Kizza--VS--Ice Pick
 

rules:15 lines
both spit after check in
you drop firs or me?

How about both berse due in 15 minutes
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I got exactly 6:45 PST so we drop at 7.

Yo Kizza welcome to my MATRIX

My name alone is much too much for you to handle
all fingers and no thumbs so you can't even hold a candle
To this homicidal idol I stop vitals in madd men
your verse was severely holed and more porous than lambskin
Kizza is infected with the wackness and can't seem to shake it
I'll defeat you even spitting at just 1 percent of my apex
Which is more than enough to render you free from speeches
you become freakishly speechless and aromaticaly wreak of weakness
I've already killed you
compared to my intellect you're a gorilla
ya whole verse was suspect and my last bar was iller
Than anything you've ever bitten
written or spitten word
I cop over your littered text and comence to shittin turds
You're obsurd every word
but you beef with this feindish animal
and your name mixed with skill makes less sense than vegan cannibles

Talons will be esssential to my credential in this battlescape
lyrically attack you via rape, after these lines, on your grave I will traipse
I’ll confirm my victory throughout history
Your life story will be studied on Unsolved Mysteries
histerectomies must be ‘undertaken’ on sheila mcs
wrap my mic around your throat and let you 'pick' the tree
time I 'stick' this 'pick',I'm on an 'ice' cold killin spree
yo rhymes stickin' ta me like a glueless uhu
you crooked on a head like a tilted fubu
I went first overall at the draft wowed em wit my sticks
while you was the two hundredth pick, for chuckin up bricks
time for me to close the freeza on this breeza
fucked ya mind so hard I gave ya ass amnesia


good luck to ice pick

nice spit Pick. looking for some votes!!!!!!!!!!

pick really upped his game since our battle i gotta give this one to him
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136404
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136408

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uppin for votes ya'll!!!!!!

kizza came out with wordplay all verse long, structure was a lil off and complexity was pretty good no personals tho
ice pick your structure was off which was why you probly will lose this battle
but you had a good concept some of your punches stung but not hard enough

Vote=Kizza

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Pick,
Ya had some pretty hot punchlines, not many personals- some pretty HOT multies i loved this one:
Which is more than enough to render you free from speeches
you become freakishly speechless and aromaticaly wreak of weakness
that shit was dope, everything else was kinda weak tho, your closer wasnt that great good job over all though.

Kizza,
Your transistions from line to line was dope, you had some hawt flow, bars were a bit stretched, thats aiight tho, you had some hawt personals and a few multies, overall you came harder- close battle tho


vote: kizza

uppin dis fa votez yall!!!!

I give it to ice pick...kizza's got real fillerish at the end. granted ice picks structure was fukked i just heard hotter shit in there. not a lot of punches or personals from either end this was more like picking one open mic over another. a word of advice to ice pick...its obvious youre real smart but if you want your battle to sound better id dumb your vocab down some. not too much just get rid of words like apex. nice spit from kizza it was close i just likes pick's better.

\/hit me up honestly\/

very close...
both yall need to elevate
im gonago wit kizza coz he had harder punches
not a lot init
structure woz gud by both

aight um kizza wins dis shit yo y had a better structure even tho some of ya lines were longer then other's u had betta punchlines i aitn didn't really see no personals from nun of ya'll but overall in like a real street battle u would of wun..umm pick ya structure fuked u up dunn 4 real i eman u couldn't keep ya lines da same length and dat fukked up ya flow plus da shit u was sayin sound like u just started rappin im not tryin da play u or nothin just givin my opinion nahmean

my vote-kizza

return da favor ya'll MaRVOLOUSJ1009 VS GRENADE...its on dis page

someone missed a vote on our poll, I have things scored 4-2 and it only say 3-2 in the poll.

uppin dis fa votes!!

yo the wordplay and vocabulary in this battle was ridiculous, both ya killed ya verses
and had me thinkin i got step MY vocab up, both of ya was pretty even but pick 's wordplay was a little better, kizz ya last line was hot i read both verses twice but i gotta go with pick, cause his verse made me wanna go read a dictionary for more vocab, but you killed it too, great battle

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yo kizza structure was good and thats what i need but yo need to elevate.punchlines were pefect though.

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Hey you guys are in the same fucking crew

you are a bitch

punch- tie
flow- tie
vocab- tie
wordplay- kizza
originality- ice pick

wordplay beats originality

V- kizza

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Uppn for explained votes, and no friggin crew votes like before

Ice Pick: Your shit was hot. But you have very bad structure, which at the end made your verse to sound suspect. Just keep doing your thing though. You are no doubt on the right track.

Kizza: What can I say? You have done it again. I mean Even though I am new to RB. I have went back and reviewed your material. Your structure was good, could have been better but it's all good. Continue doing your thing.

Vote:
Kizza


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uppin fa votes since a couple of em got dsisqualified.

upping.............

uppin dis for 2 disqualified votes.

ayt pick u structre was weak u had sum hot puches though no personals from either dat i saw ur word play was good though n kizza u gtta work on structure 2 but ur punches were good lil weaker wordplay but over all dat battle was good but pick u had betta punches over all so i give it 2 u sry bein honest no crew votes unless honest n true peace out

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this was a tight-ass battle and a good read from both emcee prop's...

now ice-pick i havent really seen u around much or noting to jude if u got better or not but,
you'r flow was really good i like it alot way above average i gave it, u had a few punches/diss that was preety decent more disses then punches thou and u was creative inorder to have a good flow like that nice drop 8.0 outta 10

kizza the same with u i havent peep to many battles to notice if u evelated or not but nice drop,
u had a preety good flow as-well just above average on thsi one, u had more punches a few diss that was good and u was creative with them nice drop,

thats why this was a good battle ya was balance one had more punches and one had better flow and 1 multis...

but punches to me that hit harder always wins, just cause u flow dont mean u saying much or is doing alot of damage feel me? but it was good,

my vote: kizza

p.s nice battle fellas keep it up,
and return the favor of voting in my battle plez, they either on page 1 or 2....

thanks to all who have voted, score 4-3 I need one vote, Ice needs 2. uppppppp this for more votes!

uppin dis for more votes please!!!!!!

punches kizza
metas kizza
personals none
structure kzza

vote kizza

Dis battle was ok
too bad I cant vote yet but Il will get back to u when I can

Kizza won this one cuz.. he had better structure, wordplay and punchlines.. I enjoyed yur verse more kizza, it was more bar for bar, while ice pick's verse was kinda everywhere, i mean the rhymes and vocab was nice, but the structure was off and the flow wasn't that tight.. kizza your flow was more steady and the punches landed harder so i vote for you..

return the favor and give us an honest vote in this battle cuz..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144250

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