COM Vs Calamity
 

10 lines - 20 mins from check in.. this is my check in
House Rules.. No crew votes, D/R votes..
Lets go..

Check in...............................................

I'm the master, I'll surpass ya and if you think that shit will bother me...
Watch me change ya mind faster... than an on the spot lobotomy...
A fucking victim of sodomy...so go ahead and ditch ya plan...
Because I'll leave this faggot gutted.... like a hetro strippergram..
Your going down, take more chances... it doesnt matter what my schedule be
I'm gonna be labeled a paodophile for taking this kid out regularly..
I heard of you faggot....I heard its not girls that you spy
So how the fuck you gonna get past me?... when you're allready bi?
Are you ready to die?... your rhymes are obseleet I'm yawning
I'll hang this bitch out to dry.........
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.......................................... like his bedsheets in the morning.....

I know how much you love my feedback ;)

Opener was coo... pedophile line was ok, past me/bi was ok... closer eh. Not bad for 20 minutes.



So yeah... elevate on your wording... work on worrying more about well developed metas and relevent wordplay. I mean.. you already had CAPCOM... that easily goes to: cap COM ... not to mention COM is in genesis... cap COM made games for genesis... there were places to go with that.. but you didn't do much with it.

Oh right... v/ com.

Vote/Com

why would you post that and no explination.. ^annoying shit

Because you used a brain storm line.

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Vote Fuckas............................................ ..

Please Vote You Penis Sucking Moluscs Muthafuckas

Vote You Fucking Morons>.... Jesus This Site Sucks Balls At Voting









Stop Fucking Sleeping

if you look and dont vote... i want a pink slip battle....

this is fucking pointless. someone just close this shit..... fucking pathetic

uppin this poop

Vote - COM

had much better punches and wittier
um.
Calamity punches didn't hit as hard i felt he could have been wittier - simple wordplay not much..

i think your having problems with voting because this site has a lot of d/r's and they probably think o shit COM is winnin it might look a lil suspicious if i vote for calamity but you kno what wtf do i kno? I'm 0-2 and i will keep my mouth closed and let you and mr w.rite do the job..Original isnt as bad as voting is on here

o yes

DIE

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if that is true... then this site sucks balls.. you hear me? BALLS


and no... i shan't die

yea.. but what can you do eh ?.. uppin this ish... leave links and stuff like that.. yea im almost giving up on uppin any battle period lol..

Cementing ya mic is the only way you get To Rock it..
and samplin gunshots on Songs only way they poppin..
not hard hitting
im flying solo, while you still stuck in back cock pits..
asked him to cut a track, muphucka went to choppin'..
didnt understand punch
aint seen you in a while, so im skeptical on how u dissin..
I bring flows of holy men, leave you kneed like a Christian..
second is soso
Callin out to the best, when you not worthy of scorn..
Choppin ya skull open in lighting, to Give u a Brain storm..
blah not hard hitting soso
You dont bring heat, Waves of wisdom leaves him calm..
I got more Super powers, than Characters from CAPCOM..
decent personal

I'm the master, I'll surpass ya and if you think that shit will bother me...
Watch me change ya mind faster... than an on the spot lobotomy...
nice but a lil stretched
A fucking victim of sodomy...so go ahead and ditch ya plan...
Because I'll leave this faggot gutted.... like a hetro strippergram..
nice sims but not a good punch
Your going down, take more chances... it doesnt matter what my schedule be
I'm gonna be labeled a paodophile for taking this kid out regularly..
lmao nice punch
I heard of you faggot....I heard its not girls that you spy
So how the fuck you gonna get past me?... when you're allready bi?
this was a dope line hard hitting
Are you ready to die?... your rhymes are obseleet I'm yawning
I'll hang this bitch out to dry.........
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.......................................... like his bedsheets in the morning.....
lol nice closer but setup could be better


vote com


http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...985#post1441985

i would vote but me an calamity in tha same crew

but u could vote on me an his battle...

ok COM took this pretty easy his punches were better and wittier.opener was ok but Closer had me :roll:.
Calamity tha verse was a catastrify.structure was God awfull dont right text like that unless its an Open Mic.punches were pretty weak.flow was Snore.

so Vote Com.
pz.

Calamity - i dont like your style and structure, it makes me feel like im reading a poem rather than a battle verse. most of your lines were ok, nothin really special. flow was ok. no really stand out punches or anything, good but not great.

Com - structre is great and easy to read and understand. your flow is good, some nice punches and personals here and there. pretty much flawless as your verses have become known to be.

Punches - Com
Flow - Com
Structure - Com
Personals - Com
Everything else - com

i just felt com won this hands down

V/ Com

Opener-COM
Closer-Tie
Punches-Com
Personals- Calamity..for the namplay in his closer
Flow & Structure-Calamity
Meta's-COM...some of Calamity's were played
Wordplay- Tie

Overall-COM...came harder...2 pretty good versus but COM took the 'W'