String vs S.D.original
 

10-12 bars no d/r votes otha than that lets get it poppin dog

u spit first do ya thing and lets get it goin in here

check.....................
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Imma rock da hood like crack in slums, u just an average punk....
So stop actin tough, u so pussy.. u can't even pee standin up....
This dudes a fake bitch, I blaz'em 'N watch him get mad.....
Beating string is no "BIGGIE" like a new Bad Boy Collab...
Hope u brought ya writtens, like dog catchers i brought shit to stop ya bitchen.....
Imma knock ya ribs in, cuz like orphans around the holidays... ur not that gifted...
i'll leave string burned 'N scared then left in the wreck, or left for dead.....
In text, im as underground as it gets... and still over your head.....
no need to put a vest on, i kill pride, kick feelings in.......
S.D. woulnd't bite you, you spit nothing worth stealing kid.......
Battling me dog you must be fuckin suicidal......
You get no votes in this bitch like black girls on American Idol.....
strings scripts is nonsense cause it lacks verbs, you wack herb.....
my rap words will knock you back-wards till ya back is fractured......
jumpin this bitch like obstacles, grab the specs my shit is optical.....
pack punches for this homo blowin my nuts like my dick was tropical.....
Im tired of battlin gays.. That Fuck from Behind For Pleasure......
Homo i got guns that leave ya "Chest Open" like I was Findin Treasure.....
fuck "Queer Eye For The Straight Guy" get a Blindfold for this "Gay bitch"....
Cause Skillwise, your lyrics are "Nothing To See" like a girl with "Size “A” Tits".......

damn cuddy....it dont take 10 hours to post 20 linez.....

fuck this....this guys takin forever to post.......

can i get a dq???????

u took forever to reply so i didnt think u was gon spit

yah...string was merkd....well..SD...return teh favor lol i vote for you..haha check the sig

true that, hit me up home boy.

man i was outta town for a minute but im back now my fault

eh yo, the rounds hit u hard enuff to make ya spirituals leak
dog u just a clown wit wack lyrical speech
S.D, whats that stand for, suck dick?
u betta duck quick,before u get busted
I aint nuttin to fuck wit, u just a dumb bitch
S.D on that "original" punk shit
u get jumped quick, like 1 Anglo saxxon
verses 3 black men whose packin
i got a long barrel,have u bitin on the nozzle, lead u right into them hollows
yo rhymes look like amateur night at the apollo
i know u gettin nervous i dont blame u for it
i roll wit a tech n scope aimin for it
off my rhymes niggas stay euphoric
u betta "free"style aint nobody gon pay u for it
erebody thought u was hot, till this whore got shot
i'll have ya brains on ya rhymebook like Rorshach blots
ima take ya votes, or worse get ya salary
chop u in half, give u a split personality
take ya disguise off u just a whore wit toupee's
u gont b beggin for votes like Gore in 2-K
i hate killin MC's cuz the job is gorey
but SD take it in the ass like suppositories
dont run ya mouth cuz snitches get shanked
ima put u on my buddylist under "bitches i spanked" HAAAA :shoot: :shoot:

to clarify Rorscach blots are AKA inkblots in case nebody was confused

this wuz close but i think string took it cuz he had more personals

Aight
 

S.D. Original-You started hard but you started to lose it at the end. If you had more multiples you woulda taken it... But you didn't.. So your not..

String-You were slippin on this one but you took it cuz you had multiples and ya punchlines were as good as his but you still got it..

Vote-String

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sd or string?yo this shit is hard both yall niggas spit slick and gansta,both had good flows and good personals.both spit hard and while string ended his verse hard so didnt sd but where string fell off a little on the second and 3rd bars sd stayed strong so my vote goes to sd.



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both string and sd came off nice...but sd def started commin off weaker towards the end...string stayed hard and ended it harder...string gets my vote

^WTF?????!!!?!?!?!

S.D.Original - I thought you came pretty damn decent in this. I liked your metaphors like the closer and the 'gifted' line. Your punches, most of them hit and hit a lot harder than String. Another plus is the fact you got multies there.

String - I wasn't feeling none of your shit. You had personals but they weren't that good... and punches but they were weak. It felt like a newbie verse(well it was). Your flow was all over the place and some of your lines were stretched as fuck while most were too short.

V/S.D.Original - a lot stronger punches and a lot more often.

Well actually, String did start getting better at the end but my vote stays. Props 2 both.

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Aye yo string, you barley won this coz.. this battle was kinda hot though.. S.D, I swear to GOD coz, you would of had my vote if he didn't come with that ryme cheme that astonished me..

" i roll with a tech n scope, aimin for it
off my rhymes niggas stay euphoric"

I like that syllable count and rhyme scheme.. S.D had it too, but String had better personals and shit.. or shall i say better disses overall. stucture was coo, I gotta vote for String man, no hate tho, honestly.. I enjoyed his verse more....peace...

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uppin for votes ^^^^ i'll return the favor peeps wit honest votes holla at me!

uppin for votes ^^^^ i'll return the favor peeps wit honest votes holla at me!
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uppin for votes ^^^^ i'll return the favor peeps wit honest votes holla at me!

uppin for votes ^^^^ i'll return the favor peeps wit honest votes holla at me!
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uppin for votes ^^^^ i'll return the favor peeps wit honest votes holla at me!

uppin for votes ^^^^ i'll return the favor peeps wit honest votes holla at me!

uppin for votes ^^^^ i'll return the favor peeps wit honest votes holla at me!

uppin for votes ^^^^ i'll return the favor peeps wit honest votes holla at me!

S.D. :
had a lotta comdey lines in your verse, which wins battles...had great landed punches.
had some attempts of metas. not a good ammount of multis. but the comdey made up for it.

string:
had some good punches, no comedy like SD...but had some good personals, use more multis or metas in your next verse, gives is variety, and come more OG. nice try.

vote: SD Original

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i think strings got em more but they were both pretty decent, and strings was alil more on S.D. then S.D. was on him............... it seems like S.D. coulda used his lines on anybody..........aight holla back