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raw killa 07-21-04 11:41 AM

playboy thugs
 
intro

damn now days we got a bunch of fake thugs...
2 me half these fakes r fucks...
n u kno wut i call them....porno thugs...
hahahahahahahahaha check it

verse 1

wuts up wit these fake niggaz screamin ride o die,ya realize afta da tru die,niggaz start reppin talkin good but tell nuttin but lies//
u wanna claim thug,than b down 4 a nigga n throw ya slugs,crips n bloods,
thses niggaz real da rest r jus porno thugs//
porno thugs get paid 2 act tough,make they audience baleeve they rough,
ive had enough,of dis shit,dis makin me sick n im throwin up//
niggaz got beef but deal gravy,shady niggaz,dat r scared 3 bust they triggaz n hit they woman cuz they 2 lazy//
thug passion,im da new assasin,ready n armed 4 n e fag trespassin//
im significant n rhyme malakolous lines,mind blowin,showin da tru meanin,cuz im possed by demons,bred through satan's semon//
i been locked up,n my head is fucked up worse than a retarded kids,dats
why da words i spit,r deadly fuckin sick//
yo its allik war,im da most feared across da young generation thus far,ive been hit by cars u think ya guns can stop me,a fuckin ford explorer couldnt drop me//

-hook-

im sendin rhino slugs,at these porno thugs//
u ask god 4 repent,when god repents 2 me/
im not da greatest,or a godest
n im not jus an artisit,im a arcinist//
niggaz screamin ride o die,n deny gettin paid 2 rep it,actin like they really carry a weapon//

verse2

niggaz reppin,sayin they carry weapon's,tek 9's n smith n wesson's,when really they carry they beat ass home cuz of bein taught a lesson,n countin they blessin's//
unroyalty,claimin loyalty,all dis fakeness,n whackness is annoying me//
i dont care if u crip or blood,cuz most so called thugs,reall strip in clubs,porno thugs,damn shits crazy hugs,of love,sellin drugs,dealin slugs,smokin newports destroyin our lungs//
well i dont give a fuck bout death,u wanna kill me than do it than,b4 i fuckin flip n kill u,n n e 1 of ur fam//
niggaz aint real,but "im real" like j-lo n ja rule,laughin at these idiot fools,u come 2 kill me but end up in ya own blood pool//
ima raw killa,comin back illa than b4,not hardcore,but dont do porn//
im silent n swift,like a weird mis,off swifty n kiss n im not jada im nuttin at all
jus a gust of vapor,usin da wind 2 write these papers//
its allik war sendin sluggah punches,da lines on my papers serve as trenches,makin niggaz turn into bitches,words so ill i dont need "punches"//
when u come 2 battle,its not a battle its a privelege,cuz i stay on top of da flow like dishwasher liquid//

-hook-

verse3

its me again,battlin gurls like eminem,wit a flow dat seem 2 neva end//
jus leave ya confussed like damn how he got so many flows,shit seems impossible,thowin bo's like ludacris,n got u knockin urself out like jadakiss//
shit hasnt changed,jus a worse deranged mind,stuck in da flow of time,dat trances u into my flow of rhymes//
i got a dictionary brain,but still got bitches givin me brains n teachin me classes,while im palmin they asses//
my words contravene,ya veins,into ya brain,givin u migrains,y u strain,4 ideas,my ideas strain 2 find pens n pads//
so u really wanna play thug,send n catch slugs,4 da niggaz u love//
r u really ready 2 lie 4 a nigga,or die 4 ya nigga,shed tears n cry when ya nigga dies n avenge ya nigga//
niggaz arent ready,u neva been ready 4 my release,so please stop tlkn thug
b4 i fill ya heart n mug,wit slugs//
2 many whack mc's,they flows stink worse than festies,n u want beef than come meet me,in santee,cali//
u nuttin but fag but fuck wit me ill have ya scared straight,u betta recognize cuz my name does hold weight//

G_$peed 07-21-04 11:45 AM

shits coo

raw killa 07-21-04 11:54 AM

yea dis shit old as fuck so kiss my ass if u wanna tlk shit do it in a battle not behind ur keyboard bitch

G_$peed 07-21-04 12:06 PM

shits coo. and so are you.

SHY 07-21-04 12:11 PM

yo ruff there is no need to explain yourself to these bitch ass niggas that shit was fire holla at your girl

G_$peed 07-21-04 12:15 PM

hey i think his shit was on fia

raw killa 07-21-04 12:39 PM

holla back
 
ayt im happy 2 c dis meaningless beef is through thanx ruff tuff thug n fo sho shortie shy good lookin holla back peace oh bye da way if ya'll like dis one check out my others n my battle at frontline against eyedentdy thanx 1 luv peace out :banghead:

cassthegreat 07-21-04 12:42 PM

yo raw killa that shit was just ok, U SHOULD WORK ON URE WORDPLAY URE SHIT IS MAD SIMPLE

raw killa 07-21-04 12:43 PM

thanx check out sum of my newer shit dat i first posted dis shit like i said 2 3 yrs old so there's da reasoning...lmmao peace out

atti? 07-21-04 01:00 PM

Ayo That Was Pretty Nice Mayn...
I Mean I Dont Really Feel The Whole Gansta Trype Scenario But I Can Apreciate Your Lyrical Ability...
Flow Was Nice, As Much As I Dont Like The Concept You Did Stay Consistant And Overall This Is A Nice Pice Mayn...
~One~

raw killa 07-21-04 01:08 PM

wasnt tryin 2 show my own gangsta i was tryin 2 critizice sum of da fake rappers we got out now days(clears throat) n (coughs) ja rule/benzino lol peace thanx though peace

2HarD2LoSe 07-21-04 04:43 PM

its ok u need more work though

raw killa 07-22-04 06:13 PM

thanx for da honest opinion but plz give me more feedback help a homie out peace
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Keith Moon 07-22-04 06:19 PM

plz fix your structure make every line rhyme with each other instead of doin on line ber bar...........and stop makin so many goddamn open mics lmao......

raw killa 07-22-04 06:27 PM

lol i can do how ever i feel im jus tryin 2 get sum shit on here so people can see where im at been at n where im goin i can do n e thing my mind was made 4 dis but thanx bigchase n sure u eva feelin like a battle or callabo tell me n set it up im down for n e thing

soultress89 07-22-04 08:23 PM

:thumbup: I think its good and all i'm not the rappin kind but i've heard anuff to know when its goood so keep rollin with the fake gansta shit it willl help, also i di'nt get the ending might u explain that to me. :evilgrin: SoulTress89 ~1~

raw killa 07-22-04 09:03 PM

well dis song is like 4-5 yrs old i jus posted it 2 see wut peeps were thinkin of it.....
soultress89
da endin well when i wrote i had jus got out of juvi hall n i belonged 2 a group back then called ghost ridaz on www.rapcheck.com n sha was 1 of da people in da group so i was basically sayin hey im back wanna beef come meet me n clarifyin facts bout how a lot of these rappers these days whack as fuck n fakes as shit like say no names ja rule wit his fake thuggin self homie went soft like mase went religous but yea check my otha shit out if u liked dis drop thanx 4 da replies uppin 4 more holla back

oh as far as da "so keep rollin with the fake gansta shit it willl help" nuttin fake over here holla back peace 1 luv im out


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