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no hate..d/r
usual rules
8-12 lines

U spittin first

gud luk

YUP

CHecked in
ready for war
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Manipulation

Now U startin-ta-wild..oUt??who U foolin'??..wit ya' "lethal" rage/
You should be stored in a INCUBATOR..U still in a "fetal stage"//
this pussy is like a condom he's used to having a dick inside///
coz im known for eating more emcees in COLD BLOOD then soccer players in "alive"/ //(that movie "alive")
i'll "knock" ya' BACK-IN-TIME ..have U Crucified next-ta'-Jesus/
tortured with Jewz..clapped with Kennedy..vexxed-wit-Caesar//
diss-tort..diss-mantle ya'.."hold" ya' back..i'll Snatch-ya-spine/
You a perfect 10??..No B!tch..ya' AZZ-a-Nine{assinine}//
thrust ya nose bridge into your skull till u can blow it with brain-tissue/
get protection ur fucked!! bitch faggot i cum-sick/
ya best chance against me is to no show coz ya scripts is weak u dumb-bitch!!!/""

That was a fast one for ya
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Eye Could have done better

NO SHOW and wasted a decent verse

THATS BULL MAN

HE OUGHT TO GET DQD or sum shit

I HATE NO FUCKING SHOWS

WTF?......aiight chil
 

aight freestyle...cnt fuck wit dis bitch...


who the fuck you think you are callin me a no-show?...
your punches bout as personal as the oprah winfrey show!..
i leave u like england.. you the hurricane that never blow..
dawg..u belong in tha toilet..so u can get ur "shit" to flow!..
truth is im the clliff,step to me blinded..and ur set to fall..
more filler in your verse..than my hanging bathroom wall!..
why you saying HE should get dq`d?..dawg im a bitch!..
i murder u so bad..they should hang me..for being a WITCH!..
i think your two-faced..they should call you casta-troy..
jus like pearl harbour,i leave you like your fleet, destroyed!..
now ive left u defeated..ima turn around, L.M.F.A.O and go...
face it"ice-pick"..u coulnt break through me if i was only snow!.

that sucked and it took you days to write that shit
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Weak and wack go eat ya fucking big mac

hahaha.................it didnt suck u retard...and it took 15mins.lmfao.....

jus up 4 votes.......
frontin aint gona get u the win
mr"""/.,$£%^$^.i like to try polish a wack versehaha

uppin return tha fav................................

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manipulation had a good opener and flow seemed good, there was a great personal at the end which just "melted ice pick"
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gotta give it 2 ICE PICK
his wordplay,punches,
n metas was better all
dat made his flow better 2 me
but Manipulations flow was alrite 2
overall good battle
v/ICE PICK
vote 4 my battles please
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yo this bitch is still alive??!!!i smoked your man riff raff now you up how dare you say you can take my whole crew i just merked the best nigga on your crew !!!!!!!bitch stop running :cussing:

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v- manipulation
sturcture8=10
punches7=10
opener10=10
overall25=30

ice pick
stucuture8=10
punches7=10
opener8=10
overall23=30

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keep evelating the noth of you
manipulation you only 1 cuz i liked you opener
elevate






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lmao @ newbs tellin us to elevate.hahahaha,,,,,,,,,,,

uppin

god damn.0-0 again ice pik................this bin up weeks.........

plz get sum votes in........

shit this battle bin up 4 like a month.n still 0-0////////////////

uppin the fuck outta dis shit..................................

Aight Ice Pick gets my vote. He came with ahrder punches and better personals. I liked that "asinine" line, shit was hot. Manipulation, your drop was aight, but you said it only took you 15 minutes to do it. I've seen your stuff before, and that really was quite bad compared to what you're capable of, maybe you shouldn't rush it next time. But no hate, that was a good battle, either of you wanna collab sometime let me know.
Vote - Ice Pick

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Wow..this was a pretty good battle..both of ya had hott punches, good flow, and good structure..but manipulation?? that 1st bar..i didn't like how the two words were the same... actually, ice..u had a pretty long stretched line..but dat was coo cuz u still had hotter punches...

spit: ice
structure: manip
flow:ice
punch:ice
personals: none
metas: ice

vote : ice

this is another text book example of ice picks skill. damn that was sick man and i respect u for that one. wordplay and punches were the highlights u could still do a lil better on the structure and the flow was str8. manip....work on the punches cuz they were weak but at least u had good structure. delivery needs some work. other than that. good battle fellas.
v//ice pick

I think Ice took this one... he had better flow... good rhymes... nice wordplay... awsome srtucture... I say Ice won this...

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