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Delinquint vs. Ice Pick
check in man
rules: 5-7 bars you know got 30 mins to check in holla |
Im here isnt there a battle limit, because you have like 7
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iono? w/e you still down
you still down man lets do it |
im down dude----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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~look let me Write some Shit, About A Punk Dyke-Bitch~ ~Who Thinks Hes Cool, But Couldnt Be Touching a Used Ice-Pick~ ~Dont Try My Patience, Or Go Past My Dynasty~ ~Look Now, Watch What Secrets You Confide-In-Me~ ~They Come Back To Bite-You, Like Snakes Attached-To-Ya-Ass~ ~Man Your Rhymes Couldnt Bubble Over If They was A Batch-Of-Crack~ ~I Hope Ya Seek-Defeat, Or Believe-In-Retreat~ ~EitherWay, You Need To Be Like Fat People Runnin And Take a Seat~ ~Ill Snap-Ya-Back, You lack Comprehending The Meanest~ ~Bitch You Could Come Hard If you Inserted Cement Into Ya Penis~ |
watch Deliquent get "Blazed" wit multiple 'flamez thrown' at his tor-so/
with 4 blows{bars} of C-4 prose..he's blown out his poor soul$$ ya' 'forced' flowz get incinerated..skip-the-forensics/ you stricken-wit-SLIM-spitz.."anorexically speakin'"..{ya} dim wit$$ Fan of 50 then my friend you can eat shit,,, i'll shift-ya-appendix when calicos hit-you-ya-shins-split/ flippin'-ya-lid-quick in mid-drift..listen-ya-skin'z-drenced$$ with bodily fluids ranging from urine to blood plasma/ as 'dis thug-smash-ya bronchial passage wit "slug" asthma$$ my club-bash-ya' cranial structure wit savage 'crackz'/ check his ravaged cap{head} and call 9-11 to get his CABBAGE 'patch-ed'$$ and skull bandage wrapped..my damage lasts so keep ya' baggage packed/ |
aight uppin for votes good spit man
uppin for the mo fuckin votes |
No doubt good spittin ....
Lets get some votes in here..... |
No doubt good spittin ....
Lets get some votes in here..... |
the first bar took it...ice pick got it...
opener:"let me write some shit bout a punk dyke bitch" -nursery "watch delequent get blazed...w/flames..." -ice pick closer-they was both tight...but i gotta give it to ice pick too, cause it was more creative...delequent's was bad too, but i heard it, he just worded it better metas-"call 9-1-1 to gget his cabbage patched"...talent, i liked it -ice pick came wit it "used ice-pick wouldve been hot if u worded it coo v/ice pick |
fuk...need 1 more HONEST vote on this shit, to be thru...drop 1 plz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135214 |
both were pretty good but i think ice-pick took it in the end.
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^link fuked up...fix it, n i'll vote
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Good battle, D had a good close but i think Ice took it with the best overall flow of tha two. He had a good rhyme scheme and an ok structure that made the rhyme flow nicely. D had some good rhymes too but Ice took it with better rhymes and punches.
Vote-Ice Vote on these: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136079 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135031 |
Uppn FOr a few more votes
drop a link and we will hit it up |
well, Deliquint brought a hot verse but Ice Pick you straight cut him up.great multi's n wordplay, nice vocab, nice flow. only thing didnt jive wit me was this part....
'll shift-ya-appendix when calicos hit-you-ya-shins-split/ (great line feelin it) flippin'-ya-lid-quick in mid-drift..listen-ya-skin'z-drenced$$ (^^^this the part I didnt get, maybe a sp mistake and I just lost the flow there.) Deliquint to me dis ya best line here.... ~Man Your Rhymes Couldnt Bubble Over If They was A Batch-Of-Crack~ keep doin ya thang both of ya, ya both got skillz yo vote: Ice Pick |
you all should vote for del.he way betta and he kick all yo asses.
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uppin the last vote
we will return the favor promise 1 |
Uppn For One More Vote
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Uppn FOr a few more votes
drop a link and we will hit it up |
ONE more vote
get this closed I wanna battle more people |
Uppn FOr a few more votes
drop a link and we will hit it up |
fuk...need 1 more vote on this shit, to be thru...'
vote either way dont matter for who |
Both had nice punches, but wordplay was Ice Pick.. Personals: Ice Pick< nigga kept attackin' like a muthafukka... I liked Deliquent's verse because it had an overall good flow... Ice Pick: creative writing scheme won this over..
my vote/ Ice Pick ~wun~ |
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