Mimesis vs. hotshh!
 

aight motherfucker...

10 lines
no biting
no crew/hate votes
no dickriding

You spit first, as u werent clear on when ud be able to post
I'll post right after i see that uve dropped

Fuck You.

In.

Post whenever you want, I will follow.

Try and be done soon though.

Check Some Battles
And Vote And Ill Return Da Favor

Nigga i will post when i feel good and ready you fuck face
I know you have five "votes" lined up so i am in no rush and if you dont like it you spit first
motherfucker

Monday night 16 lines not 10 this is personal no crew votes means YOU, i know you got the hardwood classics, i got me, so lets be fair

You can post whenever you want. I'm posting after you drop. So, if you post on Monday night, and im not online. Ill post Tuesday. I am by NO means agreeing to blind spits.

And the line limit stays at 10. If you just ignore this post, and post 16 lines, I will DQ you, So Dont Waste My Time.

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hotshh
 

aiight im here
you was scared for 16, heres 10

read this twice


Fuck ya intellect,dissect ya dialect,and disrespect
Ur whole set,dislocate ya neck with 1 chin check
Caution,deploy an destroy,missiles neva miss 2 connect
Kill ya fiscal attempt,u fizzle,Mim"ll die a miserable death

You nonvenomous snake,kicked out ya clique,2 feminine
Only cause Eminem was taken,u named ya self Memisis
Ur sig insults wiggas,u couldnt make da cut wit scissors

Mim disapear like magicians witches warlocks an wizards
Ill make ya avator a tomsbtone and a hearse
Mimesis'll go blind after i post this verse
Explain: if you so nice why you never spit first??????

5th line he says he left his clique they probably kicked him out for fakeness.Put da name Eminem and Mimesis together an its close enough plus he is a self proclaimed Em fan and he even patterns his style similar, check for yourself. His only weapon is bio disses. And that devilish character is gay.he's the first to get on your avators,sig, and location but he lives in phoenix. nuff said! Last bar says im killing em so put a tombstone instead of an avator. check his battles recent and past. he never goes 1st. never blind spits. always after you. he was too scared for 16 lines and said he'd DQ me if i went over, that's not a textcee, that a punk. win or lose ill set up a rematch with MY rules if ya aint scared of dropping 2nd. Last thing read the capitol letter of 1st word in each sentence from top to bottem. ill call you mime cause no matter what you say, you aint saying nothing.

Now that u posted that worthless paragraph...and ur shit ass verse...Im forced to expose you for using some fake personals...

1. I have spit first before...Right Here to be exact. And its not like i just did that, check the date where i posted. It was like 3 days ago.

2. How is Mimesis even close to Eminem. Eminem has 0 's' in his name. I have 2. So that line makes no sense.

3. What do my bio disses have to do with anything. Their personals, and you wouldnt know im a 'proclaimed' Eminem fan unless u saw my email address is 'eminemfan85020,' so u contradicted yourself there.

4. How does where i live at mean anything? And Lmfao @ Fuck You Mime. Speaking of a forced punch.

But whatever, Ill start keyin in like 10 minutes.

Werd.

^ Read my previous post about his contradictions in his verse.

Plus, just multis dont win battles kiddo.

But whatever.

Check this shit out...yo, yo...

Im leave ya blown and screwed...ur just alone dude...as i lyrically stone you
And the dumbass gets rejected so much...
...he still labels himself as his own crew!*
U just thrown and bruised...your handin me the W...so i take ur gift in a cup
And good for hot for tryin to raise the bar...
...to bad he broke his back liftin it up!**
Im shiftin ur luck...cause im causin hell in this place...i can tell ur disgraced
But hot has always been walkin behind me...
...and he just tripped and fell on his face!***
Im compelled to embrace my win...so now, ima just pound u until u miss me
And hots runnin wackness in towns here...
...but his life just revovles around his city!****
Im bound to spit g...and this shit is a 'toss up'.....thats y im helpin ya 'land'
And just like ur current occuption status...
...your leavin this battle empty handed!

*In his profile, Where it says 'Crew' he put hotshh!!...which is his own name.
**In a thread he was talkin about 'raisin the bar.' Dont get it, dont vote.
***I left HardWood earlier this week. He just tried out and got rejected.
****Under his 'Biography' he has...FROM DA BRONX...which is a city.

Bitch.

Uppin This Shit.

