KroNuz Vs Murda-Gram
 

10 Linez...
Due Whenever
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aight shit nigga cool u spit first then

shit wat eva guess i will go first

dis kat walking around her thinkin he hard but we all know he sweet//
he the type the when he go to school nigas be he fresh meat //
the guy makes me laugh this must ba a comedian //
he like to have jag off contest when its just him and his friends //

but hey give him props at least he tries //
naw fuck dat cause when i battle ma oppenent always mad of cries //
come on battle me R U serious //
you must be delirious //

dude at least u tried but nigga u still to small //
me i fuck around and commit crimes scooby doo couldn't solve

My bad i was tryna to find ya im so i could see if you done yet.. here

Gorilla poundin you, beat in ya cheast, you feeble at best, anyone ever tell you this aint tha streets its tha net/
My battle rounds like tha civil war, and you in tha red tights', if you thinkin you gon lose, you dead right/
Everyone loves lies but hate the truth, front-lines, im here gettin my 5, you here cuz thats where ya skill places you/
Shut ya face, this a blunt beef, you dont buck heat, tha only buck you got standz as ya front teeth/
Im beatin ya past dazed, you enlist in death, instead of Front Linez, go to the last forum in backstage cuz it fitz you best/

G'lucc... ight letz see what happenz 1

shit yea lets let the voters decide who win playa

delete tha freeposts.. i know i aint make thread right.. but vote up ....

dis kat walking around her thinkin he hard but we all know he sweet//
he the type the when he go to school nigas be he fresh meat //
3/10. not following your flow, horrible opener.
the guy makes me laugh this must ba a comedian //
he like to have jag off contest when its just him and his friends //
2/10. rhyme?
but hey give him props at least he tries //
naw fuck dat cause when i battle ma oppenent always mad of cries //
3/10. lame.
come on battle me R U serious //
you must be delirious //
2/10. anyone seen a punch yet?
dude at least u tried but nigga u still to small //
me i fuck around and commit crimes scooby doo couldn't solve
6/10. clever, but how about a personal or a punch at least??
15/50.

OK, this next post is all stretched, I wanna state it here so I dont have to on each line. it kinda threw off ya flow a bit, you should shorten it up a bit.

Gorilla poundin you, beat in ya cheast, you feeble at best, anyone ever tell you this aint tha streets its tha net/
6/10. ok opener for this battle. a punch too.
My battle rounds like tha civil war, and you in tha red tights', if you thinkin you gon lose, you dead right/
5/10. again, a decent line for this battle.
Everyone loves lies but hate the truth, front-lines, im here gettin my 5, you here cuz thats where ya skill places you/
5/10. ok, but the flow is hard to follow.
Shut ya face, this a blunt beef, you dont buck heat, tha only buck you got standz as ya front teeth/
7/10. nice line. good punch. too bad it didnt have the flow for a 9.
Im beatin ya past dazed, you enlist in death, instead of Front Linez, go to the last forum in backstage cuz it fitz you best/
5/10. decent closer for this battle. soft punch.

28/50. more than enough for the win

vote: Kronuz

return da fava ya'll

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136598

thanks.

Some Body Please Vote

so first to 5 wins or what (mod delete all free posts after been answered)

ok look even though this was a wack ass battle
ima have to let murda gram have this shit cause i like his grimey ass style in rapping
Kron had some good shit too, Like his flow
but overall:murdergram

return the favor
delinquint vs. optimal

yup

My vote going to Kronuz

A few good punches and a better flow

uppppppppppp

Kronuz killed it here in every category,
Gorilla poundin you, beat in ya cheast, you feeble at best, anyone ever tell you this aint tha streets its tha net/
that was the illest line in the battle, I thought


Murda Gram you need to up ya anty

upppp

uppp... (gram and doin it)

uppp

yo,you uppin alot dawg,,but this is the way i seen the battlemurda gram i barely seen any punches,i liked your style but you did'nt have any hits....
kronuz:punches were alrightbut i thought you could've came with better content,but verse was better battle"wise"you both had wierd structure n need ta make your verse better with punchuation jus so its easier ta read....no hate but my vote goes 2 //////
vote///kronuz because of punches...

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KroNuz won in all aspects:

Flow - KroNuz. Murda Gram's flow was all over the place and hard to read.

Punches - KroNuz. Overall harder punches. Murda Gram didn't have any real one's. Self-Glorification is bad in text.

Personals - None. Murda Gram: Don't try to make up false one's.

Wordplay & Metaphors - KroNuz. Spotted some.

Originality - KroNuz. Both came with some played punches but I thought KroNuz came more original.

V/KroNuz.

i got a question.. i made this shit all wrong... its a poll lol.. so pretty much it dont count or when does it stop lol...?

This probably doesn't count because its not really a battle and you didn't use any credits..... I don't know if it closes though. :huh:

v/Kronuz...feelin yo shit.Nice Punches an flow.Murda shit was aiight
flow,kron
structure,Kron
Punches,Kron
Overall Kron