GRENADE VS marvolousj1009
 

10-12 lines
u spittin first
verses due by 2 nite
house rules

sum kinda beef wit me but u gon lose anywayz

im spittin first?? but its due 2nite??? ur dick head 4 real dis aint no beef dunny we on da net lol ima drop in couple minutes so u got all day da write me somthin lol

FUKIN BLIND SPIT THEN ........fucks sake.u said in ya call out u woz gonna spit first thats all

fuck this im gonna merk ya fukin as bitch

quit the bullshit talkin..n see if u can key a hot as the shit u talk...

lmaooooo u madd dunny???? i said ima drop first so i will y u so focused in dis thread didn't u say u ahd other battles and datz y u couldn't drop rite now lol

i woz keyin up a verse wen u called me out........
i aint even gonna front
jus let tha votes do tha talkin..

oh and no feedin of my shit either...

25 wins look at all da jerk's i bend,ima drop 12 but couldn't hurt my 10-
i could tell u wasn't "good" cuzz she a girl and u got merked by "sin"-

dogg how u airin dem strays??,u might got a gun but its rare dat it blaze-
u a known pussy worldwide shit even "ppl in iraq" aint scared of "grenade"-

fukk a cheap debate,fukkin with me ya teeth a break,fagget meet ya fate-
why u come on rb everyday nigga all u do is seek da hate,ya peeps is fake-
da sad thing about ya ass is ya battle record wont even reach ya weight-
a battle with grenade is like a "birthday party" shit is a "peice of cake"-

your no where close da me,ur at da bottom rite where ya suppose da be-
y u open b?..if crews vote was allowed ya whole team a probly vote 4 me-

madd cuzz my parents was da wun dat breed dis vet,ask ya niece & neph's-
ya online career aint shit so u do like "kenyon martin" did & leave da "net"-


str8 keystyle dunny....now u got like 12 hour's da spit back lol

oh and 4 da voter's my first bar its a link so u could how he got merked by a girl lol...drop ya shit nigga

this should be good......seen as i aint battled a girl.........talk,talk,talk

i wnt b too long..actually after reading you shit.....................

lmaooo y r u fukkin free postin nigga damm.....................

Finally I Can Post!!1
 

dawg, u couldnt hit two straight lines if you woz a train track
fuck braveheart,ur lines more stretch than wallace on the rack!

like a high crack dealer,u always gettin shot for promoting shit lines
look at his name..MARVOLOUS always in front of one o,o dem 9`s!

why u gonna start beef, because i showed your wack-ass DATRUTH?
only chance u got to "drop hard" is when you standing on a roof!

ur style leaves me more BOard than HARDWOOD..but u are sic.
Socially InCappable, you start more beef than you do spit!

you make enemies quicker than all yourthreads could make a rope..
last in a long line, im number 16 ,to show you that you aint dope..

ive shown you up to be the true representative of QUEENZ on RB..
your brain more "solid"..than the brikz that make up the N.Y.C..

ilike both flows but i think marvolous won
i mean how grenade added da crew in there was tyght
but marvolous flow was a lil siker
vmarvolous

amayzin grace vs forgotten flow
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031

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25 wins look at all da jerk's i bend,ima drop 12 but couldn't hurt my 10-
i could tell u wasn't "good" cuzz she a girl and u got merked by "sin"-
keep your lines together
dogg how u airin dem strays??,u might got a gun but its rare dat it blaze-
u a known pussy worldwide shit even "ppl in iraq" aint scared of "grenade"-
hot
fukk a cheap debate,fukkin with me ya teeth a break,fagget meet ya fate-
why u come on rb everyday nigga all u do is seek da hate,ya peeps is fake-
da sad thing about ya ass is ya battle record wont even reach ya weight-
a battle with grenade is like a "birthday party" shit is a "peice of cake"-
dope
your no where close da me,ur at da bottom rite where ya suppose da be-
y u open b?..if crews vote was allowed ya whole team a probly vote 4 me-
haha coo
madd cuzz my parents was da wun dat breed dis vet,ask ya niece & neph's-
ya online career aint shit so u do like "kenyon martin" did & leave da "net"-
nice

