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Contendership- Polifick(2-0) vs. Spul(2-0)
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battles go up monday check in by wensday verses due by thursday votes due by the next sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 12 line max. REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!! |
Check Check............Good Luck Spul.............
Voted.. http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...419#post1426419 http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...605#post1428605 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136196 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136193 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136209 |
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reck*less adj : lacking caution : RASH syn hasty, brash, hotheaded, thoughtless -- reck*less*ly adv -- ward n 1 : a guarding or being under guard or guardianship; Fav Team-Kingz Partner-Kingz work Magic-Banks Album If His Tag Team Partner Voted..Still Wouldnt Pull Strings... Guess That Makes 2 Ways He Suck And Stuck On Kingz .... NickName Monoply That Way He Hop On Off Boards.... Bein His Mommas Baby .The Only Time He Gets A-Ward.... Zero Minded..Spul Aim Icon Blinded..Leavin You Breatheless... Lyrical Taughtless....Bein Thoughtless The Only Time U Reckless.. The Day You Beat Me Is When Mugsy Bouges Get A Dunk Basket.... Long Review Of Banks..You Can be Orlando And Not Work Magic... Icon Actually Looks Like You..He's Fake Like Walmart Spinners... Your UntNoticed..I See Im In The Match But Where My Contender??... Post In Purple..Punches Scretch Hurdle..Lyrics Is Laughable.... Should Work Security..Since He guards State Capitol.... Quote:
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Nothin' personal, jus business:
Dawg, at makin' mistakes... your verse is so prolifick (a growth or shit like that) Yo name is misspelled too. I mean, what's a Polifick? My verse is always fire, jus lookin' at it, has you BBQed You're battlin' a vet. The only time you beat one, was by DQ You kno you're an ugly fuck, so you posted yo pic so petite Like yo title, you always fade away backwards, facin' the elite My verse will have you sick... greener than tree moss At the end you'll prolly bitch again, to RB, about yo loss You're tryin' to steal away my award, by takin' "Best vet of July" But after I clearly merk yo ass, we'll all kno that the Awardz are a lie Jus lookin' at the predictions, is enough to wipe away yo smile I mean, yo punches make less sense, than yo stupid title "etile" (Elite fadin' back) |
wow a slight shocker here. Firstly boldin ur punches Pol is gay. But anyways you did take this with more complex hardhitting personal witty punches......eg......
Zero Minded..Spul Aim Icon Blinded..Leavin You Breatheless... Lyrical Taughtless....Bein Thoughtless The Only Time U Reckless.. play off his name was ok The Day You Beat Me Is When Mugsy Bouges Get A Dunk Basket.... Long Review Of Banks..You Can be Orlando And Not Work Magic... ok ok Post In Purple..Punches Scretch Hurdle..Lyrics Is Laughable.... Should Work Security..Since He guards State Capitol.... yeh liked that alot. Spul u were ok but u had lines that were far to basic such as...... You're tryin' to steal away my award, by takin' "Best vet of July" But after I clearly merk yo ass, we'll all kno that the Awardz are a lie not a great drop by you. Nice battle but vote/Polifick |
uppin for votes people...
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Damnn this battle was close but damnnn Spul wat happened B??? Polifick came harder in this wid punches, multis and metas yo. Close battle though. No beef spul juss votin honestly
Punches: Polifick Structure: tie metas: Polifick multis: Polifick flow: tie Vote: Polifick |
polifick
your punches were hitting hard..nice personals u used alotta personals actually and most of them hit hard you came much harder then him your structure was about a tie both fairly good.. overall 8.7 /10 nice work spul you had punches but they lacked good impact..like they werent hitting as hard as polifiks you prolly underestimated him but you lost as a result of it.u had personals they werent hitting as hard either 8.0/10 my vote polifick |
aight..this si the setup..
