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RapBurn vs. Deliquint
5-7 bars no hate/crew-votes and no feeding
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o and u got 15 mins after check-in sorry i didnt add that to much of in a hurry gl hf may the best rapper win
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yo since you didnt add that shit and i made the call-out i dont have to have it in 15 mi9n so heres mah shit
~im rippin-free, of all bitches wit the artillery~ ~your best-be, to be like Elvis Presley, and leave the vicinity~ ~delinquint poisenous like Toxzide, you cant see from the glock's-side~ ~dont read mah rhymes to many times, fumes evolve on you like carbon-minoxzide~ ~this boss-gotcha, since your burned(his name) i wouldnt bother~ ~got this bastard running, like a child who doesnt wanna see his lost-father~ ~remember i'll have ya ligaments severed, head crashes~ ~into the wall like ya sig, and ill start clappin more than gospel-masses~ ~laugh-and-turn, say fuck you then blast-what-you-earn~ thinkin you hot, but i got so much fire i will give a 3rd degree rap burn~ (his name is rap burn) |
Ok u did make the call out but here..
My rymes are like a dagger with a jagged edge// stab u in the head rather ur a fag or les// I aint no joke I'll say it once again// And if I get provoked there'll be knuckles on your chin// Some people never learn// Borrowin rymes from me you might regret it// For one I ain't no bank and you got shitty credit// As soon as I get paid they're comin' out the woodwork// Take your ass and get a job like you should jerk// So go sign up for mickey d's// cause these rymes aint doin it got ur mom sayin boy plz!~get a job// Unless you're livin where the trash is// But you're not so find another spot where the cash is// |
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Not even judgin anything else...Rapburn your flow and structure was so fuckin whack
Deliquint has my vote |
My rymes are like a dagger with a jagged edge//
stab u in the head rather ur a fag or les// ^Recycled |
Yeah its called from an eminem verse,,,,,,
Off one of his old songs,,,,,, |
rapburns flow wasnt that good but then again neither was delinquints, anyways delinquint came harder like mad and his vocab was better, plus rapburn fuckin bit off criminal by eminem and that just fuckin pisses me off man..fuckin shit, my vote goes to delinquint learn your fuckin lesson next time rapburn
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aight uppin more votes
holla yall com on vote! |
D takes this easy. He has a good poetic rhyme scheme that flows ta perfection. I dunno about rapburns though. His shit was weak and got kinda borin cuz it was ordinary as hell. D takes it with harder punches, good vocab and metas.
Vote-Deliquint Vote on these: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136079 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136136 |
uppin on this battle
come on yall vote holla back |
Deliquint you took this due to some ill wordplay and a big bite by your opponent. give him a pat on the back for sealin ya victory
vote: Deliquent |
yo uppin for
the last motherufkcin vote i will help your battlses out come on 1 |
deliquint had the better flow i think so he gets my vote. he hit harder and had a slightly better structure. but other dudue tryed to so nice try.
yo return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135995 ~one xplicit |
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