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!riff Raff! Vs Knok-sioz
10 Line Battle Due In One Hour Usual House Rules Good Luck |
aiight i gotta leave work now so ima drop now....
Im packin so much heat riffs sweatin~like~a~bitch... Im rappin so unique the freaks gettin~beat~ta~shit... Once i upload, this ho's response is already~known... But RBC knows his fuckin ass is cum~tan~toned.... You lost your riff so you can't~be~venomous~no~more... Drag his ass to tha rookie camp an beat~a~lesson~into~this~whore.... Your a pussy bitch, so you know you can't CUM~off~better.... Your wearin a vest? thats ok because my rhymes~hack~and~sever... I slit~riffs an blast~raffs your dead now son.... Leave you blood stained like a month old tampon... |
If I woulda known you were comin that hard I woulda let ya think 4 an extra hour
I physically felt ya rhymes dawg, thats why im cleanin my self off in the shower me battlin a newbie like you is like child abuse its just not right but then they see skill like urs and they let that law slide brutally beating you for a victory, most will say im a dick but im truley being nice by deciding to let you keep your pink slip So get out the door quick, and stay down u lucky i dont know where u live other wise I woulda emberassed u wit ya whole town sorry for posting late ur verse grabbed my shoulders but it stopped just had to take a couple of extra minutes to brush my shoulders off |
Ok we need votes on this battle plz homiez...... nice verse too riff
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Aiight can we plz get some votes on here? shame this battle was good an its gettin slept on
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AIIGHT RIFF RAFF TOOK THIS
nice flow by knok.but punches def riff raff BOTH JUS ELEVATE.......vocab was ok by both,,i think knok had gudmulties PLZ RETURN THA FAV.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136222 |
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multies:Knox vocab:Knox flow:Riff finishers:Knox final vote:Knox yo vote on mah battles delinquint vs. dfrost delinquint vs. big rob |
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ok very close battle if riff tried he coulda took it by a long shot i gotta give it too riff his rymes hit harder and better even though i seen him do better
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KNOK-SIOZ
Im packin so much heat riffs sweatin~like~a~bitch... Im rappin so unique the freaks gettin~beat~ta~shit... struggled to make it rhyme fucked the idea up 4/10 Once i upload, this ho's response is already~known... But RBC knows his fuckin ass is cum~tan~toned.... not bad 4/10 You lost your riff so you can't~be~venomous~no~more... Drag his ass to tha rookie camp an beat~a~lesson~into~this~whore.... personal decent 6/10 Your a pussy bitch, so you know you can't CUM~off~better.... Your wearin a vest? thats ok because my rhymes~hack~and~sever... best so far 7/10 I slit~riffs an blast~raffs your dead now son.... Leave you blood stained like a month old tampon... didnt feel the punch 4/10 25/50 5/10 not bad not good had some punches but they were weak used the name thats about it !RIFF RAFF! If I woulda known you were comin that hard I woulda let ya think 4 an extra hour I physically felt ya rhymes dawg, thats why im cleanin my self off in the shower that was shit 3/10 me battlin a newbie like you is like child abuse its just not right but then they see skill like urs and they let that law slide nice good punch my favorite 7/10 brutally beating you for a victory, most will say im a dick but im truley being nice by deciding to let you keep your pink slip ok 5/10 So get out the door quick, and stay down u lucky i dont know where u live other wise I woulda emberassed u wit ya whole town didnt feel it 4/10 sorry for posting late ur verse grabbed my shoulders but it stopped just had to take a couple of extra minutes to brush my shoulders off nice ending 7/10 26/50 5.2/10 good punches not enough of em though shit lines fucked the verse up but i konw you can do much better from my battle with you its close shit my vote goes 2 riff raff for using harder punches with respect for both of you hit my battles up safe peace |
Aiight thanks for the honest feed dawgs ima elevate off of this lol.....
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yo knok when you get online pm me |
uppij this yet again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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where the hell is all you voters at?
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lol... ok...
BreakDown Knox-Sioz-You used a "cum" line twice.... anyway your verse was ok, punches were there but didnt hit very hard, structure was ok, but yet agian, - - - doesnt make a multi n doesnt make it rhyme better... Flow was ok, originality wasnt there, and metaz no..... Overal Ok Verse.... !Riff Raff!- Your Punches hit harder, and where more original thats Knok'z, Structure Was Good, And Flow Decent To Lead To a Punch... No Metaz Or Multis, Wordplay as Alright..... But Overal Good Verse BreakDown II Punches- Riff Personals- Not Many So Niether Flow- Tie Wordplay- Riff Structure-Riff Metaz- Niether Multis- Knok Originality- Tie Final Vote------ !RiffRaff! |
Both Structures were off, but i give it to Knok-sioz and Flow: Riff!
Wordplay: Both but Knok's lines "cum-tan-toned" were funny Metaz: neither of you two I liked how Knok's flowed easily and was funny, but i Riff Raff had sum punches outta nowhere.. so i give my vote to Riff Raff! Close battle y'all keep up the work! this is fiya ~wun~ |
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