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*The~Star* 07-18-04 07:14 PM

KOOL COL-B{vs}*The~Star* (Punchline)
 
1 bar
no d/r

Let's go

KOOL COL-B 07-18-04 07:18 PM

if u come hard az a rock, i'll smoke u at a CRACK HOUSE/
your already frontin (front-in) so u best not BACK-OUT/

if u come hard az a rock, a rock of crack, ill smoke u, that could meen ill kill u or smoke a rock of crack, anywayz, GO!! good luck, werd

High-Dro 07-18-04 07:32 PM

i liked that shit mayn... i gotta wait and see the otha dudes b4 i vote and shot but werd up and peace out piiiiiiiiiimp

*The~Star* 07-18-04 08:41 PM

Yo my bad 4 the wait......

Got Kool in ya name,cuz you know you can’t spit flames
Got hit suddenly like cool breeze,you froze,no victory you proclaim


Came weak...didn't wanna keep him waiting....Let the votes begin

KOOL COL-B 07-18-04 08:50 PM

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!tampons!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KOOL COL-B 07-18-04 10:09 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by KOOL COL-B
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!tampons!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


i agree with him

Darrk 07-18-04 10:42 PM

Was a SHort Battle Read both verses wasn't feeeling Neither
But i gotta vote on Star Cause of the first Line he had, was a good punch line

V/ The STar

Morphix 07-18-04 11:13 PM

Hard choice here, I don't know. They were both good, but I gotta go with KOOL cause hiz shit cracks me up

VOTE: KOOL COL-B

High-Dro 07-18-04 11:42 PM

i liked kool's better cuz it had 2 punchlines in it...peaaaace

High-Dro 07-18-04 11:45 PM

kool'z punches were betta....i enjoyed it...star's was ok but i think kool'z wuz more betta

schema 07-18-04 11:50 PM

kools shit hit hard....wording in stars was fucked in second bar and it hit weak i thought

hit this up honest http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135830

Drastic 07-19-04 12:01 AM

both punches were good it just seemed to me that stars hit harder so my vote goes to star

*The~Star* 07-19-04 02:52 PM

U P P I N

Play-toh 07-19-04 02:59 PM

my vote goes to the star...it's was just a good comeback...and had more of a punch...the other kids wasn't really a punch all he said was you should leave...but he did have good wording...

hit up the midturn battle in my sig please...

Play-toh 07-19-04 03:01 PM

sorry please use this one...

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=135706&page=2
vs. dareturn

G 07-19-04 03:03 PM

Stars punch was harder. I wasnt really feeling kools. She had a personal in it too. Star takes this.

Vote - Star

Vote on this:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135031

T West 07-19-04 03:04 PM

if u come hard az a rock, i'll smoke u at a CRACK HOUSE/
your already frontin (front-in) so u best not BACK-OUT/
^no personal...could be directed at anybody. Horrible for a punchline battle.

Got Kool in ya name,cuz you know you can’t spit flames
Got hit suddenly like cool breeze,you froze,no victory you proclaim
^Atleast there is a personal here...which shows that the punchline is directly targetted for his opponent.

Overall: A personal punchline is better than just a randomly thrown punchline in a battle....personals are basically beefed up punchlines...and Star made a play off of Kool's name...while Kool just dropped a punchline.

v/ - The Star...harder hitting...


Please return the favour and drop an honest vote on one of the battles in my signature please. I took the time to vote on this, you can take the time to vote on mine.Thank You.

Know-Gimix 07-19-04 04:08 PM

Ima vote star in this one just cuz col-b's punch wasn't really directed hard-- you said you'd smoke a crack rock more or less and that aint cool--- Star ur first line was decent but the punch could have hit harder.... vote star.


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