String vs WillNova
 

spit 10-20 bars 30 min limit thas about it other than that lets get it poppin

ight lets go nova u spit first get on wit the flowin

dog where u at frreal i aint got all night hurry up n spit

i admire the effort at least u showed up//
fuck extortion, u really gon' be blown up//
then sewn up, heart specailist got his work cut out//
tap ya veins like crack heads, have ya veins bust out//
connect the IV, thas gonna help u live and eat//
carnivorous type nigga, love to tear up fresh meat//
u stand wit cold feet, I smell fear like canines//
u was talkin big, I came to take mine//
no hate rhymes, I stand on top to always reign//
u need brains to beat the system, Imma pull a few strings//
creater of real pain, leave u there to lick ya scars//
like a real pussy, eight live left, jus work on them bars//

dont make a nigga bust the rueger
cuz u n ya whole crew get wiped out like scuff remover
my flow hot, prepare to eat it
u so wack u couldnt even run wit a paraplegic
one in the trunk, a spares convenient
if u knew i was this nice u wouldnta dared competed
look how my neck frozen, peep how my checks swollen
string puttin up big numbers like exponents
i put caps in ya head, like i hang wit jews
my weed stick to the pouch, like kangaroos
smother u put u out, im sittin on niggas
call me ex-lax cuz i b shittin on niggas
yo i cant help but win
n if empty my wallet it look like a celtics gym
dont turn ya back on me son face the truth
when i get on the mic ima blaze the booth
go liftlsome weights, n then raise the roof
come back, packin n then slay ya troops
Nova say he hot, who believin this nigga?
my guns lilke pythons the way i b squeezin the trigga HAA:shoot: :shoot:

lets get some votes in this piece n get this thing runnin

No punchlines in this battle so I guess Imma rely on vocab and shit. String took it with a good structure. Both had a good structure which made the rhyme go smoother. I just think String had a better one. He had a few punches in there that werent hittin that hard. But i didnt see any in Novas. String takes this with good vocab, a better structure and that one celtics gym wallet line. That was a hot one.

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oh strings, u came a lot hardeer than I expected, good shit.... uppin fo votes and feedback

i dont know much about this battle shit but i think both ya'll good so keep it up,but on the real string was good,and will had good balance and structure.

come lets get these vote in finish it and uppin ya kno

alright... hands down it goes to string, Willnovas punchlines didn't have to much effect on the battle and Strings hit harders Vote-String

Yo dis wasnt a real good battle.....it was jus aiight. But i gotta give tha vote to string cuz he came harder wit flow and structure. His punchez was a little better than tha otha guyz so he gotz ma vot.Close battle
Flow-string
Structure-string
vocab-tie
punchez-string
v/string

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string was aight, but will nova jus took it for me. . .

i got to say ur both tight, try jus keep comin. . .

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String takes this with better punches and some good wordplay.Willnova,you did pretty good its just it feels all your verses are the same.good ideas tho.

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willnova cuz his rhymed and was a liitle harder coo battle

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Aight.. This battle was pretty much one-sided. String came alot harder and his punchlines hit hard.. WillNova didn't really have any punchlines and his ryhmes were pretty simple... But String gets this one...

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WillNova
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure is ok...flow fell off a little bit...u had a few multis...wordplay wasnt good...none of ur punches connected...no good personals..

String9487
structure is alright...flow fell off a lil...u had a few multis...wordplay was wack...a few of ur punches connected....no good personals...

Overall
both had an ok structure...both had a decent flow...both had a few multis...neither had good wordplay...neither had good personals...string had more connecting punches...so basing off of that...string gets my vote...

VOTE - STRING9487