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marx 07-18-04 04:42 PM

Marx Vs Aznbl4ckrice
 
10-15 Lines
No Feedin Or Bitin
No Crew Votes

marx 07-18-04 04:45 PM

Yah Forgot 2 Say U Go First


Gud Luck !!

Aznbl4ckrice 07-18-04 04:53 PM

aight herez my verse...

Aight yo, this kid wanted ta battle me wit the name marx/
not his great of field, go play some french dartz/
u livin in london? go wit the spice gurlz and eat muffins/
Gave dis kid fake "weed", rlly poison ivey he be puffin/
wish he had a gurl, his sis come home he rdy to hump/
likez nasty shit, his sis stands over him and takes a dump/
His mouth wide open sayin "damn im so fuckin blazed"/
wutever u fake, u got bigger boobz then ur sis Double Az/
18? guess yo momma will let u join-in and make wavez/
friday nightz yo whole family haz a sex fest/
Annoyin me dawg, bein nothin but a fuckin pest/
especially sickenin me wit ur mothafuckin incest/
yo dawg...jus chill shoot yoself in the head and rest/
died in a pose, wit ya hands coverin ur big breasts/

aight thas it fo me...ne votez??

Aznbl4ckrice 07-18-04 05:14 PM

aight, imma wait for u to spit ur verse...imma go get some chinese food bro.

marx 07-18-04 05:20 PM

BOY IM ILLER THAN H.I.V MIXED WIT TOXIC WASTE
I'D LOVE 2 JACK OFF MY GUN AND WATCH IT CUM IN UR FACE
DA BULLET WILL LEAVE U HOLIER DAN UR LOCAL PASTOR
REMEMBER TO ASK UR GIRL WHOs DICK DISLOCATED HER JAW
BETWEEN U AND UR YOUR GIRL I MUST B CAUSIN FRICTION
NO SHE DONT WEAR LIP-GLOSS..... U JUST KISSED WHERE DICKS BIN
RHYMES RIP U UP AND SHAKE UP UR WHOLE FRAME
U REMIND ME VANILLA ICE.... BUT WITHOUT THE FAME
HOW YOUR MUMS DOING....I KNOW U NEVER KNEW UR DAD
WELL LOOKING AT DA WAY U RAP..... *SON* IM GLAD
U CANT WIN, U'LL LOSE AGAINST DIS FORCE
WE KNOW THIS SHITS GONNA HAPPEN LIKE A J-LO DIVORCE


VOTE MARX- LETS GET THIS CRACKIN!

Aznbl4ckrice 07-18-04 05:32 PM

aight les have some votez ppl...no haterz...jus honesty. =)

marx 07-18-04 05:39 PM

Yeah Lets Get Sum Votes On Dis

Good Battle Azn

Aznbl4ckrice 07-18-04 06:13 PM

yeh dawg, wuz good. no hate at all Lol =) but damn...ppl vote damnit Lol

Aznbl4ckrice 07-18-04 11:07 PM

How come every battle i do...theres rarely votez Lol...

Deliquint 07-18-04 11:21 PM

i vote marx cvause his shit actually had metaphores dat made sence so....

and yo do me too

deliquint vs. darrk

Aznbl4ckrice 07-19-04 07:00 AM

ppl keep votin so we can close dis battle aight dawgz

Mc DeaTh. 07-19-04 07:24 AM

aiight Weak battle and no good verses but i have to give it to Marx cause all AZN talked about was breasts so mah vote is

Marx

marx 07-19-04 06:05 PM

Yo People Vote On Dis Shit And Cum Wit Sum Valid Answers


Favours Will Be Returned

lyondreds 07-19-04 11:23 PM

marx i didnt get it, look for a new verse out of your rhyme book
this shit goes to azn

7*0*8* 07-19-04 11:55 PM

vote/Aznbl4ckrice jus cuz his shit was ok ( nasty as fuck) ut ok still it was good flow on some moments... i didnt like either of dem dat much but he had da betta verse of da 2...
return da favor plz....whether u like my vote or not.... it aint fair dat in order 2 get votes from ppl u have 2 vote 4 dem... and if u do dey rarely do it neway....

yo if u feel like it vote on my battle wit toxic plz!!! its on my sig yo.... hope u return da favor

Aznbl4ckrice 07-22-04 06:34 AM

uppin votez

Aznbl4ckrice 07-22-04 07:21 PM

uppin votez ta close dis shit

Aznbl4ckrice 07-23-04 11:06 AM

Uppin votez.........................................

KroNuz 07-23-04 11:15 AM

Punches- Not Very Strong But Marx (lol at lip gloss line)
Personals- Azn (london line)
Flow- Tie From Both
Wordplay- Tie equal
Metas- Niether
Multis- Niether
Structure- Azn Better formatted stronger punches woulda make it better
Originality- Marx Not as played lines ( fucking family n shit is played out azn)

Final Vote- Marx

amayze 07-23-04 04:52 PM

yo 2 me MARXS won diss battle
his flow was better n he changed it up
AZ stayed talkin bout da same incest jokes
v/MARXS

amayze 07-23-04 04:57 PM

oh yea almost 4got
vote 4 deez battles
amayze vs novakane
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749

murda-gram
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136506

2hard2lose
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487

forgotten flow
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031

peace

PoLiFicK 07-23-04 05:06 PM

Ok Imma Give This To Mrx But Marx"GunPlay" You Need To Use Actuall Personals And Not Stuff Like Ill Shott You In the Face Come On Now..
Both Of You Need Work On Creativity Punches And personals...Also Dont Talk About Moms Unless Its 4 A Good Cost Or Family Members Unless 4 Good Cost Like Dont Do..

wish he had a gurl, his sis come home he rdy to hump/
likez nasty shit, his sis stands over him and takes a dump/

^^ Weak

REMEMBER TO ASK UR GIRL WHOs DICK DISLOCATED HER JAW

^^^ Weak And Nuttin You Had Rhymed With It...

U CANT WIN, U'LL LOSE AGAINST DIS FORCE
WE KNOW THIS SHITS GONNA HAPPEN LIKE A J-LO DIVORCE

That Was Pretty Nice But Even Out our Linez Couldve Done

You Like Army Football..Because Losing Is Your Quired Force....
WE KNOW THIS SHITS GONNA HAPPEN LIKE A J-LO DIVORCE....

^^^ Ok Get Creative...

But Winner-Marx

marx 07-26-04 06:14 PM

Yo Lets Close Dis Giv A Vote



Marx Is The Marxmen In Da Dark
They Claim Dey Spit Fire But Never Had Da Spark!

40oz 08-01-04 03:21 AM

Yo, this is a one sided battle, marx has this in all catagories, better wordplay, punches. No disrespect, AZN, you got alot of potential but I think you should try to battle someone...how do I say this...a little less refined.. maybe someone a little less experienced. Good battle though.


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