Leave A Link And Ill Return The Favor.

Aight, pretty good battle ya'll, but i think Mim takes it with better personals, and hard hittin punches...

Hot- Not a bad verse, you had some decent punches, but you really fell off towards the end. Some of ya lines didn't make sense, like the wizards and warlocks, and it didn't rhyme. You can come with better personals, cuz he explained everyone, and your punches coul've been better. You need a new struc, cuz your struc took away from your flow. Not bad tho...

Mim- Nice verse, you really had some nice personals, really dissed him well. Some nice punches in there, and your struc was nice which made you flow nicely. Your last couple lines were kinda weak, and i didn't really get the bronx line you had, it didn't make sense. But you had an overall much better verse, and your personals killed him easily, so you get my vote.

V/ Mim

im gunna hav to vote on mimesis on this one cuz his rhymes actually made me laugh,he had good plays on words and sum good personals so.mimesis

v-mimesis

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^ Thanx for the votes.

2-0 Me.

Uppin for more votes.

Leave a link and ill return the favor with an honest vote.

hotshhh u had only multi's and ur verse got me conused yo......i didnt undaztand anything...punches didnt connect..same with your personals but ur structure was ok

mim...u had a tight verse...gd punches that connected...ur shit made more sence..but ur structure wasnt that tight.............but u had good personals and word play.......

overall: cool battle.......but i gatta give it to mim

v: mim

if it was confusing thats cause i had too much to say in 10 lines, so my fault
i had started typing and ended up with like 45 lines so i had to cut back
i dont expect to win, thats not the point, cause i woulda never battled
i just want to open some people's eyes to people like him whose records indicate lyrical dominance but verses dont be too great. dont get me wrong mim, you good all hate aside, you good, but i just wish you had a more original style instead of following the same formula every battle, you win with it but u need to be true to your own style
ya lyrics still scream"I've Watched 8 Mile 45 Times". Me? Im still trying to get the hang of this but each verse i try you bring you something different. im trying 2 improve just like all of you on this site

Drop ya honest opinions is all i ask. No hate. this is hip hop

I Think Some Of That Memisis Or Whatever His Name Is Is Getting Some Swayed Votes...
But Thats Not My Place To Say...
But Ya, Ya Verse's Flow Was Wack As Fuck And Your Structure Was Fucking Retarded...
You Had Like 3 Lines In One Bar...
And Hotshh Ya Lines Were Crazy Streched But Atleast You Kept The Flow With Multies And Internals...
And Ya Potensy Of Punch Was Pretty Much Even...
So Since Punch Are At The Same Level I Gota Vote Based On Flow And Complexity...
Vote:Hottshhh!...
~One~

This was a very ill ass battle here man, Mim why you break his personals apart/

Flow: Tie
Structure: Mim
Punches: Mim
Personals: Mim
Multis: Tie
Metas: Mim
Overall: Mim

Vote= Mim

Mim's verse was better constructed, didnt look like he wrote a paragrpah or sumthin/
He had the multis on point helpin his flow, and killer meteas/
his punches hit harder and personals hit harder too/
Not includin the fact he broke up ya personals/

Mim.....hot Flooo Kidd......nice Punches.....the Only Thing Which Reall Bothered Me Was That Structure.....i Had To Read It A Couple Of Times Until I Actaully Got What U Were Sayin.....which Is Why I Gave The Vot To Hot!.......he Also Had The Hardhittin Punches....and His Structure Was Alot Better.....made It A Whole Lot Easier To Read Then Mim's......good Battle...and Much Respect To Both Of Ya..
Final Vote....hotshh!!!\
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i gotta give my vote
2 HOTSHH! i felt his
verse i lil betta it had a nice flow
n sum good punches
v/HOTSHH!
vote 4 deez battles
amayze vs novakane
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136749

2hard2lose
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136487

ice pick
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137970

peace

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yo wat u did after his verse was pussy shit and hotshhh when ur explaination is longer than ur verse thats not a good thing

hot shhh had multis and personals and i enjoyed it more

mime you had punches but really nothin else


hot shhh is mah vote

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hotshh I liked ya verse it was nice and compact which made the flow really easy to follow. You had some ok personals and good punches.

Mimesis your lines were majorly streeetttchhheddd and that made it hard for me to follow the flow. you really lost me at the end of your lines. some of it didnt make sense...although you put forth a decent effort. some ok punches, ok personals.

vote: hotshh.

guess my vote doesnt count. just to let everyone know, I don't vote biased. even though people may PM me asking me to vote for them. I repeat I DO NOT VOTE biased.

