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2H2L Vs. Ice Dick i mean Pick
max of 20 bars u got half hour after check-in no hate/crew votes also no feeding go u spit 1rst.
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well ill spit 1rst since ur offline spit when u get back on
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Ice pick listen to this spit//
While ur suckin my dick// Its bigger then that homo u so call ur "Trick"// Your rymes are whack there not slick// While ur down there can u rub my sack// What kinda name is Ice pick u have no talen other then suckin dick// My flowes are tighter then ur tricks pussyholes// When u see my name and my flowes u gotta pay tolls// Your flowes aint as smoot as ice// I toss them out like chinese toss fake pork friend rice// you know my rymes are nice// and this was only a taste of the hard 22 blue spice.// |
KEEP TALKIN.. Son
i'll PUNCH IN ya VOCAL CORDS..now start da BEAT BOXIN// CAN'T AFFORD SHOES..You a joke, kid goes around FEET KNOCKIN// U'll NEVE BEAT ME son..STICK WIT YA DREAMS.. 50 cent, eminem,? WHy when you aint rapping on full steam/// Ya style is FORCED..PUSH DOWN da GRAVITY// Came wit more FILLERS than DENTIST..DRILL thru dis CAVITY// Your Challenge a SIN..consider ur VERSE BLASPHEMY// A casualty, i blast many, pass plenty and harass twenty// Bruise dents..gonna gimme ur TWO CENTS? more like HALF PENNIES// Snatch fleshies..Ice Pick CAUSE MORE DEATH than CANCER// Short circuit..I work it perfect..Replacin Equations..I gotcha ya answer// Da soul taker..Dis is like ORPHANS MEETIN THEY DADDY'S.. cus SON u've MET YA MAKER// Set displacer..ya penis fell off, now u want moms to Get Da Stapler// I GET MORE FEEDBACK than PORNO AUCTIONS in PRISONS// Spittin incission..leave ya split in divisions..I hit ya petitions// Kid wants mah AUTOGRAPH..Why don't u JACK ME OFF then u'll get my JOHN HAN{d} COCK// shine more than Glam Rock..I Ram Jocks..Leave u Stand Shocked// |
ok im voting already because even though you both are new one of you SUCKS SO MUCH ASS YOU SHOULD STOP NOW AND RETURN TO YOUR OTHER HOBBY MASTRUBATING you had so many horrible shitty rhymes that it literally didn't flow and heard my haed. atleast i could go along with ice pick.
vote: icepick -hic's brother |
2HarD2LoSe
Ice pick listen to this spit// While ur suckin my dick// Its bigger then that homo u so call ur "Trick"// Your rymes are whack there not slick// While ur down there can u rub my sack// What kinda name is Ice pick u have no talen other then suckin dick// My flowes are tighter then ur tricks pussyholes// When u see my name and my flowes u gotta pay tolls// Your flowes aint as smoot as ice// I toss them out like chinese toss fake pork friend rice// you know my rymes are nice// and this was only a taste of the hard 22 blue spice.// ^no offence...but line after line was horrible... Ice Pick i'll PUNCH IN ya VOCAL CORDS..now start da BEAT BOXIN// CAN'T AFFORD SHOES..You a joke, kid goes around FEET KNOCKIN// ^between bad n' decent...atleast der was wordplay U'll NEVE BEAT ME son..STICK WIT YA DREAMS.. 50 cent, eminem,? WHy when you aint rapping on full steam/// ^no... Ya style is FORCED..PUSH DOWN da GRAVITY// Came wit more FILLERS than DENTIST..DRILL thru dis CAVITY// ^played concept...but seriously...this right here won you the battle... Overall: I won't even break down the rest of Ice Pick's verse...at that point...the battle was already over and he won...Hard2Lose...you need to come hard with some creative shit...ramblin bout how he's suckin' ur dick isn't exactly effective...that won't even get u on respect on the streets...just a bunch of peeps dissin' u. I'm tryin to help...not make fun. Get at some cats to help u elevate.. /v- Ice Pick Return the favour and drop honest votes on the battles in my signature please. I took the time to break yours down...you can take the time to vote on mine. |
This was a bad battle, but imma go wit icepick, because his verse was somewhat decent...the other dudes verse was pathetic, sounded like a 2nd grader, if that...Honestly man you should give up rappin, you had no flow, no punches, no attempted personals, your struc was the only thing you had....ICe pick takes it with better everything in every category...
V/ Icepick |
Ice Pick Ripped Dis Dude......no Offense 2h2l........plain And Simple----vote Goes To Ice Pick
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ok this battle was Horrible but ima leave my vote anyway 2h2l you gotta elevate you had punches but they were 2 damn simple actually think before you type man like you just typed down the 1st thing that came to your head, your structure was about the only thing you had goin for you in this one Pick you had punches but they were simple and you can use complexity and some meta's and ya need to up ya personals, ya structure was alright, you had a horrible drop but it still got you the win both ya need 2 elevate immediatly before you even think about doin another battle my vote-IcePick |
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no personals at all ice had one good bar with came with fillers to drill this cavity but that was it.
ice-wordplay vocab disses originality and punches hard to lose -flow and disrespect but you talked about him sucking you too much and it sounded real homo and thats why you lost this battle.ice you started good then crashed into whackland but hard 2 lose he started in trashland and never left. vote-icepick give honest votes on my battles and ill do the same |
before ice pick even started he won. . . my advice wid stop the gay suck my dick thing IT DONT WORK. . .
i think u shud go for other styles 2h2l. . .and try using punchlines and metaphors, , , ice picks verse werent all that either. . .but he won, flow was good opener was ok, finish was the same, i think there was personal i can account for, but weak and if there was any metaphors. . they were so weak i didnt see em. . . this whole battle was weak but yo ice pick u won. . . |
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