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Crew Battle: (LV) Insane Joker vs. (LS) Traxik
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Check in, forgot about this one, my verse will be up in 2 hours at the most, cos I'm goin on holiday, I'll give u sumthin quick meta
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its the newest member vs. the leader traxik got myself coughin punches like his verse was toxic lethal sinz, it was a sin to even make this crew he isnt 'real' cuz he just got his sigg of google i spit faster then girls havin their period as they excrete unlike Kayne the only thing your producing is losses not beats playgirl, its the only thing u can watch for ur dick 2 harden i could still pull more hoes, even if this bitch was in a garden its time to give up, or spit somethin better then a legendary piece if he ate all the meals he made a Mcdonalds, hes be on MTV's Im Obsese |
That was not a battle, the rhymin's just too weak,
Say I produce the losses, but now I got 1 more defeat, Thats right I'm the leader, which makes you just a follower, You got no smarts, no brains, classified as 'hollow top'* Sigs dont mean nothing much, but yours means so much less, 'Lyrical Virus' - meanin your weak as hell, at best, Playboy's what I read, a Playboy is what I am, you couldnt pull hoes, if you lived in amsterdam** Don't think of this a loss, think of it as I'm better, Beat you as Joker, come back and rip you as Met-ah * hollow top, aka, nothing there ** Amsterdam, where prostitution and drugs are legal, and everywhere aiiiight uppin for votes, ~peace~ |
uppin for votes |
feeder.. cant come up with a verse.. cough cough cough
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Insaine Won This Wit Creativity Nice Drop
Open- its the newest member vs. the leader traxik got myself coughin punches like his verse was toxic 8/10 That was not a battle, the rhymin's just too weak, Say I produce the losses, but now I got 1 more defeat, 7.5/10 Closer its time to give up, or spit somethin better then a legendary piece if he ate all the meals he made a Mcdonalds, hes be on MTV's Im Obsese 8/10 Don't think of this a loss, think of it as I'm better, Beat you as Joker, come back and rip you as Met-ah 7/10 winner-Joker |
thanks ^^ uppin 3..................................
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uppın from turkey ppl VOTE
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dont sleep on thıs people ım bored holıday ıs borın vote ı hate turkısh keyboards |
bump 4........................................... my alias doesnt count =)
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its the newest member vs. the leader traxik got myself coughin punches like his verse was toxic 6/10 lethal sinz, it was a sin to even make this crew he isnt 'real' cuz he just got his sigg of google 5/10 i spit faster then girls havin their period as they excrete unlike Kayne the only thing your producing is losses not beats 7/10 playgirl, its the only thing u can watch for ur dick 2 harden i could still pull more hoes, even if this bitch was in a garden 6/10 its time to give up, or spit somethin better then a legendary piece if he ate all the meals he made a Mcdonalds, hes be on MTV's Im Obsese 7/10 That was not a battle, the rhymin's just too weak, Say I produce the losses, but now I got 1 more defeat, 6/10 Thats right I'm the leader, which makes you just a follower, You got no smarts, no brains, classified as 'hollow top'* 5/10 Sigs dont mean nothing much, but yours means so much less, 'Lyrical Virus' - meanin your weak as hell, at best, 6/10 Playboy's what I read, a Playboy is what I am, you couldnt pull hoes, if you lived in amsterdam** 7/10 Don't think of this a loss, think of it as I'm better, Beat you as Joker, come back and rip you as Met-ah 7/10 this came down 2 better wordplay and harder punches My vote~~~~Insane |
bump 5 .. last up c'mon peeps !!!...................
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The Insane Joker Took this..
His personals hit you, and his opener was better to.. Traxik, you should work on your rhymes and wordplay,.. coz he got you on that and punchlines.. Stucture was okay for both of you, no one takes that really.. But all in all, Insane joker had a better verse.. V/Insane Joker Return favor with an honest drop in my battle will you? |
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Insane Joker- cool verse the opener was too simple though
but the rest was ok...you had some pretty good punches and personals in there flow was good pretty good drop Tra-ok verse opener was meh rest was alright you could of thrown some better punches in there to make your verse harder and some more personals but ok drop v/insane joker. |
Both We Alittle Off...
But Im Gonna Say Joker... And Im Not Gonna Break It Down Because I Would Only Be Repeating... On Short Han, His Punches Were Harder Hitting... Vote: Insane Joker .One. |
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