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Amayze Vs Murda Gram
10-15 Lines
U Spit First N Bring It |
dis nigga ova her bring wack shit to me /
fuck around find his brains up the creek / he dont know i'm crazy lock his azz in a dungeon/ rip out yo kidneys use dem bitches as sponges / get on some crazy shit that you dont even know though / rip out yo intestants use yo ass like you was a yo yo / see i'm the heisman trophy winner numba 1 in da draft / yo azz not even ranked they see u and laugh / see u tried losing yo stamina / heres two dollars go get you some viagra / so please dont try cause this shit dont stop / try me and i lay the smack down on yo azz like i was the rock/ get cho as straight body slammed / catch the name nigga send u a straight murda-gram |
Wut U Talkinbout U A Murdera Sendin Out Grams//
U A Bitch Dat Go Back Home Chi-town Don't Want U Man// In My Hand Is Ya Girl N Since Im So Hot I'll Sizzilla// U A Broke Punk Bitch U Can't Even Afford 2 Take Her 2 Sizzler// U Close 2 20 On Da Out Side But U A Baby In Here// Yea I Looked Up Yo Profile It Says Ya Heart Pumps Fear// N R U 4 Real Nobody Watches Wrestlin N E More// Talkin Bout U Gone Body Slam Me U Couldn't Think Of Much More// Spittin 14 Lines Like Yo Ass Is Tyght// But U A Murdera N Went 2 Jail So Yo Booty Loose Now Rite// Dey Musta Loosened Ya Brain 2 Think U Can Fuck Wit Me On Da Mic// I'll Fry Yo Ass Leave People Askin Like Day Ask Mike Is He Black Or White// N U'll Neva B Rite Again 4eva 2 Remember My Name// Cuz I Did Yo Ass Like Da Inc N I Murdered U Da Same// N Dats Da Game Yo His Email Is Sizzilla N Ya Kno Da Rest |
YO VOTE 4 DEEZ BATTLES PLEASE
AMAYZE VS FORGOTTEN FLOW http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031 AMAYZE VS 2HARD2LOSE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487 AMAYZE VS KOOL COL-B http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136465 THANX |
dis nigga must be stupid betta switch his demeanor //
his rhymes like his breath betta take that shit to tha cleanas // dude u a fake azz nigga // a cake azz nigga // two shots i stand in front of u and u still dont pull the trigger // u search through ma profile like u on some internet datin shit nigga i cant go // talk about ma hoe shit she'll fuck lil boys so dont spit that shit no mo // fuck i take even deeper // i'mm dat nigga that duck taped and shot ya moms so call me da creeper// dis nigga got twisted like he was mobb deep // talkin bout ma gurl dis nigga jag off watch his pops walkin down the streets// u like a cartoon or a homeless nigga with sandles // yo show was numba one then i appeared now that shit cancalled // stop writing shit from yya books and just freestyle // niggas like get crush u a hype that try to smoke the green mile // com on dawg how much of me is u going to steal // bitches luv me so much i'm like a dido with wheels // its like u ja and i;m 50 // i'm clean and you shitty // stay ya azz in cali // and stop fuckin with me // |
Dats How U Kno U Weak
U Only Pose 2 Spit 1 Verse 15 Lines Max It Takes 2 Verse 4 U 2 Fuck Wit My One Get Da Fuck Outta Here |
aww dam nigga u gone spit or bitch if u gone bitch holla at cha azz go to tha fuckin umemployment line
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ight look murder gram yo shit was pure street shit nah mean
but ima have to go wit amayze cause his shit was more lyrical yo but murder gram keep at the battle shit cause you could be bettet nah mean return the favor me. vs. novakane |
Alrite Look Dawg U Been Outta Time //
Dat Whole Verse U Just Spit Couldn't Fuck Wit One Line// Of Mine Ur 19 Dawg Get Over Diss Shit// U Gettin On My Nerves Like A Bitch Dawg Get Off My Dick// On Da Mic Im 2 Quick N U, U 2 Slow// Im Da Pimp Collectin Da Money U Gettin Ran In Like A Hoe// N If It Snow Where U At Ya Ryhmes Still Wouldn't B Colder Dan Mine// U A Buster U Got No Back Bone I Toke It, Its Mine// So Y Da Fuck U Still Tryin Like Da Lil Engine Dat Could// I'll Let My Nine Kill Ya My N Leave U Buried In Wood// N Iff U Eva Try 2 Cum Back N Fuck Wit Amayze// I Leave U Deader Dan Dem Zombies Runnin Around In 7 Days// I Dont Even Need No More 4 Yo Ass U Not Gone When Stop Writin Shit Bitch Dats Da Last Verse |
all u all bitches b playin shit. hit me back if y'all wanna really rap.
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Dam Nobody Is Voting Wassup Shit Vote So We Can See If This Man Won Or If I Won
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yo murdagram, Amayze crushed ya shit. great flow Amayze, great wordplay in both verse, hot shit ya'll.
murdagram ya second verse was better than the first but not even enough to touch Amayze here. he beat you to da ground wit punches. vote: Amayze Kizza--VS--Ice Pick return da fava ya'll |
Metas: go to amayze cause he had more
Structure and flow go to murda: easy to read fowed well, amayze capitalized every word so it was kinda annoying Creativity: Tie, i honestly felt ya both on this category Punches: I think both had some good ones so another tie Basically ima vote for the verse i enjoeyed reading more Murdergram |
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thanx ya 4 da feed bak
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aiight gram had a weak opener, yoyo line was good. punch after that was good, closer was ok.. not many personals in the verse, needa work on that.. but it wasnt bad.
amayze, your opener was an alrite punch...2nd one used a bitta word play which was ok. overall there was a few decent punches n personals.. closer was a bit weak.. gram had a better verse second time round, it was some alrite shit.. nuthin amazin, but it was better then the first, punches all hit decent.. 2nd verse from amayze was aiight.. punches worked, i understood what he was sayin. im gonna give the vote 2 amayze, kid just came a bit harder then gram, more personals.. u both use // at the end of ya lines which is a bit pointless.. but fuck it.. peace. |
thanx SIN 4 ur honetsy
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gram whatever,your verse was straight ass,it was almost torture to sit through.amayze,you had an ok verse,just work on your structure.What the hell is with all these cats spitting 2 verses?anyways,gram,your wordplays need to hit stronger and your structure wasnt very original.amayze,i didnt like the way you typed everything in cap locks and had the //s at the end of your verse.But you had the upper hand and my vote goes to you.congratulations.
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thanx 4 ya vote vote
4 sum of my other battles up top uppin 4 votes uppin 4 votes uppin 4 votse uppin 4 votes |
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this battle was lopsided from the get go Murda you had some nice punches but they were basic as hell, you need 2 elevate alot before ya next battle, you need to come with some more meta's and work on makein ya punches more personal Amayze You had some nice punches ya ya complexity was alot better than your comp you elevated alot from ya last battle that i saw you in, you some nice personals which is wha won the battle for u, had some good meta's 2 this was kinda one sided~~~~ murda you had a nice drop kid but elevate my vote`~~~~~Amayze |
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