2H2L Vs. Kizza
 

ok house rules 5-10 lines no feeding hate/crew/dr votes u got 10 mins after check-in

aight checkin-in spit whenever but member no feedin

you spit you're shit first yo. I'll drop second this time.

kizza srry bout this.......

Kizza ur gonna be fellin mad after i light u up with this~gak//
ima be laughin at u when u got a hole in ya~back//

but its somethin ill have to~forget//
killin emmcees is something i cant~regret//

i serve~ni99as~with my itchy~trigga~finga//
why are u tryin to vs me/u should be in whinny the poo play and play as~tigga//

dont u see ur raps/flowes/and everything about you is a joke to~me
ill have u on a comercial representing~burger king//
ill give 20 dollars to have them take u away form me even though u cant~sing//

let alone write flowes only god knows what made u get on~rb.com//

u prolly took ur labtop to the~highschool prom~with fake pictures of ur~date//
ima outta not wastin no more time on this battle gimme the votes i cant~wait//

my bad 2 mins late o well it worked i had to close it..ur turn spit member no feeding

yo, yo, I'm fin ta tell a story: Date May 18, 1989
da day this lil bitch nigga fell out his mama behind
born 2 love since you was baptized
ya 2 hard 2 choose, it's why ya votes all get passed by
what a joke dis nigga only 15
afloat wit no hope on dangerous waters ya drifting
battlin you? 2 hard for me 2 lose to
will you take it hard when I prove ya styles loose too?
sign say flyweight, bout as heavy as a fry
you must be used ta heads callin you small guy....

good luck to 2hard2lose.

3rd line should say born 2 lose since you was baptized.....my bad ya'll.

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kizza go you got it. dont worry .. my vote is on kizza

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uppin dis ta garner more votes on our battle, please drop a note explainin ya choice, thanks.

UPPIN dis for some votes p-lease!!!!!!!!!!!

wow....

2H2L: man why you playing people like this they arent that good they all need to elevate...but anyways good shit not much to say here kepp doing what your doing...

kizza...:.......................why did you battle someone way outta your leage work on metas structure flow and vocab....

return the favor....

vote 2H2L

favor breaking this shit
 

2HarD2LoSe

Kizza ur gonna be fellin mad after i light u up with this~gak//
ima be laughin at u when u got a hole in ya~back//
where is the love lol i mean where is the punch 4/10

but its somethin ill have to~forget//
killin emmcees is something i cant~regret//
hummm ok 4/10

i serve~ni99as~with my itchy~trigga~finga//
why are u tryin to vs me/u should be in whinny the poo play and play as~tigga//
shit heard is over and over nigga itchy trigga dont ppl get tired of it 3/10

dont u see ur raps/flowes/and everything about you is a joke to~me
ill have u on a comercial representing~burger king//
first line doesnt rhyme with the before or the after wack 3/10

ill give 20 dollars to have them take u away form me even though u cant~sing//
let alone write flowes only god knows what made u get on~rb.com//
second line didnt rhyme with shit 3/10

u prolly took ur labtop to the~highschool prom~with fake pictures of ur~date//
ima outta not wastin no more time on this battle gimme the votes i cant~wait//
best so far punch there 5/10

22/60
3.66/10
pretty wack no personals weak punches if they existed in the first place flow was shit 2 lines didnt rhyme at all you are lucky 2 get 3.6

Kizza

yo, yo, I'm fin ta tell a story: Date May 18, 1989
da day this lil bitch nigga fell out his mama behind
YOYO lol and fin??? wack start 4/10

born 2 love since you was baptized
ya 2 hard 2 choose, it's why ya votes all get passed by
ok 5/10

what a joke dis nigga only 15
afloat wit no hope on dangerous waters ya drifting
wack personal 4/10

battlin you? 2 hard for me 2 lose to
will you take it hard when I prove ya styles loose too?
another wack personal 4/10

sign say flyweight, bout as heavy as a fry
you must be used ta heads callin you small guy....
ok punch but weak one 5/10

22/50
4.4/10
shit shit flow need to be imagintive and use harder punches and word play i only give you my vote cause you tryed
vote Kizza

with respect for both of you

hit my battles the topical one

peace

umm kind of a weak battle...kizza i mean if u gon get personal make it hott 4 real

opener-2h
structure-2h
punchlines-2h
creativity-2h
multis-nun
personals-kizza even tho they were corny
enjoyed-2h...reason y cuzz he had a more creative verse namhean cuzz it look like u was tryin da be funny but it really wasn't workin

my vote-2h

pleez returnd a favor BOTH of ya'll i got 3 links in my sig pleez vote on at least wun or u a bitch

V/2Hard2Lose - Punches hit a little harder.

Kizza - Weak punches. Opener didn't have anything to do with dissing. Personals weren't that good but at least you had some. Not much word play. Keep Elevating.

2Hard2Lose - Not much better. Weak punches also. No personals. No great wordplay. Some lines didn't rhyme and just appeared out of no where. Weak verse, but punches hit harder, Keep Elevating.

Returning the favor.

aight thnx for the votes lets keep em comin come on uppin for votes lets go!!!

uppin fa votes!!!!!!

uppin dis fa votes.

wack battle on 2h2l part..... enough of this rap and gangsta shit.. potrait and image of what you are not what you wanna be... shit wack... damn... i gotta hate on that.. unless you are but def aint but anyway....kizza got this for better overal verse.. had punches not strong but they were there.. unlike 2h2l shoot you verse, which had bar structure but no punch to fill it just words... so my vote is to kizza....

v- kizza.. peace

uppin dis for votes, come on ya'll help me close this thread!

Kizza took it easy with hard punches and good vocab. 2hs was boring cuz he talked about killing ni"99"as and doin gay shit like that. Elevate. Kizza takes this with an eaiser structure to follow and harder punches.

Vote-Kizza

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uppin dis fa votes ya'll. help us close this tonight!!!

uppin dis fa votes, come on ya'll help us get this thing closed!

kizza i don't think your outta your league but i do think you punches n vocab could be beter ,but they were still good,2h2c:if it was'nt for your terrible structure n stretched lines i think you might've gotten my vote but i read both battle 3 times and found punches ta be the same so you downfall was structure.....
vote/kizza.............................no hate dawg it was a good battle...

uppin dis fa votes!!!!! make sure you leave a full explanation and vote on the poll at the top of the page

my vote goes to 2h2l for the barely stronger punches......the battle was weak both need to elevate.....2 increase ur structure both of you try to keep ur lines the same size.........and HAVE PUNCHES AND PERSONALS NEXT TIME.....


v/2

v/ Kizza

Everything in this battle was weak. Punches went to Kizza, because he threw in more than one and ATTEMPTED at personals. 2H2L, got the wordplay vote. Structure went to Kizza, because 2H2L was all over the place. Kizza got flow, because poor structure didn't ruin it. So, overall it went to Kizza.