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the metaphor vs ibraheem
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no hate votes or they will be dq no biting,feeding or crew votes you got 1 hour after check you spit first since i set it up |
yo we both spitting make it blind spit 10 lines minimum
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dog i make the rules but well do a blind spit check in and ill check right after
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JUST FUCKEN SPITT.... ibrah i left u a call out in bitch slapped but now i got 5 links up so drop a honest vote on this..... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135365
then we can battle wen i get links shut down, uk beef....lmfao |
Yo I don’t get how your name to your verses tied/
You haven’t spat a metaphor since Jesus died/ Tried looking up your battles shit is boring nearly cried/ Couldn’t hold it your wackness was stronger than my pride/ Only accepted this shit to play it like the devil/ Using your fake ass like a homo to step up a level/ With mental ability equal to one thousand microprocessors/ My heart drives* fear to the last man of your ancestors/ Fuck that you aint having kids your getting neglected/ After reading this verse, you will never get you dick erected/ Its one sided battle like the coalition taking on Iraq/ Meta4 taking on me, more like Ja rule taking on 2pac/ You can criticise me for being a newb but im trying/ Reduced your mass index, lighter than air left you flying*/ · *Heart drives like a computer hard drive · flyweight reducing his weight lighter than air |
battles up
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yo time is ticking
i dont want a hoeshow spit man |
this guy couldn't land a punch...if I gave him an airport/
this man dont belive in check ins...he already distort/ on the battle field i'll kill you...so fast your soul wont have time to escape/ only way you beat me...is I was your dick and you was on the masterbate/ your ryhmes are predictable...you can call me the psycic/ my rhymes are like money...everbody loves and likes it/ im spit lyrics that affect your body...like mad cow disease/ and leave you hyperventalatin on your knees...like you was in prayer/ its almost time for me to say later your verse was nothing but a buch of whackness/ you aint touching this you say got got no metas...ill see you in court for false advertising/ |
sorry i accidently deleted my verse when i was typeing
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vote ppl i will retern the favor with an explaind vote |
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fucking vote on this shit
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Both sucked, both use those stupid ass /'s that only noobs use..but im givin it to ibraheem for better punches
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wtf you judging our abilty by the way we seperate the lines is stupid and just proves the you're a fake ass that dont know shit get an explaind vote or you can fuck off
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upping this mofo
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vote and leave a line and i will hit you back on your battles
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vote and leave a link and i will hit you back on your battles
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ibraheem you came jabbin right away, you were in control of the whole fight,
some verses didnt hit but for being new to rb , im gonna hane to welcome you, the metaphore had jokes which wasnt personal enuff to pierce, i believe alonger version of metaphores rap could of don it but my vote goes to my mann ibraheem hey just help me to desclosr votes on my battle between marvoulousj and me new rapper vs vet k inda like you well chek in im out 1 |
vote and leave a link and i will hit you back on your battles
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Ibraheem takes this one easy. He had harder punches and a better structure. I was gettin lost in metas flow. Ibraheem had a punch in every line. Some of Metas rhymes were all self glorifying. Ibraheem takes this with punches and a good structure.
Vote-Ibraheem Vote on this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136785 |
like justify said this battle sucked but ibraheem had somewhat bad structure your meta's were not there but ya punches got the job done.chop down your structure some it kind of looks stretched out . you didnt have any personals you need 2 work on that and word play
6/10 Metaphor your strucs were fucked up 2 but you had some alright punches you can do better than that tho, and you had some personals my vote- Ibraheem jus cuz ya punches were a lil higher both of ya need 2 elevate cuz that shit was horrible |
safe for the vote always welcoming feed back helps me elevate
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need one more vote leave a link i will hit you back on your battles with an honest vote
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need one more vote leave a link i will hit you back on your battles with an honest vote
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need one more vote leave a link i will hit you back on your battles with an honest vote
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need some votes leave a link i will hit you back on your battles with an honest vote
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I say ibraheem simply cuz his was tighter than metaphor's although a couple of his rhymes were predictable like Meta said.
come see mine http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137399 |
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