Mephisto vs. Golden shellz (punchline)
 

1 bar
no crew
no dr
no hatin
u spit 1st

aight wuteva u didnt mention a punchline....


Kid u jumped into this site like Wayne Brady lookin for talent,
lost twice, named after a white guy is why ur punches are off balance,

explanation.
007 golden eye, Pierce brosnan = WHITE

u say u sac towns finest like mother goose u spekin fables
an embarrasment the kings wouldn't even sign u to a record label

u wanna have a regular battle?

first off no juss leave it...and anyways you posted fake punches i never said i was sactowns finest yet you claim i did...and second the kings DONT sign record labels...haha

lets get some votes

i mean they wouldnt sign u if they did
iight fuck it ur loss

its iight dont get mad

ur the one cussin...

uppin 4 votes

uppin cmon people vote...this has been going on almost three days and not one vote...

i give it 2 SHELLZ
his punch hit a lil
harder n it was funny
v/SHELLZ
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peace

Vote mephisto... more orignal... and hit harder....

I gotta give dis joint 2 shellz cuz plain an simp his punch jus hit harder. Both dropz was god but shellz was easier 2 get.

v/Shellz

vote honestly on dis battle

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Mephisto g0t dis one....his punch was m0re complicated and w0uld take da slow person time to think on it....so yeah he gets my vote...kuz utha dudes was lame and basic...needed no thinkin lol

v/Mephisto

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Kid u jumped into this site like Wayne Brady lookin for talent,
lost twice, named after a white guy is why ur punches are off balance,
^^ the first line was preety decent set up line,
2ed line just aint hit that hard thou u should of focus more on being more creative with ya hit...

u say u sac towns finest like mother goose u spekin fables
an embarrasment the kings wouldn't even sign u to a record label
^^ this was preety weak i thought and aint hit hard at all, u'r set up line was weak as-well i thought u should of tryed harder...

vote: Mephisto

P.S copy and paste one of the links in my sig and return the favor of a vote plez thanks...... or even look for any of my battles plez thanks alot...

Shellz got it cuz his punch hit harder as far as the personal in it that was good too.. both could've came harder but that goes with out sayin for all rappers at one time or anotha mephisto seems like you was ready for a full battle and had to key a punch out...caught off gaurd maybe...but your personal attempt was aight sorta seemed like you was strechin to make it though...
Stay up both
vote shellz

g shellz cuz he rap like a true g and harder punchs

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mephisto got this one cuz his was a harder punchline and thats all there is to it.shellz urs was alright wulda been better if the sac town part was true and if the kings didnt play ball. v/mephisto
need some HONEST votes in the sig...

1 bar
so i liked shellz bar better, wasnt good but better than that wayne brady
i would suggest 4 punchline battles at least3 bars so voters can get an idea of ya punchline capability
cuz no1 should lose a battle 4 1 line
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