Lemme start with spul first..you had a nice spit dawg..youre infamous for the link and bringin dirt up on ya opponent..now you had some nice punches, especially the last one..damn your flo was so nice and the structure too..nice multis..overall great job, 8.5/10 Polifick.great job..you got some nice punches in there....good flow and awesome structure..liked the punch about the being the babies momma haha..but it just wasnt enough..great job to both. 8/10 |
Polifick: you came pretty good here.. liked the personals.. l\flow was aight, choppy a lil bit.. a few metas in there.. over solid verse..
Spul: i wasent feeling this verse this time around.. it was really simple, and not really complex at all.. iv seen some dope shit from you... but i didnt like this a whole lot.. was a average verse hehe.. vote: Polifick... no hate or anything.. i just felt like he had the upper hand |
uppin 4-1....
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If His Tag Team Partner Voted..Still Wouldnt Pull Strings...
Guess That Makes 2 Ways He Suck And Stuck On Kingz .... Not bad opener/personal... NickName Monoply That Way He Hop On Off Boards.... Bein His Mommas Baby .The Only Time He Gets A-Ward.... I wasnt feelin this... Zero Minded..Spul Aim Icon Blinded..Leavin You Breatheless... Lyrical Taughtless....Bein Thoughtless The Only Time U Reckless.. I wasnt really feeling this as well good multis but wasnt feelin a punch The Day You Beat Me Is When Mugsy Bouges Get A Dunk Basket.... Long Review Of Banks..You Can be Orlando And Not Work Magic... not feelin the second line.. but it was pretty good wordplay.. tho wuts wit the long review and workin magic?? Icon Actually Looks Like You..He's Fake Like Walmart Spinners... Your UntNoticed..I See Im In The Match But Where My Contender??... Not bad.. little played on the 2nd line but good.. Post In Purple..Punches Scretch Hurdle..Lyrics Is Laughable.... Should Work Security..Since He guards State Capitol.... Haha good closer.. Dawg, at makin' mistakes... your verse is so prolifick Yo name is misspelled too. I mean, what's a Polifick? Not bad.. good personal n punch My verse is always fire, jus lookin' at it, has you BBQed You're battlin' a vet. The only time you beat one, was by DQ good punch and personal here.. You kno you're an ugly fuck, so you posted yo pic so petite Like yo title, you always fade away backwards, facin' the elite Nice.. personals in both lines.. and punches.. My verse will have you sick... greener than tree moss At the end you'll prolly bitch again, to RB, about yo loss Meh wasnt feelin this line.. You're tryin' to steal away my award, by takin' "Best vet of July" But after I clearly merk yo ass, we'll all kno that the Awardz are a lie Not bad punch here.. Jus lookin' at the predictions, is enough to wipe away yo smile I mean, yo punches make less sense, than yo stupid title "etile" good punch.. and personal on the user title.. i liked it.. Overall i think spul got this fo sho.. he has mad personals.. and punches.. and i thought overall he had the better verse.. good by both.. but i believe Spul got this.. |
A'ight...this was honestly a very close battle...
Polifick...nice shit throughout ya verse...some shit didnt make sense though, and some shit didnt flow right either...right near the end...you definetly had some nice punches and personals...close shit... 8/10 SPul...hot shit from you too...flow was good...structure was good...punches and personals hittin...nice verse...coulda had a lil more personals...and that was a hot closer...nice shit...like I said...very very close battle... 8.5[/10 Vote- Spul No hate...hit up mine...thx... |
ok 3-4 Polifick. uppin' this shit.
