battle:tony montana vs unfortunate
 

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no crew or d/r votes
tag battle the star and tony montana vs unfortunate and 2h2l
verses due 2morrow at midnight both teems

vs 2h2l
 

its ya boy tony montana also known as scarface
me and the star on a teem lets u know u got 2nd place
u might as well go home while ill still allow u to
im battlin beaver and everlast see wat they put themselves through
ill blast u and end this easily won battle with no hesitation
2h lets unfortunate put it in his ass and calls it a sticky situation
the time has come for this team to get shot down
its like im rap battlin against a fake crusty the clown
he uses the excuses like unfortunate put me up to this
i wouldnt have battled if i knew he could kill both us<(2h2l sayin this)

vs unfortunate
 

unfortunate asked for this battle sayin he could beet me and a girl
well talk is cheep i knew so i decided to give this rap battle a wirl
u gotta have permission from your parents before you even cuss
lets u know that ur not ready for a rap battle against the 2 of us
u cant get on at midnight its past ur 10 o clock curfew
have ur mom bitchin like "its too late for these 2 to hurt u"
u fake ass eminem u here the racist shit he said?
talkin bout hes in the kkk and cant wait till all blaks are dead(unfortunate is dareturn)
well realize the shit you say cuz u reap wat the fuk you sew
youll be lucky if u ever again get a blak persons vote.............

when the rest of everybody drops, i'll hit up this with a vote, until then y'all stay up..
~wun~

yo close this shit aint noone else droppin its my win cuz they accepted the rules

nigga want are you talking about we accepted the rules i didnt accept shit you just said hey u got a new battle.

bitch u did accept now spit or close it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You were both pretty good .. but i think Tony won....

but unfortunetly ... unfortunate didnt post ... so ... tony won
lol

Nice verse I cant vote yet
but dis is goin to be da first one I vote on

Dis battle was ok
too bad I cant vote yet but Il will get back to u when I can

Nice drop really feelin it
I liked ur structure punchlines and overall verse
TOO bad I cant vote yet but I will be sure to do it

vote for me since he aint droppin he bitched out so give me some votes

tony your second drop was sick fuk I liked the punches nice drops.

yo sum1 vote for me cuz he aint drop and i need this battle closed he bitched out

tony had a better word play and vocb.

VOTE: Tony

yo uppin for years please vote for me so it can be ova thanx thanx thanx

Yo Tony Return An Fav

A No Show Tony Got Dis But Either Way I Like Yo Punches And Flowz

montana
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

unfortunate
Punches were good too not as hard tho…
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

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