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Darrk 07-18-04 09:41 PM

Darrk Vs delinquint
 
Go ahead homie

Desipher 07-18-04 09:43 PM

When This Battle Is Over Vote On Da Prodigy Vs Schema And I'll Return The Favor On This

SLUGGA 07-18-04 09:46 PM

And Vote On Slugga Vs Da Prodigy
Slugga Vs Hi-c
Ill Return Da Favor

Deliquint 07-18-04 09:52 PM

im completely-ready, to defeat-you-wit-a-machete/
like freddy, krooger, ima run up in ya dreams, and hit you wit the steady-looger/

my game-tite, like divided blow-jobs i'll have ya brain-sliced/
may-invite, other homies to get mirked, if they jus like you and cant spell ya own name-right/(darrk-dark)

understand im not a joker, but i do confuse you wit a comedian/
catch a beating-man, you couldnt spit hot shit wit ya mouth wit heated feces-crammed/

your attracted-to-this, this faggot-is/
not allowed in the rap-game, like sexist men in a room wit women-activists/

im back-in-this, not restin and quickly investin/
money, in ya death, so i can cut you open and stomp ya intestines/

wait-till-u-die, elton got this fairy-to-ride/
im bout to make you go down, like mary-j-blige/(had a song called "going down")

holla man

Darrk 07-18-04 10:21 PM

Loaded CLips, hollow points Dat's my Game
DIs aint no dream it's real you'll die with pain
I'll let u come wit yo Machete n i'll juss aim
Catch Slugs thur yo mouth, yo eyes, n Brains

Soo Stick to yo Clothes and ice
I'm Darrk Sickest mutha fucka since Obie trice
My mind twists and turn's
n the Darrk i stand while i Load it n Burn
Leaving enemies on the floor Helpless in death
SPitting blood up n with whole's thur there chest
SO when u come down to Da dirty south make sure u wear a vest

Deliquint 07-18-04 10:28 PM

aight

lets ghet some votes yall

holla man lets get it poppin

Mc DeaTh. 07-18-04 10:38 PM

Flow: Darrk
Punches: Darrk
Multies: Delinquit
Vocab: Delinquit
Del: ur verse was good i likes ur multies and ur flow
Darrk: i likes ur verse alot, ur flow was good and i liked the punches


v/ Delinquit
Return the favour on Me vs Schema not Me vs VA cuz its closed

schema 07-18-04 10:42 PM

Deliquint

im completely-ready, to defeat-you-wit-a-machete/
like freddy, krooger, ima run up in ya dreams, and hit you wit the steady-looger/
->>ok opener

my game-tite, like divided blow-jobs i'll have ya brain-sliced/
may-invite, other homies to get mirked, if they jus like you and cant spell ya own name-right/(darrk-dark)
->>end of second line way stretched

understand im not a joker, but i do confuse you wit a comedian/
catch a beating-man, you couldnt spit hot shit wit ya mouth wit heated feces-crammed/
->>wording is fucked....it comes out forced when you say it

your attracted-to-this, this faggot-is/
not allowed in the rap-game, like sexist men in a room wit women-activists/
->>doesnt hit hard and way stretched

im back-in-this, not restin and quickly investin/
money, in ya death, so i can cut you open and stomp ya intestines/
->>its ok i was kinda feelin it

wait-till-u-die, elton got this fairy-to-ride/
im bout to make you go down, like mary-j-blige/(had a song called "going down")
->>pretty cool closer



Darrk

Loaded CLips, hollow points Dat's my Game
DIs aint no dream it's real you'll die with pain
->>guns in a text again? PLAYED

I'll let u come wit yo Machete n i'll juss aim
Catch Slugs thur yo mouth, yo eyes, n Brains
->>^^^

Soo Stick to yo Clothes and ice
I'm Darrk Sickest mutha fucka since Obie trice
->>its alright

My mind twists and turn's
n the Darrk i stand while i Load it n Burn
->>didnt connect

Leaving enemies on the floor Helpless in death
SPitting blood up n with whole's thur there chest
SO when u come down to Da dirty south make sure u wear a vest
->>weak closer

Deliquint took it easy he had some creativity...Darrk you gotta be creative you cant talk about guns in text it just doesnt work.

v/Deliquint

schema 07-18-04 10:44 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135830 hit mine up

Deliquint 07-19-04 12:11 AM

lookin for votes

hollla atcha boy nah mean







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G_$peed 07-21-04 12:54 PM

del cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooo

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Deliquint 07-21-04 03:31 PM

yo who is you?

w/e yo needing votes in this and drop ya shit here and ill return the favor promise

Scriptive 07-21-04 04:48 PM

yo deliquint tooj this... ive seen some of your battles n your shit is hot... dark you did good but deliquint took you to school no hate....... peace...

Deliquint 07-21-04 04:57 PM

aight uppin one last vote homeboyz
and i will return the favor holla

Deliquint 08-17-04 11:12 PM

uppin the last votes
'
com on yall vboter

this battle been up foever

CODEE 08-17-04 11:24 PM

Delinquint had real nice flow and real nice punchlines that was nice
uppin 4 votes
CODEE vs. Infallible
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142890

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Vicious Beast 08-22-04 11:04 AM

Was pretty close.... but I didn't like the fact that Darrk had a few broken lines.. Both were hittin' fairly hard, both had decent flow and structure.. I think ya'll could've came a little harder in those areas.. Was hard to call, but I'ma give this one to Deliquint... he was a little bit more consistant, and that little bit makes a huge difference in a close battle.. much respect to both of ya'll tho..

v/Deliquint

V0cab 08-22-04 11:26 AM

awwww HELL NAH DIS NIGGA BE BITING HIS LINES FROM RAP DOGS

Also Known. 08-23-04 07:50 PM

easy win for deliquint he had word play multies and metas the other guy talked about how he wqas gonna shoot him i hope you realize this is the internet and that if you shoot your screen it isnt gona come out of his screen its just gona fuck up your monitor plus your rhymes were to basic brain pain come on now elevate


v/deliquint


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