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%$ WordMan 07-21-04 01:09 PM

Wordman VS Soulless
 
Aight Ill spit soon...

Soulless 07-21-04 01:14 PM

i forgot i accepted this.... .but i will drop soon

Soulless 07-21-04 01:49 PM

........................................

u about to drop......

.. i dont wanna waste ne thing

%$ WordMan 07-21-04 01:55 PM

*Womenliness - women Attributes
To have a Soul is to be a man.. If he is Soul-less then...!!!


This Boy Dont Pro-Claim his Wins Cause he a chump
He got More of a Net-Loss Then Donald Trump
Spritual Hand Of God, Ripping In this Rap Game
Causing Dipressing Stumps,
Iam Eating this Kid Up faster then resses Pieces
Making Him Disspear in RB Faster the endangered Spieces
His Name Soulless Speaks, Of NoN-Fellowness
Soul States A Man, So Less Means he a womenliness*
I Flating this Guys Pride, More the Permanent Press
I suggest Taking ya Life write Now and Face-yah-Redress
Cause Like A Aids CAse-life-wont-Progress

Soulless 07-21-04 01:57 PM

Unfortunately….

I throw quick-wit-verbs.. Just to kill-these-herbs,
your not good…..or even close to being sick-wit-words!!! (wordman…lol)
Ya only see verses-in-gospels.. NEWBIE so no personals-are-possible…is it??
So ill give u one tip listen!… battling soulless….equals-a-hospital-visit..
.im just fuckin….ur a kid… so snap~crackle then pop and watch I’l top-this-jock
Ha! The wordman.. couldn’t play my lines.. If my name was HOP-SCOTCH!!!
Just come hard…but..damn… ill still kill ya-words-man..
Cuz-I-can, tell your a fake white punk… covered in wrist-bands!!
you pretend!!! Cuz damn ur even atcha ’wits’-ends…
Dun worry… just create another alias…. And u can try-again…..

..just key’in…again!

Sonned!!!!

%$ WordMan 07-21-04 02:11 PM

Yo just uppin for Votes.. Nedd %0 characters thats Gay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

%$ WordMan 07-21-04 02:33 PM

Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

%$ WordMan 07-21-04 04:41 PM

Uppiinnn ... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....

Soulless 07-21-04 05:57 PM

.................................................. .............. i vote.... people vote back!!!

ibraheem 07-21-04 08:29 PM

yo voting back
 
%$ WordMan

This Boy Dont Pro-Claim his Wins Cause he a chump
He got More of a Net-Loss Then Donald Trump
This Boy Dont Pro-Claim his Wins Cause he a chump
personal 5/10

He got More of a Net-Loss Then Donald Trump
Spritual Hand Of God, Ripping In this Rap Game
Causing Dipressing Stumps,
ok 4/10

Iam Eating this Kid Up faster then resses Pieces
Making Him Disspear in RB Faster the endangered Spieces
use of imagination but aint that good 5/10

His Name Soulless Speaks, Of NoN-Fellowness
Soul States A Man, So Less Means he a womenliness*
I Flating this Guys Pride, More the Permanent Press
personal 5/10

I suggest Taking ya Life write Now and Face-yah-Redress
Cause Like A Aids CAse-life-wont-Progress
best line nice ending 7/10

26/50
5.2/10
nice flow good use of personals punches aint that hard structures is ok need more imagination

Soulless

I throw quick-wit-verbs.. Just to kill-these-herbs,
your not good…..or even close to being sick-wit-words!!! (wordman…lol)
not bad give it 6/10

Ya only see verses-in-gospels.. NEWBIE so no personals-are-possible…is it??
So ill give u one tip listen!… battling soulless….equals-a-hospital-visit..
wack 3/10 didnt feel the flow or the first line at all

.im just fuckin….ur a kid… so snap~crackle then pop and watch I’l top-this-jock
Ha! The wordman.. couldn’t play my lines.. If my name was HOP-SCOTCH!!!
bad flow personal though 5/10

Just come hard…but..damn… ill still kill ya-words-man..
Cuz-I-can, tell your a fake white punk… covered in wrist-bands!!
hate the racism 4/10

you pretend!!! Cuz damn ur even atcha ’wits’-ends…
Dun worry… just create another alias…. And u can try-again…..
best punch liked it 6/10

24/50
4.8/10
the flow fucked you up had as much personals but punches wer weak except for the last one have to give it to wordman for having better flow
vote;wordman

with respect for both of you

hit my battles

peace

%$ WordMan 07-21-04 10:04 PM

thankz for the Vote man... 1-0 me.. yah i hate the Racism too,,, I hit yah back, gonna vote on yah battle

2HarD2LoSe 07-21-04 10:59 PM

ya word man got this.... good battle though guys return the favor plz:


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136555

Sean Gunner 07-21-04 11:14 PM

hey all. wordman had much better punches and personals. the flow was decent, but rhymin wuz kinda weird. souless u had decent punches and all, but your flow was just out there. so wordman gets my vote.

Kizza 07-21-04 11:24 PM

Wordman you had a good easy flow and a not bad structure for your delivery. Great personals, ok punches.