^^ thee best verse ive seen on rb relaunhced 48/50

dawg, u couldnt hit two straight lines if you woz a train track
fuck braveheart,ur lines more stretch than wallace on the rack!
decent
like a high crack dealer,u always gettin shot for promoting shit lines
look at his name..MARVOLOUS always in front of one o,o dem 9`s!
ok
why u gonna start beef, because i showed your wack-ass DATRUTH?
only chance u got to "drop hard" is when you standing on a roof!
nah
ur style leaves me more BOard than HARDWOOD..but u are sic.
Socially InCappable, you start more beef than you do spit!
dont beef on hardwood
you make enemies quicker than all yourthreads could make a rope..
last in a long line, im number 16 ,to show you that you aint dope..
ok
ive shown you up to be the true representative of QUEENZ on RB..
your brain more "solid"..than the brikz that make up the N.Y.C..
one of ur best lines

decent verse.. no real punches 35/50

v/marvolous

hit up my battles

YO BOTH WAS GOOD SHIT
yo
vocab:marv
flow:grenade
creativity:grenade
finisher:grenade

vote:
grenade

jus liked her verse better no hating or nothin

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yup grenade took this 4 real.............
marv had real gud flow n multies....
but his punches wernt as hard hittin.....
grenade had good wordplay and multies.....
also more personals,the DATRUTH...line..coz he voted 4 da truth in a battle n marv didnt like it
also the beef line....coz this guy beefs wit everyone

and metas vote shouldnt count.coz he tryin out 4 hardwood
thats why he hatin on u....u shud get that removed

aiight
vote-grenade

25 wins look at all da jerk's i bend,ima drop 12 but couldn't hurt my 10-
i could tell u wasn't "good" cuzz she a girl and u got merked by "sin"-
ok personal 5/10

dogg how u airin dem strays??,u might got a gun but its rare dat it blaze-
u a known pussy worldwide shit even "ppl in iraq" aint scared of "grenade"-
humm first like nice second shit give 6/10

fukk a cheap debate,fukkin with me ya teeth a break,fagget meet ya fate-
why u come on rb everyday nigga all u do is seek da hate,ya peeps is fake-
da sad thing about ya ass is ya battle record wont even reach ya weight-
a battle with grenade is like a "birthday party" shit is a "peice of cake"-
nice 7/10

your no where close da me,ur at da bottom rite where ya suppose da be-
y u open b?..if crews vote was allowed ya whole team a probly vote 4 me-
ok 5/10

madd cuzz my parents was da wun dat breed dis vet,ask ya niece & neph's-
ya online career aint shit so u do like "kenyon martin" did & leave da "net"-
not much sence no conection between first and second line 4/10

27/50
5.4/10
nice flow the stucture is allrite not much personals


dawg, u couldnt hit two straight lines if you woz a train track
fuck braveheart,ur lines more stretch than wallace on the rack!
lol nice imagination 8/10 liked this one

like a high crack dealer,u always gettin shot for promoting shit lines
look at his name..MARVOLOUS always in front of one o,o dem 9`s!
ok personal 6/10

why u gonna start beef, because i showed your wack-ass DATRUTH?
only chance u got to "drop hard" is when you standing on a roof!
the idea is ok you could'v used a word play 2 make it better 6/10

ur style leaves me more BOard than HARDWOOD..but u are sic.
Socially InCappable, you start more beef than you do spit!
aint feeling it 4/10

you make enemies quicker than all yourthreads could make a rope..
last in a long line, im number 16 ,to show you that you aint dope..
ok 5/10

ive shown you up to be the true representative of QUEENZ on RB..
your brain more "solid"..than the brikz that make up the N.Y.C..
nice ending punch 7/10

36/60
6/10
i will give my vote to GrEnAdE cause she had more punches and used more imagination close shit
vote:GrEnAdE

sorry forgot to ask you people to hit up my battle

lmaooooo whut da fukk ......yo im not even gon start ima let all da bullshit votes roc uppin 4 more votes

dawg i dnt even believe how u can play urself?

my shit hit u the fuck out
u know that as well as i do

fukin metafor is tryin out 4 ur crew

i drop a dope bar n all he puts is dnt hate on hardwood///...lmfao
this site fukin sucks

uppin...read the verses carefully b4 u vote peeps
n no dickriding......

yo sorry can pole just yet i will hit you with the pole tomorrow
with respect for both of you

Vote Marv, his shit was better.
better wordplay and flow,

Battle cvould have been better

I would like to battle one of you guys in the future

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awww man da votin on dis site is crazee yo lol ...................

