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Optimal VS Deliquint
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checkin dude.............................................. .
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~these rhymes are a hundred times better than your lyrical confusion~
~The final Judment of Optimal's conclusion is hes an Optical-Illusion~ ~dont Contemplate this Roughly, your Brain Thinks Scruffly~ ~must~be retarted, cause Im Bout to Hit you Wit a Biscuit like KFC out Of Kentucky~ ~Weep-You-Faggot, Wait To See-The-Automatic~ ~talkin Ghetto, But The Only Hood You See Is Under Your Jacket*~ ~Smite-This Light-Weights Face, Make-You-Break-In-Place~ ~You Not Gangsta, Crying When Other Emcees Take Ya Place~ ~Its Enraging, Cant Get Out Of your Caging, Making Gay-Statements~ ~fuck Around Too Much, Ill have ya brain on the concrete like Girls That Give Head On Pavement**~ Explanations: *in The call-out he was talkin all "dont be no bitch hoe" and i meant a hood in a jacket **another word for a blowjob is brain and head, so i meant girls giving head on the pavement holla back |
uppin for you man
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LMAO.....lets go
~lil niggaz talkin...What?? time to load up the clips~ ~leave this nigga "head over hillls" like he doin backflips~ ~this kid must be confused...His rhymes are stupid and gay~ ~plus u no there whack when u got explain what the say~ ~Reppin oakland.. u comin up a bit short like the raiders~ ~Cause u have no vocab its equivalent to third graders~ ~Ur juss tryna be hard... the typical rapbattles nigga~ ~stuntin wit 515$..I'm pushin more than 50 times ya figgaz~ ~i'm clowin this cat...i'm high still dropin dope punches~ ~this battles is brutal he's eatin knuckle sandwiches as lunches~ |
lets get some votes
i will return honest 1's............................................... ....... |
same good spittin homie
whatchu think bout mah shit man |
Deliquint
structure isnt very good...most of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off cause of the stretchnes...u had some nice multis...wordplay was pretty tight...a few, at best, of ur punches connected...u had 1 personal, though it didnt connect at all... Optimal structure was good...flow was on target...no multis...wordplay wasnt good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall Deliquint had more, and better multis...and also better wordplay...neither had good personals...Optimal had the better structure...the more stable flow...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Optimal gets my vote... VOTE - OPTIMAL PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig against bullethole...thanx... |
Was that serious Optimal? Seemed like you wanted to lose. I mean... seriously, that was bad. His vocab destroyed yours. None of your punches were hard and yours seemed like it was from a third grader. The only personal I saw was against his rapper, and it was nothing. Deliquint had some good vocab. He had some ok punches, and at least some multis.
My vote goes to D. |
aight uppin for
more vottes from yall cats any body uppin |
uppin for some motherfuckin votes in this mother fuckin battle holla
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D takes this one. This was kinda close cuz O did have some good personals. But D takes this with rhymes that were tiiiiiiite. Good shit. O's shit was kinda ordinary and was gettin me bored. I coulda like predicted the next line if I had read the first one in the bar. So yea...his shit was kinda ordinary. D takes it with creativity and punches with a good rhyme scheme.
Vote-Deliquint Vote on these: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136079 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136136 |
The Reaper..undoubtedly new...Neither were all that good, but i give it to Optimal cuz i liked a few of his punches..both you noobs need to drop the ~'s and the boldness is just annyoing Del...hit up my battle with Kizza in return, thanks
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del cause he ma home boy and is harder than optimal.
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Yo, Deliquint got this one locked because: I really liked his flow and the hood crack got me to roaring out laughing. a few good personals, nice vocab, ill wordplay. coulda been shorta lines
Optimal didnt come hard at all, although he had me intrigued with this opener: ~lil niggaz talkin...What?? time to load up the clips~ ~leave this nigga "head over hillls" like he doin backflips~ (^da shit nigga^) da closer put me ta sleep: ~i'm clowin this cat...i'm high still dropin dope punches~ ~this battles is brutal he's eatin knuckle sandwiches as lunches~ I'm like ya pops Deliquint, I pack knuckle sanwiches for you to lunch on vote: Deliquint |
uppin more votes
holla back errbody and thanks for the otha votes |
yo uppin more votes
yall help us out and we''l help yall out |
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Votes For This Motherfucker We Will Return Favors |
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Optimal Takes It For A Few Reasons... One Deliquint Just Have Vocab Barely Any Punches And He Tryed To Highlight His Shit With - - -...
Punches: Weak But Optimal Flow: Niether Vocab: Deliquint Wordplay: Weak On Both Sides Niether Multis: Niether, - - - Dont Make It A Multi Originality: Niether Final Vote: Optimal |
Deliquint
structure wasnt that great but you had hella wordplays and shit.your optical illusuin line,your hood and jacket,lol,good lines.your flow was kinda off at some points but it was some good spit.liked it a lot. Optimal Your verse was kinda,well wack.First off,you said you had to unload your clips.....not a diss.head over hills,backflips....um no.then you said they were gay,when he didnt say a word aboput men.but i liked the line about him having to explain what his lines are about so that makes em wack.the rest of your verse wack wacko.need to elevate in the wordplay area. v/Deliquint |
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Optimal took this wit ease he had some nice punches and put up s
ome nice vocab wit it so he gets my vote......Deliquint had really no personals and some of his shit was played but he's still decent.. Vote:optimal |
I think diliquint got this one.......both rappers had good sturcture and both flowed easy.....
Also nice vocab from both but i think delquint was a lil bit beter than optimals also deliquint had tha really good multies in here. I thought both had somenice punches....Overall it was quite good from both but diliquint got it with tha multies.... I liked these lines... ~dont Contemplate this Roughly, your Brain Thinks Scruffly~ ~must~be retarted, cause Im Bout to Hit you Wit a Biscuit like KFC out Of Kentucky~ lol nice ~Reppin oakland.. u comin up a bit short like the raiders~ ~Cause u have no vocab its equivalent to third graders~ Vote: deliquint |
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