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Good battle
If His Tag Team Partner Voted..Still Wouldnt Pull Strings... Guess That Makes 2 Ways He Suck And Stuck On Kingz .... weak personal NickName Monoply That Way He Hop On Off Boards.... Bein His Mommas Baby .The Only Time He Gets A-Ward.... Weak Zero Minded..Spul Aim Icon Blinded..Leavin You Breatheless... Lyrical Taughtless....Bein Thoughtless The Only Time U Reckless.. Multies don't hide a weak punch The Day You Beat Me Is When Mugsy Bouges Get A Dunk Basket.... Long Review Of Banks..You Can be Orlando And Not Work Magic... Ok setup had me expecting a hard punch but u dropped another weak one Icon Actually Looks Like You..He's Fake Like Walmart Spinners... Your UntNoticed..I See Im In The Match But Where My Contender??... Ok finally a decent line Post In Purple..Punches Scretch Hurdle..Lyrics Is Laughable.... Should Work Security..Since He guards State Capitol.... Kinda funny decent closer Dawg, at makin' mistakes... your verse is so prolifick Yo name is misspelled too. I mean, what's a Polifick? Kinda wack opener but I see the direction u were going in My verse is always fire, jus lookin' at it, has you BBQed You're battlin' a vet. The only time you beat one, was by DQ Solid personal You kno you're an ugly fuck, so you posted yo pic so petite Like yo title, you always fade away backwards, facin' the elite Good personal again My verse will have you sick... greener than tree moss At the end you'll prolly bitch again, to RB, about yo loss Weak You're tryin' to steal away my award, by takin' "Best vet of July" But after I clearly merk yo ass, we'll all kno that the Awardz are a lie decent punch Jus lookin' at the predictions, is enough to wipe away yo smile I mean, yo punches make less sense, than yo stupid title "etile" Nice closer Not a close battle at all spul took it wit his personals an closer, polifick didn't drop hard enuff in this one, biggups to both y'all but spul to it.... Vote: Spul |
ok, tight. uppin' this. 4-4
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good battle but a shock for me here...
spul came quite nice wiv gud personals and nice flow n punches but i thought some of ya punches cud have hit harder than they did, didnt really feel the opener although it was an o.k personal.... 8/10 polifick....thought you came real tight here, probably the best i've seen from u, tight punches (liked the contender line) gud flow n complexity to ur verse, gud vocab and some nice wordplay, thought you tried harder on this one n it showed in my opinion... peace n props to both but my vote goes to... vote-polifick |
5-4 Upp
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Structure: Spul
Flow: both enjoyed: both came harder: polifick punches: polifick personals: polifick closer; spul openor: both vote: polifick close battle but I give it to polifick |
reopened ...5 to 4 for polifick...votes uppin
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Polifick...Your Stuff didnt make sense and The ones that did
was Dope as hell and nice Good Overall punches..Structure was good but Wordplay Lacked of Flow Spul-You had a Orginal Verse and Good But Since you had more Orginal Verse and some of his didnt make sence you took it. Because His lines was Dope as hell exsept for the ones and you had a orginal verse and more that where orginal and the last was funny So v/Spul |
Polifick- you have deffintly come better then this and i really didnt like the fact that you had to have the deffintion and everything else before your verse because that just makes it look really noobish....your punches was okay and your flow was good the only thing that was bad was that shit at the begining.
SPul-aswell as you i have seen you come better aswell.....i felt that your verse was slightly better then Polly's because your punches hit harder and your verse was more witty.....thas all i gotta say |
ok 6-5 me. uppin'
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uppin for more votes people...let's get some...
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If His Tag Team Partner Voted..Still Wouldnt Pull Strings...