^ Yea, I blacklisted your whole crew.

So even if hotshh! takes this to RB complaints, it wont count, as i have a right to blacklist whoever i want.

good for you thats the 5th vote anyway
cause officially im not in a crew til they finish deciding soooooooooo
fuck you

Punches-Mim
Meta's-mim
structure-tie
enjoyment-mim
opener/closer-mim

this was an alright better you both need to elevate and use better wordplay but in my opinion mimesis came with the harder flow and better punches

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hotshh! :multis dont win battles...thats a big rule
Dont give up punches for flow, its stupid...ur verse was weak other than vocab and flow, nuttin stood out....
6/10...

Mimesis: lol, good drop...u always come wit the witty punch/personal style...and u didnt fail here...u had some stretched lines, but still a nice drop....the only line that i didnt like was the one about his city...that was gay...but other than that, good drop.

V/mimesis.

Uppin this for someone to close it.

4-2 me.

Leave a link and ill return the favor.

Do i really need to vote i mean Mimesis definitely took this betta flow betta punches overall juss betta........
vote- Mimesis

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Uppin..

4-2 Me.

Leave a link and ill return the favor..

alright...first off wat is it wit all tha fuckin explaining...damn
actin like a couple of bitchs...but heres da break down...

mimesis...these first two bars had good punches n ok flow...
Im leave ya blown and screwed...ur just alone dude...as i lyrically stone you
And the dumbass gets rejected so much...
...he still labels himself as his own crew!*
U just thrown and bruised...your handin me the W...so i take ur gift in a cup
And good for hot for tryin to raise the bar...
...to bad he broke his back liftin it up!**
mimesis...but these last three bars lost it for u...i could tell u thought they were good but i wasnt feelin them...tha third bar was acceptable but not hot...tha forth bar was whack n so was tha closer...u shoulda kept it up...

hotshh!...ur first two bars werent hard punches, but tha flow n multis were of tha hook...but the end is wat got me...
You nonvenomous snake,kicked out ya clique,2 feminine
Only cause Eminem was taken,u named ya self Memisis
Ur sig insults wiggas,u couldnt make da cut wit scissors
Mim disapear like magicians witches warlocks an wizards<whoa...this last line was kill...
opinion...
in the end mimesis lost cuz he didnt go da stretch, which sucked cuz he coulda won wit jus punches...hotshh! had a way betta flow multis n creativity...since this was close
im gonna break it down some more
vocab::u were both good
punches::mimesis
flow::hotshh!
structure::hotshh!
personels::mimesis
creativity::hotshh!
content::hotshh!
i broke dis down! so who eva disagrees can suck it
FUCK HOTSHH!...FUCK MIMESIS...IM OUT!
PEACE...

CORRECTION!
"Mim disapear like magicians witches warlocks an wizards<WHOA...LAST LINE WAS HOT...
opinion..."

Jus Forget It...
Ignore Dat Last Post Im Retarded.

Naw, Hotshh took this cuz, all of that explaining that mimesis did before his drop, i wasn't feeling at all.. give a rebuttle with your verse, not an explaination or facts.. that's like feeding, or swaying votes.. But not really, i'm not accusing you of that, don't get me wrong.. but let me break this down for quality..

Structure -
It is so obvious that hotshh took that, his lines were almost even and not stretched, mim's was, and was less attractive looking..

Wordplay -
Hotshh gets this also, I like his opener, he came straight at mim with multies and nice flow.. mim's was kinda basic..

Flow -
Hotshh, some of the multies and vocab made hotshh' flow sound better and jus stand out more as a tight verse..

Punches - Tie, I wasn't feeling either of your punches really, this verse you both were lacking on that..

Personals -
Hotshh won this basically with his closer which i kinda touched up on in the beginning.. how mim had a chance to read what he went up against and rebuttled before he even spit, i wasn't feeling that, and when hotshh said it in his verse, that added insult to injury, i actually laughed at that line, it was basic, but a true and nice personal..

overall - Hotshh, personals hit, structure was more pleasant, flow was more on point, you had an overall better verse, holla.

^ Thats a fuckin hate vote..

Dont be mad cause i voted against you in ur battle with Calamity..

Faggot.