Souless I had a hard time following your flow due to a different structure, actually don't let this get ya head big but I re read it and it kinda sound a bit like common style, good punches but not personal at all.

this is a splitting hair vote but I'ma go wit WordMan

Vote: Wordman

Deliquint 07-21-04 11:48 PM

yo look word man had some tite ass multis in his shit which helped him win this battle
shard2loose had some good shit in his but needed to step his game up a bit wit it
vote:wordman

return the favor
delinquint vs. optimal
delinquint vs. novakane

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Deliquint 07-21-04 11:49 PM

^yo i accedentally gfot confused mah bad i meant soul lol mah bad but my vote is still the same

The Jett 07-21-04 11:52 PM

New to RB
New to RB
New to RB
3-0...Lmao...READ,
1. 2Hard's clearly hate cus he just got destroyed by souless himself. Report these votes an get em removed.
Mod's better fix this. Or where gonna lose a nice new member because of herbs
My Vote.- Soulless
The Logic...chek it.
He got More of a Net-Loss Then Donald Trump
^played out like Madona's bush-
Making Him Disspear in RB Faster the endangered Spieces
^since when did any edangered species disapear fast?
Ya only see verses-in-gospels.. NEWBIE so no personals-are-possible…is it??
So ill give u one tip listen!… battling soulless….equals-a-hospital-visit..
^check the wordplay-punches-an personal's....along wit kick ass flo.

Stop bein ass's in FL"s an be honest -1

%$ WordMan 07-22-04 02:57 AM

Who the Fuck are you comming into this battle any Pressing Hate on me.. get a life buddy.. Fuck wit yah own threads.. the peeps voted.. and thats how the shit is.. set it up bitch and i'll battle yah punk ass..


Anyway.. enough wit the small time.. 4-1 me.. i think.. unless the pole is the only thing that counts..

%$ WordMan 07-22-04 08:40 AM

Uppin!!!!!!! for VOtes/// Dont have Enough Posts yet.. but Soon to Vote

Soulless 07-22-04 12:57 PM

.....Hey any more wack FL's wanna come and give a non-explained vote!!!!!!!!! liek all the votes this kid has got^^^....

**u can hate on me while u r doin it that cool...



...ergg

%$ WordMan 07-22-04 01:46 PM

Aight there were 3 Explained Votes.... 2-1 Me... Cooo...

It should be 2-0.. that vote you got was Hate For Shooo..

KroNuz 07-22-04 01:51 PM

Punches:Tie
Flow: Wordman
Wordplay: Tie
Mutlis: Niether
Originality: Wordman (liked tha trump line, coulda been written better but good)

Final Vote : Wordman

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

%$ WordMan 07-23-04 09:06 AM

Uppin For Votes..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Soulless 07-23-04 11:37 AM

ha ... mods... notcied this.....

u must feel like an ass.....


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votes.... uppin

%$ WordMan 07-23-04 02:51 PM

Why would i feel like an ass.. Cause i got 5 votes compared to your 1.. i dont give a fuck.. 1-1// w/e.... whos laughing now..


Uppin

The Reaper 07-23-04 03:00 PM

Punches: Wordman
Personals: Wordman
Structure/Flow: Wordman
Originality: tie

This was actually closer than it looks from what you see up here. They were all close to ties, but I think wordman just came a LITTLE bit harder and took the vote.

v/ Wordman

DV8 07-23-04 03:44 PM

K THIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE I LIKED BOTH YA'LL VERSES,SO PROPS TA BOTH...
souless:you had good structure even though some of your lines were stretched "not 2 bad though"i liked your punches they were original,you worked off his name well i thought,good verse overall...
wordman:structure was good,punches came a bit weaker,i did'nt like your personals"2 me they werent hitting"vocab was ok,your concepts were a bit played but still a good verse....i haveta give my vote ta soulless though,original punches.......
no hate emcees this was close....i don't think i missed anything...pc
VOTE/SOULLESS

fluidmoon 07-23-04 03:47 PM

ok, heres how i see this shit:
you both had good flow and structure in your verses,
wordman: your opener was good and you had some decent punches, but no personals really or wordplay to work off of, overall your verse was ok tho....
soulless:you had the overall better verse here because you had creativity in your verse, and used good wordplay, i think your punches also came stronger........overall good job....
VOTE:SOULLESS

Soulless 07-23-04 03:48 PM

thats funny how everyvote i have is from vets..... and all the votes u get are from newbs....

uppin

Soulless 07-25-04 01:32 PM

.... uppin ......................... ..............

%$ WordMan 07-26-04 08:34 AM

!!!!!!!!Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..........Uppin!!!.. .

B-MAC 07-26-04 10:41 AM

Uppin...... Changed my Name... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Soulless 07-26-04 04:07 PM

uppin..............................

B-MAC 07-27-04 09:01 AM

.........................uppin....................

pk 07-27-04 11:59 AM

wordman had good punches and flow btu this was a really good battle was hard to pic but wordman got my vote

B-MAC 07-27-04 03:53 PM

Uppin............................................. .

B-MAC 07-27-04 03:53 PM

Will... People Please Explain Them......fuck......

Soulless 07-27-04 11:00 PM

yea 4 real............................ no wack newbs with no wins or skill to judge can vote....

B-MAC 07-28-04 08:37 AM

uppin, Once again... 3-3... lets get this battle Closed.. People vote!!!!.. ill hit yah back when i get the Posts...

Word!

Soulless 07-28-04 12:58 PM

uppin


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