manipulation vs raw killa
 

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u spittin first

ayt 8-12 line ayt no problem all love no beef remember n relax its jus music good luck im checkin n might as well drop my verse now 2 peace out good luck u'll need it

who dis cat manipulation,let me manipulaye ur imagination/
my interpretation,n dedication,turn words into flames like spontaneous combustion/
my flow like water,n even if u stuck yo dick in da water u still couldnt fuck wit da flow/
jus imagine ur face,strapped wit napalm,n yes dats ya gurl clingin my arms/
i spit flames,at rappers wit manipulative names,got ya goin insane/
lose da ambition n drop yo mic,ur amongst men not fags n dikes/
heightin ur horizon,only bitches u tlk 2 r operators from verizon/
admit it las time u,had pussy is when pussy had u/
drop da act,we all kno ur a vanilla ice fan im jus bearin da facts/
sound like u got ur name from a pokemon so like ash i gotta catch him,get it ketchim/
where my manners id hate 2 go first,after da ladies n here u dropped ur purse/
manipulation's,hesitation,determines his determanation 2 rap is nuttin but imagination
i spit venom,when my flow hits da battle wit rhythm,go a head dog copy sum of dis writin,cuz wit it u got no chances cuz losin always been part of ur manipulation/

ayt my shit been dropped no readin b4 u write ur dont need no bitin good luck lets hurry n get these votes

manipulate**** in first line damn fuckin mis-spell..lol c'mon where ur verse dont choke

yo raw killa had hard punches and he well he had it .

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i vote for raw killa cause he is the best

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thats bs tho lol.... manip didnt even drop yet n raw k' already got 2 votez

lmmao i kno rite shit funny c'mon manipulation where u at homie finish da battle dont start 1 if u can finish wuts up?

thats fuked u shud b banned............................

lol i should b banned? wtf r u fuckin nuts not my fault took u so damn long 2 return wit a verse peeps figured a no show or straight saw since it was takin u so long u must suck compared 2 me not my fault peeps voted b4 u dropped dont ask 4 a battle u cant finish manipulation

I just wondered why the same niggaz on this lil list of assess voted here and in my battle wit Raw killa too.
Heres the list of Dick riders...
shy, ruff tuff thug and ruffridah187.
too bad he thinks he's got enouf for a K.O. dick riding squad. gett Urself 2 more dick riders and U could actually beat me in our battle.

yo,manipulation are ya gonna drop ya verse dawg or is this a dq?????

yo this is kinda fucked havin 2 votes b4 the other mc even drops...i don't think they should count honestly....

they dnt count obviously...........................
also them 2 r blacklisted..........
and i will drop wen ive got time......

lol u had plenty time 2 drop yesterday when u tried battlin every1 iyea pussy i seen yo otha battles u new on shit jus came on yesterday or day b4 u lil punk choke artist dont start battles u cant finish as for da dick ridaz nah aint no dick ridaz get it straight euedentdy admit ya panties all in a buch cuz i had da upper hand but nah u wanna go whinnin 2 ya b/f's in charge dis shit n act like i had "dick ridaz" vote me u such a pussy fuck u

hmmm.ok...kid
 

check this...bitch you couldnt rhyme a verse for shit...
fake ass wannabe..u actually look worse than you spit!...
newer than u, but im the one teaching u how to RHYME...
you dont dig wot im saying?..here try immatating MINE...
and whats with all the wack, herbish self-glorification?..
u aint sweating me, just urself worse than perspiration!...
i think your ugly..but i might hang your picture on my wall..
itd scare intruders from breaking in..whilst im out on call!..
tryin to snatch the win,before id even dropped my verse..
all them riders on your dick..damn!...that mus really hurt?..
thats the meaning of RAW?..u lower than a fat bitch on a see-saw..
i leave you sore...i dont know wot u even bothered to key-for...


UPPIN 4 HONEST VOTES.....

lol u funny gurl i give u an a for effort but u can wut ya want i kno im ugly n i say it proudly i wasnt put here 2 intrigue u nice flow though good luck seriously u'll need it i aint got dick ridaz like i said jus peeps no when 2 admire talent dont hate cuz u fake femcee who neva made it but its all love cuz u well ur new n dis jus a battle u kno music so honest votes n dont take shit seriously though i wanna rebattle now that i kno u a gurl peace out all love 1

nah man.no hate........i know i won so its cool.....
your verse Didnt rhyme.......
but woteva we cool ....uppin.....

uppin 4 votes................