MARVOLoUsJ1009
25 wins look at all da jerk's i bend,ima drop 12 but couldn't hurt my 10-
i could tell u wasn't "good" cuzz she a girl and u got merked by "sin"-
^weak...and the overall punch was wack...not hard-hittin' and worded horribly...

dogg how u airin dem strays??,u might got a gun but its rare dat it blaze-
u a known pussy worldwide shit even "ppl in iraq" aint scared of "grenade"-
^iraq punchlines...unless ur flippin' em nice...der played as fuck

fukk a cheap debate,fukkin with me ya teeth a break,fagget meet ya fate-
why u come on rb everyday nigga all u do is seek da hate,ya peeps is fake-
^no actual punch...weak

da sad thing about ya ass is ya battle record wont even reach ya weight-
a battle with grenade is like a "birthday party" shit is a "peice of cake"-
^you used a played concept...and it sucked badly...

your no where close da me,ur at da bottom rite where ya suppose da be-
y u open b?..if crews vote was allowed ya whole team a probly vote 4 me-
^meh...decent I guess...

madd cuzz my parents was da wun dat breed dis vet,ask ya niece & neph's-
ya online career aint shit so u do like "kenyon martin" did & leave da "net"-
^worded horribly...stop stretchin' ur lines

Grenade
dawg, u couldnt hit two straight lines if you woz a train track
fuck braveheart,ur lines more stretch than wallace on the rack!
^2nd line was bleh...but it was a personal tho...first I actually liked...

like a high crack dealer,u always gettin shot for promoting shit lines
look at his name..MARVOLOUS always in front of one o,o dem 9`s!
^no...

why u gonna start beef, because i showed your wack-ass DATRUTH?
only chance u got to "drop hard" is when you standing on a roof!
^decent...

ur style leaves me more BOard than HARDWOOD..but u are sic.
Socially InCappable, you start more beef than you do spit!
^no...

you make enemies quicker than all yourthreads could make a rope..
last in a long line, im number 16 ,to show you that you aint dope..
^no...

ive shown you up to be the true representative of QUEENZ on RB..
your brain more "solid"..than the brikz that make up the N.Y.C..
^decent...

Overall: Marvellous...you need to learn how to shrink the size of your lines. That syllable count is wayyyyy too large for ur multies to be affective...you have like 20 syllables a line! that's rediculous...wayy too much
Both didn't really delivery anythin'...but Grenade did have a better overall verse which is why Grenade gets my vote. To the rest of ya'll...get off Marvellous' dick...

/v- Grenade


Return the favour and drop honest votes on the battles in my signature please. I took the time to break yours down...you can take the time to vote on mine.

uppin 4 explained votes peeps.....................

Marvolous= ya verse was good man good job on ya punches ya structre was good and it had a nice flow.....good use of multis too...maybe some betta vocab but u had nice wordplay too...........

Grenade=ya verse was ok...it had some punches but didnt hit as hard as marvolous punches did... ya structure was straight too.... just elevate on punches..........

return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135898

lmao who did he vote for^^^^ first time i see a cat the explains and forgets to vote anyway im pole now

marvelous took this battle, i could feel his shit a lot mo than grenades he hit harder but i think both structure was fucked up, i had a battle wid grenade n he spitt structure wid no spaces like mine n i realised afta couple of his battles that he always feeds off the structure...no hate

v - marvalous

drop a explained 1 on this 2 ... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135183

fukin hate vote..............i can use woteva struc i want u prick

uppin.....cumon i merked dis bitch.ukin joke

ok,grenade nice verse,some good multies an punchlines!

but damn,marvolous.....i remeba battlin u an winnin,uve deffinetly come up man,a sick verse,punches came hard,tones of multis,some personals.

overall,dope battle,but i gotta give it marv,peace.

return the favour in the thugzy and murda-gram battle when he finally drops!peace

ok,return the favour now please....safe..........

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136507

honest vote

i got u thugzy goodlookin....uppin ppl stop sleepin on dis....

uppin one more time yo im tired of doin dis shit y niggaz just cant vote

marv-great flow.nice use of multis.....some ok punchlines
sum were pretty weak though
grenade-gud structure.sum nice punches.......n sum good personals
gud vocab,nice wordplay

overall grenade hit harder so he gets ma vote

tite battle!

Upppin 4 1 More God Damn Voter......

Will Return An Honest Vote