - Mad Dog ~R~ |
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mad dog- your strcutre was a little off this time.......didnt rfeally feel that you was commin as hard as you could come......your punches was okay felt that you could have come harder and that you really didnt try this time but your punches was deffintly harder hittin then lunatic's
lethal- your strtudture was better then mads but i think that that was really all that you had going for you.....your need to work on your punches a little bit more and try and reword them or something so they hit harder v/mad dog |
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