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Mistah_Tate vs. Intensify Effect
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No crew votes No hate votes No bitches No whores 1 hour to write after check in Unlimited bars |
Aight check, waitin on u............
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Unlimited bars??
heck nah cuz i dont want storys i want battle verses lets make it 10 lines 5 bars cool |
whateva, u checked then?
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i see ya tactics with unlimited bars N its wack kid
trying to keep writing till something good hits u, but then that'll be ya mattress / 1 look how u got voters intrest rate going down like u signd up for mortgage and u'r about to get places stuffed in the back like clothe-line for storage / 2 im done with this fool lets get this battle ova with in a prompt cuz im about to put M.T face UNDERGROUND performing the A-TOWN-STOMP /3 look there aint no comp, coming from this lame cuz i've eatin more people with bigger PENUTS in baseball games / 4 look i could drop all fillers and there still no saving u cuz the only this this faggot consider NICE is on april-fools/ 5 good luck |
danm it i messes up last line its soopuse to say..
cuz the only "time" i aint mean to write this this 2 times aight ya so read it as cuz the only TIME aight... im still waitting on this fool |
Watch as i effect this kid wit an unrelenting intensity
Attackin his frame wit a flow thats thick wit density He went to bitch slapped and posted up a death wish So ima batter em, fry em and serve em up like fish What he dont know is that i'll twist his spinal cord up Drain the juices out, smile and sip em from a kiddie cup His record tells the tale, he's been a loser since birth He's just a talentless shell damned to wander this earth Well i'm here to give you a death with some dignity I'll get under yo skin and shred u to pieces cuz ya style aint fittin me Aight, i dont like being restricted to a set number of lines but whatever |
damn yo style is fucked up....... good luck tho
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close battle
intensity effect had some funny lines....i liked mistah tate's punches overall mistah tate was better vote=Mistah tate Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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shut the fuck up and stop trying to sway votes... |
uppin for more votes...........come on yall dont sleep
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Damn yall, yall lookin at this shit accordin to the views, so just drop your explanation and a vote ^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Dawg This Was A Close
Won Naw Im Jus Kidding Mistah Tate Won Dis Battle With Ease Cause His Lyrics Was Stronger And Punches Hurt Him Return Da Votes To Slugga Vs Marx Slugga Vs Da Prodigy Slugga Vs Hi-c Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Mistah tate merked this fool, wasn't even close... he had harder punches, better struc and flow, and better wordplay...
Intensity- Aight verse, wasn't too great tho. You had straight punches, but they didn't really hit too hard. Ya rhyme scheme was off, and ya opener didn't even rhyme. Also, some of ya lines didn't really make sense, or were just statements, like the " A town stomp" line, and your closer. Some of your lines were stretched, so just work on your struc and punches and elevate. Mistah Tate- Nice verse from you, you had some hard hittin punches and nice wordplay. You had some nice personals, my favorite line was your opener, that hit hard. Your struc was on track too, which helps your flow. Good verse, i would just work on your complexity a little, but nice verse. |
u dont get it?? the A-TOWN sTOMP is a dance where u stomp ya feet/ im a put hes face underground performing the A-TOWN-STOMP???
if u dont get my lines dont vote.... its 1-0 upp'in |
Intensify Effect - Punches was original and creative... nice lyrics over all... aight structure
Mistah Tate - Corny punches yo... Nice structure and flow u had goin, but shit was weak nah mean... MY VOTE= Intesity Effect Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
mt. u had better structure but absolutely no personals and seemed all ya's was jus pre writen could be used on anyone, prolly why ya sturcture was so good.
but ie had bad structure but much more personals, mt prolly better but in this battle ie had more personals and in my opinion takes this one vote- intensify effect yo return the favor fo realz http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135903 |
my shit was pre-written? you buggin nigga i wrote that in 20 minutes, i had one personal on his name, and i dont know of this nigga so thats the only one i could get.....uppin ^^^^^^
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mistah tate~damn, some funny lines in there, creative too, flow and structure were good throughout, ya had some good punches as well,good opener too, set upt nicely..overall nice verse
intensity effect: ya verse was decent too, but ya should clean up ya structure, it will help the flow,no hate just bein honest, try and pack more punches into a smaller space too cuz ya words get stretchy...overall good from both VOTE:MISTAH |
shit heres my link if yall want to drop a vote here:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135415
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overall
punches-mistah flow-intensity struc-mistah wordplay-mistah creativity-intensity overall i liked intensitys creativeness but mistah had harder punches a beta opener........n beta structure vote-mistah return the favour guys/...plz http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...134#post1420134 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upp'in for more votes....
this one aint ova yet so dont get gas come on people a few more decent vote and this one is ova.... |
whats really good why was this on the 3ed page dont sleep people
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jesus christ.......uppin ^^^^^^^^^ vote and leave a good explanation so it wont get dqed, i'll return the favor
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yo there is to much post and bearly no votes can we end this already with a few decent votes???
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upp'in and dont sleep on my verse people.........
just a few more votes...... leave link and i will return the favor of a vote... |
i thought it was an alright battle but ie your punches werent hitting n were pretty straight forward not alot of complexity,tried multi's but your structure was fucked ta follow,jus ya syllable count was off n i don't think some of ya lines rymed,on the other hand i liked ya content n vocab but ya jus dint play off da punches well enough...i was'nt feeling ya closer either...srry dawg...no hate
mt ya verse could use a lil work but w/e ya ryme scheme was there along with personal/structure n flow...you basically took this in all cats.....nice verse vote/mistah tate http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138106 |
upp'in for some more votes.........................................
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upp'in.................
for more votes plez........ |
yea i gotta give this one to mistah better structure and shit
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^^^ shut the fuck up dick ryder.......
upp'in... |
Intensify effect won this to me cuz... Mistah tate's verse sounded nice because of the vocab and shit but it was filler a lot of the time.. the first bar was filler..
second bar was (no offense) a played punch.. intensify had more quantity and quality in punchlines.. flow was coo from both, no good personals or really good wordplay so i mainly judge from that.. Intensify effect i vote for you for more punchlines and disses that connected in the end.. keep it gangsta tho cuz and return the favor with a drop in my thread, thanx.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352 |
this is still goin on? jesus christ, uppin for more votes
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iight i voted 4 intensity dawgz he had nice punchez he had nice flowz.....i give it 2 him 4 da personals also d aotha dood didnt have as much but intensitys wuz nice NO HATe
Return da favor at ma link battle in sigz thnxs... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upp'in this old ass battle
lets end this..... |
upp'in this old ass battle
lets end this..... |
upp'in
this shit already come 2 people vote already |
ok tate on vocab and punches effecthad better flow disses and struture and a better set of personal dissses so he won in more areas here
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punches were way harder, and intensify effect your flow was off , good rhymes on both side, but mistah_tate used better what should i say "tatics" his personals were better , and more creative, i'll give u the A-town-stomp thing that made me laugh , but when it comes down to it M.T took it straight up and easy
vote//Mistah_Tate |
I think Mistah took this one ... he was batter i think... i liked his flow better and his lyrics were kool .... my vote goes to mistah tate!!
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