Gingerbread Man Vs. Datruth29
 

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Mic Check.......1,2........1,2.........Gingerbread up in 'dis bitch.

"Run as fast as you can" "Ginger", my oven's Waitin On Yo Entrance
I'll rap circles around u, leave u spinning like a Dredle On A Thin Dish
U Couldn't drop no "Smart Shit" if it came out the ass of Einstien
My Shine Blinds Guys, point a knife at yo head, stab yo Mind's Eye
You fell of the world like a Merry-go, Now I Own Yo Soul
U think u gettin "down n dirty", yet, dug a depper Hole than a Mole
Fuckin Newb, you ain't got no Fuckin Juice, hip hop's Fuckin U
With these slugs i'm not gay, but i'll put something "hard" Up IN U
So now U no how it feels to lyrically get yo Ass Whipped
Trying to overthrow my kingdom? U couldn't overthrow a Matress .....Weaklin

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Yo, your public profile lists your job as fucking 'money getter'
I'm about to drive your ass insane like an itchy Christmas sweater.
Your rhymes are weak, uninspired, paint-by-numbers to the letter
Gingerbread in the fuckin' house; with you Mom's there is no better.
I'm set to flip the script on you, like a metaphoric giant
Rapin' fronters in the dome like the lyrical Kobe Bryant.
You's a fag, 29, a pussy. Go apply your Mom's cosmetics
Straight out of the Bay, home of the queers, and, ummm... the Oak Athletics.
It's not your fault that yous from Oak-town, but you'll get your just desserts
You can't catch me, I'm the Gingerbread Man! Sorry, dawg....DaTruth Hurts.

peace.

^And yes, San Francisco has a large Fag Population, but not Oakland.. it's too ghetto

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ok hittin it up... truth, i liked some of your shit, the way you used his name for wordplay was pretty hot, your punches werent that bad, same with vocab, it was a good verse overall. i think gingerbread's was a little better though, he did lots of personals on different aspects, and his vocab seemed a little more elevated. gingerbread you gotta work on closers a little more though..truth did get you on that one. still,

vote- gingerbread

DAMNIT make an edit function i fuckin swear, looks like im freepostin..anyways i forgot to say please return the fave on the battle in my sig

Lmao.. Ya'll Don't No How To Vote.. I Thought That I Had This Hands Down.. I Actually Had Punchlines.. As Far As Vocab, I Don't See One Scholarly Word.. What Are You Speakingt Of.. Your Opinion Tho

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Tight battle...both had good punches but gingerbread overplayed the gay shit, which is somethin that i cant stand to see..im givin this one to da truth..return the favor in my sig

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da truth:U Couldn't drop no "Smart Shit" if it came out the ass of Einstien
My Shine Blinds Guys, point a knife at yo head, stab yo Mind's Eye

Ging:I'm set to flip the script on you, like a metaphoric giant
Rapin' fronters in the dome like the lyrical Kobe Bryant

favorite lines byu yall

but overall i have to give it to gingerbread cause he gave a good effort in this battle

holla

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Damn I dunno how yall can vote for Gingerbread. His shit was played out and ordinary. Talkin bout his mom is kinda old dogg. Truth had creativity in his rhymes. He came with hard punches and good wordplay and metas that were hittin hard. Truth wins this hands down.

Vote-Truth

Vote on these:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136079

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135031

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136136

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can we get some more vote pleas ya'll

ya'll over here talkn bout which city is better, go to SAC, and the arguement'll be all over, SAC's better

but naw, on da 4 real tip-both these battles was choppy, the all around flow was weak, some shit wouldve been hard, but they wasnt worded right. imma give this to gingerbread man(gonna get a lot of easy disses for that name), cause his structure and rhyming was better then datruth29, and when he came in his flow caught my attention, when i was fallin asleep, but he really woke me up on that last line "You can't catch me, I'm the Gingerbread Man! Sorry, dawg....DaTruth Hurts"-that was clean

v/gingerbread man

I Disagree, Where Do Ya'll Heads Be? U Didn't Like Any Of My Punchlines?

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Datruth took this hands down with actual good wordplay and similes and shit.
Gingerbread you had a good verse,but your wordplays werent as complex as Datruth.I liked your last line when you said: datruth hurts and bla.good line.work on making better wordplays and youll be good.but my vote goes to datruth.

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Datruth: Nice wordplay, good structure and flow. Hittin punches and st8 multi's. Could of had a better opener. I've been tryin to figure out what oven do u have for him to run into. Im not diggin dat line. Ok ending and overall a decent verse.

GingerB: Flow and structure was there with some hard hittin punhes. Personals were on point. Ok opener and a nice closing. I like how u told him da truth hurts.

Overall: The battle was a tight one. You both brought ur game to da table. Keep at it and always try to elevate.

But my vote goes to da GBM

hit my battle up....http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137344

vote on da prodigy vs troubledinocense an i'll return the favor

coz you're an idiot that doesn't get punchlines.. the gingerbread man, ended up getting baked in an oven.. dummy

this wuz close as hell...but ima give it 2 ginger cuz he had better personals

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