VOTERS PLEASE READ BOTH VERSES CAREFULLY
U WILL SEE HIS LINES DIDNT RHYME

HIS SPELLING SUCKED...i dnt know wot he was on about?
HE DIDNT THROW ONE PUNCH....correct me if im wrong??
HE USED LOTS OF MULTIES...but they were jus random words!!..plz vote HONESTLY and TRUTHFULLY.

manipulation wtf r u tlkn bout i rhymed perfectly through out da whole diss i did it line by line u dumb blonde no beef but quit uppin shit b4 u get it holla back honest votes peace oh by da way i cant wait 2 battle u again ima hit u hard

i vote fo raw killa cause he spits the best but there sumthin i dont understand,admit it las time u,had pussy is when pussy had u/
drop da act,we all kno ur a vanilla ice fan im jus bearin da facts/
sound like u got ur name from a pokemon so like ash i gotta catch him,get it ketchim/

i voted for raw killa cause he has come far with this battlin and i know he had time to think about what he has writin,also that he's good at what he does so i think its fair fo him too win.

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Uppin 4 Honest Votes Plz..this Is Crazy................

lol...funny stuff..


aight, raw killa:i wasent feeling your structure at all..needs mad work..you didnt throw any punches..work on making your structure similar to manip...

manip..verse was ok.. easily beat raw..but dont sway votes like ^that -_-.. you shouldnt have to.. and i know frontlines is pretty ass when it comes to voters..

vote:Manip.......any one with common sense would udnerstand why I voted the way i did.

lmaooooo yo whut da fukk is goin on raw killa got like 6 names on dis shit...damm y u gota cheat and still lose against a girl datz sad dunny...but here we go

opener-manip nice punch and personal...raw ya shit had madd big words 4 no reason and da shit aint even ryhme
structure-manip dat shit was real neat
punchlines-manip...raw umm didn't have nun
multis-raw but they was corny
creativity-a tie
personals-manip
finisher-manip
enjoyed-manip....i mean she merked u raw lol her words ryhmed structure was neat.

my vote-manip

hit up da joint in my sig y'all

Fuckin dickriders on the real. Shoot. Manip takes it cuz he/she had punches in the verse. You also had a good structure. I couldnt even follow that otha doos rhyme, talkin about pokemon and shit. Manip takes it with punches, a good structure, and takin this newbie raw in about everything else.

Vote-Manip

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hahaha... soulstress89 has really brightened my day...

but yeah as for voting

yoyo, killa raw thug came better of flowing/
pokemon was names ketchem gettin' in of fo' y'all
last time a pussy had you is a pussy when you had yo of at is then
i cant understand that of names thign without vanilla ice bearin Da facts.............. of it when is out of...IS... NIGGazzz l337 yo

well, rawkilla really came the best and his flowing was doping of manipulation because his name was killing... and i really liek that combustion lines... it was doping nigga nigga thug gats to my nine... yo?

yeah whatever man.. hahahahahahahah

but yeah... rawkilla: ya punches were seldom... and weak... lines were stretched.. flow was off like every second line.. n half ya shit didnt even rhyme.. ya lil dickrider squad is noobs.. notice how only decent mcs n vets not votin for ya? your gettin herb votes my friend... shameful..

manip takes this one on account of, harder punches, and basic, yet effective flow.. simple as that... still elevate though.. ya got potential.. n what calam said is true, swayin votes can cause major bitching from ya opponent.. which is annoying

v/ manipulation

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"i voted for raw killa cause he has come far with this battlin and i know he had time to think about what he has writin,also that he's good at what he does so i think its fair fo him too win."

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"i vote fo raw killa cause he spits the best but there sumthin i dont understand,admit it las time u,had pussy is when pussy had u/
drop da act,we all kno ur a vanilla ice fan im jus bearin da facts/
sound like u got ur name from a pokemon so like ash i gotta catch him,get it ketchim/"

was that a fuckin rap??! i reckon if my cat shat words, that would be what it would shit... ahahahahhahahahahahahahhaahhahahaha pokemon?? ahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahaha wtf is ketchim got to do with his name??!?!?! ahahahahahhahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahah ah ah ah ah..........ok im done...lmao... haha.. aight..

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^^lmaoooo whut da fukk???? u drunk early in da mornin nigga............

u fuckin dick ridaz really need 2 go back 2 the 3rd grade if read closely on my verse faggots it not only rhymed perfectly cuz i did it line by line secondly shit was full of hard punches jus b4 i wrote i didnt kno dis a dude i was battlin was really a gurl so fuck all yall i kno i got skill where urs at? fuckin idiotic morons lmmao

manip you won this easy gurl...raw killa fuck off you herb. got 2 votres before you even dropped...duuuhhh..wonder why?
manip you killed this fag.
vote manip