seveno8 vs *The~Star*
 

iighyt deez r the rules u set right?
10 lines max
no d/r
no stretching
I spit 1st

soon as u check in i'll spit my verse iight

Cool...Let's get it poppin....Good Luck

yo i fucked up dis line> ... "u aint no "star" you just don't light in the closet
i must be a QB cuz i got dis shit in da pocket"

replace don't with the :)

Nice verse, but I’m taking this………
 

I think Star took this one. She had good rhymes in hers. 708 had good shit too but that "dope" line is kinda played out. Star came with some originality in metas like the tornado and winded one. Star gets the vote with good punches and metas.

Vote-Star

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708,
ya punches were def. dope shit, little multiples thats aiight, ya wordplay was the tighthest, it was a bit hard to flow to, the personals were alright, nothing bad nothing really amazing, some dope shit though

The Star,
Your mulitples and flow was fucking amazing, that shit sounded dope in my head, other than that though you didnt really have much, nice vocab, this would make a good audio, but for text 708 takes this

vote: 708


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uppin 4 some votes plz!!!! this prolly one be my last time uppin so plz vote on dis....
i'll return da favor.... and if u 2 lazy 2 vote on this at least check out my open mics...

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this aint a crew vote..caus eim not part of hardwood no more


708 came wit some heat,nice structure da boi had it movin nice..punches was the down side though none of em stood out and just gave him an advantage
star punches wasnt all that either but they hit better than 708..stucture fell off toward the middle but.no enought o get a loss

vote ,,,,,,,,,,,,,star

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ok can u stil vote on this battle? if not close this so i can battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz i even asked 4 my battle wit T-WEST 2 be closed like 3 days ago and its still not closed if an admin is reading dis close my battel wit T-WEST plz and if nobody can vote this one 2

ok:
708:you had a decent verse, a little short but you had punches and personals, flow was good too,structure is weird but i like it, but u just didnt come as hard as star...............
star:you had the better verse here, your vocab was better, flow was good too, i liked ya punches a lot, nice wording, liked the closer too, overall good job both..
VOTE:star

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3-0 Me

tHE sTAR WAS SHINING ON THIS.. IT IS OBVIOUS THAT SHE WON. HERS WAS MORE COMPLEX, BETTER WORDPLAY.. BETTER PUNCHES AND EVERYTHING.. STUCTURE WAS GOOD, AND IT WASN'T REALLY THAT CLOSE. SO MY VOTE GOES TO THE STAR.. CAN YOU RETURN THE FAVOR WIN A MATURE VOTE IN THIS ONE..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=133155

708- Structure Was Ok... Flow Was Good, Punches Were There.. And Wordplay Was Ok

The Star- Punches Were Ok, Had A Personal Or 2....Structure Was Ok... Flow Was Off In Some Parts Cuz You Left A Words Out Like In Your Last Line...

Punches- Tie
Personal- The Star
Flow- 708
Wordplay- 708
Metaphors- The Star
Multis- Niether
Originality- Tie
Structure- Tie...

Final Vote--- The Star
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708 i liked your punches but they werent as personal as stars,originality n creativity was in stars verse 2,star had more content in her verse,708 structure could've been better n more consistent...it was a good battle but i don't think it was that close,props ta both emcees though "good battle"no hate ya'll
vote/star
return da vote
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...059#post1440059

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4-0 ME

Need one more vote,I'll will hit the battles back

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yo pin 4 votes... jus end this battle she won, so i give props 2 ya girl :)
uppin 4 one vote

708 you getting beat faster then alonely horny niggas errection and you couldnt shine in the closet you aint a star was a good personnal.star your flow was ok but 708s was better as were his punches and disses.struture was good for both of you.star you had 0 personals and that tornado shit was not hot gee is a dr he always votes for the worst verse and always for fems so hes either a ugly lonely nigga or a lesbian.708 gets the vote.




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not the best verse i seen from either of you but hey..

708- short verse but good quality (punches, things that matter) good job..

*The~Star*- nice verse also a lil' longer and nice use of multis...

closer-Star:
I’m stabbing ya rhymes up more than OJ Simpson stabbed his wife
That’s a infinite amount of times, cold-hearted, you longer have life

opener-708:
dis gon' be more one sided than the november election
i'm beatin dis bitch faster than a horny niggas lonley erection
^lmao, nice battle u two but in my opinion length isn't a factor it's the quality.. and neither one of y'all dropped a better structure so my vote..

708
good job Star mami u doin' ya thang, keep it up..
~wun~

Damn this was a close battle, I would have to say that The Star took this because of punches with more complexity. 708 your style was alright and it will probably get you through many peopel but you need to develop your punches a little more. Both of you had nice wordplay and flow. 708 you also have some okay personals nothing over the top hot, but keep elivate'n. The Star takes this with better personals and more creative punches.