T West [vs] Datruth29
 

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Due 30 minutes after we both check-in

yo....

U'r whack and i'mma Tell It to The World
I see the "Bitch in you", like U was Preagnant Wit A Girl
I Disregard yo Welfare, 4th degree burns heat u like Hell's Fair
Lyrically injure U, but it's coo coz Canada has free Health Care
I'm pretty dope next to you, in the B.C no Other is Better
I'm sick on the mic, while you're just simply "Under The Weather"
Yet I Still "Storm", hardcore like Real Porn, I Kill Sworms
U try to get in my rhyme palace but the gate's locked wit Steel Doors
I'm bombin U, U need ta Cover, another Geek gets Smothered
The End: P.S, Don't be offended, my "hate is blind" like Stevie Wonder

Explainations.. just in case anyone was confused

Line 4: he's from Canada

Line 5: B.C stands for British Columbia, I was claiming that he's weak because he is from Canada, and I'm better than the best where he is from

Sry i'm late man...friend needed me at the last minute...you can have me dq'ed if u want...but thats a bitch move straight up....do what you feel you want...


You contradictin' fuck! stop bitin' things you do...
You ain't Da Truth when there's 28 people before you!
"Da"...so original...that a things you made?
This must bea Hip-Hop Story...cuz ur actions r' play'd!
The truth i'll change, with this K.O i'm applyin'
Knock Out this wack kid, leave him on the ground lyin'
Lil' wimp! you ain't ill...fuck this shit you've heard...
He's from Oak-Land...so this kid is nuthin' but a lil herb!
Internet nerd, always on ur computer for real...
You spend more time on-line than Shaquille O'Neal!

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uh, my votes goin to datruth like mad, he got t-west in every single way, his punches hit way harder, his vocab was better, he had multi's all over the place and i didnt see any in t-west's, maybe one or two, but west's vocab was WAY played as shit, and datruth just totally won my vote wit his closer..by the way truth, next time dont explain ur shit unless people ask..just a tip

vote- datruth29

please return the favor in my battles that are in my sig

^how can u have played vocab? he beat me in every single way? He used B.C disses against me when i'm from Toronto! Toronto is in ontario...not B.C!

Get off his dick son.

That Confused Me Also, I Personally Don't Think That Hi-c Is A Good Judge.
He Apparently Believes What He Says Tho Because He Voted Against Me With That Same Excuse. It Seems As If His Vocabulary Is So Limited, That The Simplest Academic Word Impresses Him.. Yet, In The Above Battle Neither Of Us Threw Any Multie-syllabic, Or Scholarly Words.. But He's Not On My Dick..

And About Canada, I Had No Idea Where In Canada You Were From, I Assumed.
But This Was An Okay Battle Tho..

^good looks man...Good to see some cats are actually on the real here...lol...but my profile says Toronto tho...just like urs says Oakland...

oh yea, you're right, i'm stupid.. It was still a diss tho

lol yeah....here's a honest fukkin vote yo im returnin t west favor u know

opener-truth...dat was punchline rite there it was betta than dude's whole verse lol
structure- umm a tie
punchlines-truth..hands down
creativity-truth...west had nun
multis-nun
personals-truth oded
finisher-truth
enjoyed-truth he won in every catagorie...t west u dont have no ryhme scheme ehut so eva it just look like u tryna da amke ya shit look neat insetad of battlin and datz y u lost str8 up im not a hater but niggaz dont vote how they rap true story

my vote-truth..

Overall - I think T West just hit harder. Had a rough start but became better through the middle.

V/T West

I'll remember to vote once I get enough posts. Hit the battle on my sig please.

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You are officially the biggest idiot that I have so far seen on this site. 1...nice hate vote since I showed em' ppl how shitty ur verse really was...2...Look Neat instead of battlin'?!? What the fuck are the personals in my verse for!?! all of the disses? Friggin' idiot. Go back and write pointless stretched multies and go and try and figure out what an actual battle is. THis site is friggin' retarded when it comes to battles.

This was a tough battle to judge
but overall
T west had harder punches , wordplay , and structure to his flow,

Da truth had some omk stuff but didnt word together right, and one of his lines didnt ryhem at all or maybe it was just me

From truths verse
U try to get in my rhyme palace but the gate's locked wit Steel Doors
I'm bombin U, U need ta Cover, another Geek gets Smothered
The End: P.S, Don't be offended, my "hate is blind" like Stevie Wonder
didnt like taht at all

VOte T West


hit up my battles

Damn dude, calm down.. yo ass complained on both of my votes.. the world isn't against you

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I ain't complainin' truth...If I see fair shit...then I won't oppose it...I just noe that dude is hate votin' cuz in his battle, ppl were on his dick...and i showed em' that his verse was crap...and u even admit that Hi-C is an idiot.

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T west ya structure was a lil off b but it dont really matter in this battle it wasent really that hot from the jumpoff
truth you had better structure and some better punches and you were hittin on the personals a lil bit but you need some metaphors and 2 elevate
Overall vote-T west
didnt need much structure 2 get this one b u had some nice punch lines jus up the personals and get some mettaphor and u will be good

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that was wierd

This was a pretty good battle. DaTruth came out strong with word play "U'r whack and i'mma Tell It to The World; I see the "Bitch in you", like U was Preagnant Wit A Girl" and embedded rhymes "Yet I Still "Storm", hardcore like Real Porn, I Kill Sworms". The one place he was lacking was in personal jabs which are at the heart of battles. T-West had a weaker structure, less word play, less metaphor, but he was strong in personal jabs. Overall, DaTruth wins this by a hair.

v/DaTruth

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Da Truth- Good Verse, Nice Flow To It, Punches Hit... Like Ya First Line.. Last Line Concept Was Played Though....

T West- Not Bad.... Good Punches N Personals....Flow Was Good... Both Tied With Good Structure... Seen Some Played Lines In Each Verse But Overal Not Bad....

Punches- Da Truth
Personals- T West
Flow- Da Truth
Metaz- Niether
Wordplay- T West
Structure- Da Truth
Originality- Tie
Multis- Niether...

Final Vote-- Da Truth... Nice Battle....

Return Favor N Vote Fairly...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137169

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i aint gonna vote on this.maybe later cuz im too lazy but i read the verses..and i think t-west had better Structure..but words Like Wimp and lil..isnt really hard of a diss......your punches were hitting ok..structure was the best thing about ur verse.....ur personals...were okkk..nothing really wuld hurt that much......ur vocab was..aiight...your flow was pretty good...and i didnt really see any multi's maybe about one...

da truth:....although you dissed up canada ur verse was sick..only thing you should change is the way you spell things,..spell them proper..maybe in audio its aiight..but it makes u look stupid in text...but it was sick...u had good multi's...good punches..and good personals....im feelin ur verse alot.....ur vocab was pretty sick too..ur flow was ill the multi's just made iit even hotter..ur structure was aiight..but t-west's was better...decent battle

vote: da truth


....oh well i guess i voted lOL