Guess That Makes 2 Ways He Suck And Stuck On Kingz .... soso NickName Monoply That Way He Hop On Off Boards.... Bein His Mommas Baby .The Only Time He Gets A-Ward.... funny but not hard Zero Minded..Spul Aim Icon Blinded..Leavin You Breatheless... Lyrical Taughtless....Bein Thoughtless The Only Time U Reckless.. nice multies The Day You Beat Me Is When Mugsy Bouges Get A Dunk Basket.... Long Review Of Banks..You Can be Orlando And Not Work Magic... first line is aight Icon Actually Looks Like You..He's Fake Like Walmart Spinners... Your UntNoticed..I See Im In The Match But Where My Contender??... lmao at the first part Post In Purple..Punches Scretch Hurdle..Lyrics Is Laughable.... Should Work Security..Since He guards State Capitol.... decent but not hard hitting Dawg, at makin' mistakes... your verse is so prolifick (a growth or shit like that) Yo name is misspelled too. I mean, what's a Polifick? decent punch My verse is always fire, jus lookin' at it, has you BBQed You're battlin' a vet. The only time you beat one, was by DQ lol nice personal second one You kno you're an ugly fuck, so you posted yo pic so petite Like yo title, you always fade away backwards, facin' the elite lmao nice punch My verse will have you sick... greener than tree moss At the end you'll prolly bitch again, to RB, about yo loss not hard hitting You're tryin' to steal away my award, by takin' "Best vet of July" But after I clearly merk yo ass, we'll all kno that the Awardz are a lie soso Jus lookin' at the predictions, is enough to wipe away yo smile blah not hard hitting vote spul |
damn, finally this shit's over. 7-5 me
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If His Tag Team Partner Voted..Still Wouldnt Pull Strings...
Guess That Makes 2 Ways He Suck And Stuck On Kingz . ^no... ... NickName Monoply That Way He Hop On Off Boards.... Bein His Mommas Baby .The Only Time He Gets A-Ward... ^decent . Zero Minded..Spul Aim Icon Blinded..Leavin You Breatheless... Lyrical Taughtless....Bein Thoughtless The Only Time U Reckless.. ^not feelin' it... The Day You Beat Me Is When Mugsy Bouges Get A Dunk Basket.... Long Review Of Banks..You Can be Orlando And Not Work Magic... ^no... Icon Actually Looks Like You..He's Fake Like Walmart Spinners... Your UntNoticed..I See Im In The Match But Where My Contender?? ^no... ... Post In Purple..Punches Scretch Hurdle..Lyrics Is Laughable.... Should Work Security..Since He guards State Capitol.... ^atleast a personal...hard-hittin'?..no Dawg, at makin' mistakes... your verse is so prolifick (a growth or shit like that) Yo name is misspelled too. I mean, what's a Polifick? ^looked like u were headin' sumwhere...then the 2nd line...i dunno?...worded horribly...and not hard-hittin' My verse is always fire, jus lookin' at it, has you BBQed You're battlin' a vet. The only time you beat one, was by DQ ^first line was gay and totally destroyed any chance of this becomin' a decent punch You kno you're an ugly fuck, so you posted yo pic so petite Like yo title, you always fade away backwards, facin' the elite ^decent...atleast it's a personal My verse will have you sick... greener than tree moss At the end you'll prolly bitch again, to RB, about yo loss ^first line was gay....ruined the whole thing You're tryin' to steal away my award, by takin' "Best vet of July" But after I clearly merk yo ass, we'll all kno that the Awardz are a lie ^doesn't seem like ur merkin' him so far... Jus lookin' at the predictions, is enough to wipe away yo smile I mean, yo punches make less sense, than yo stupid title "etile" (Elite fadin' back) ^horrible...wtf were u thinkin' when u typed that 2nd line? Overall: Spul did have the personals but did not use them effectively...his verse was worded horribly to have hard-hittin' punches...Polifick didn't do much better either...but overall...his verse maintained a steady level of "no's"...Spul on the other hand had some..."Decent"...but mostly horrible lines...weak metaphors ruin lines. v/- Polifick |
^yea, battles already done.
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Spul- nice verse came nice with the personals and your verse was nice
your punches were solid as well so in total this was nice shit you had some Original concepts in your verse aswell PoLifick- another nice drop you had the punches and personals aswell i think you came a little harder in your drop so im gonna go with Po it was about even good shit from both v/Polifick |
wow, can't people read. the battle is already done. After 5 it was lead by 2 to win. it was 7-5 me. so stop votin!!!
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