manipulation vs rapmistress
 

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Yo, as i take a look at tha board you have all these open threads
Tryin' ta get ya battle record up? Nigga you're already dead
Fuckin' wit me is like you tryin ta jerk off wit ya whole hand
It's impossible so I suggest you take a back seat man
Tha MANIPULATOR? yea thats what u think
You ain't MANIPULATIN' shit, except ya rhymes cuz they stink
Tha Misstress of this scene look what I done started
Got niggas callin' me out you must be retarded
Bold as you are but you're equally weak
I think you're MANIPULATING your own self, tryin ta get saved from defeat

nice personals baby girl but umm work on ya structure and wordplay

good verse tho boo

nice shit....ya need to elevate a lil...but i can help wit that....nvm my avy an sig....they dreamcast inspired (our sites dreamteam).....but keep it real.....

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as i step to the mic..i show this wack bitch to be a dyke..
the way she swings punches..ud think it was a pillow-fight!..
all your punches "missed"..so i guess yor gettin Stressd..
bitch all your empty shells bouncing off my bullet proof vest...
blinded by light, i leave u disscontinued like a concorde flight..
bitch your shits less elevated..than a kindergarten kite!..
you drop plenty crack lines..so im guessing u like a smoke..
your shits got more rotting ingredients..than a bottle of coke!..
so its simple to see my lyrics too sick,i rip u in this rhyme-race..
even if i gave u a port,polish n shine..ud still end up in 2nd place!..



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Where r u at gurl? I thought u were gonna drop somethin?

my bad didn't even look up top I just ASSumed, my bad aiight, uppin then

And in my verse for the record I thought u were a Guy so I guess i fucked my shit off, oh well.

dats kool i made da same mistake but sure is funny dis chick got so mny battles open n only a few finished she stil need 2 drop sumtin on our but neva mind dat u both did good but both jus like me needs 2 workon structure a lil bit but ima give dis one 2 manipulation....dont forget ya verse dont need a cramp artist crampin my style peace out holla

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Manipulation- Your Punches Would Have Hit Hard If You Worded Them Better, Also Would Have Made Flow Better, Wordplay Was There, Not To Strong But Better Than Rap Misstress's, No Multis, No Personalz, N No Metaz.... But Structure Was Good, Agian Would Be Better If Flowed Better But Overal Ok Verse In This Battle....

Rap Misstress- You Get Personals In This.... Not Very Hard Hitting But None The Less You Got Em With That, Flow Was Ok, But Manip Got You There, Structure Was Ok, Niether Sides Very Original... Overal Another Ok Verse...

Punches- Manipulation
Personals- Rap Misstress
Flow- Manipulation
Multis- Niether
Metaz- Niether
Wordplay- Tie.. Not Very Strong In This Battle
Structure- Manipulation
Originality- Tie

Final Vote- Manipulation

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manip got cool word play and stuff but...rapmistress DEFINATELY got this 1.......BECAUSE she had harder and better PUNCHES...her structure was TIGHT and PERFECT....(damn more than mine...lol...)......her personals were decent too..

a few things i realy loved:
"Fuckin' wit me is like you tryin ta jerk off wit ya whole hand" <<<<< 8

"Tha Misstress of this scene look what I done started
Got niggas callin' me out you must be retarded" <<<< 8

vote:rapmistress

oh oh i see manip be manipulating her users cp..she put me on blacklist.............oh oh i feel ya.............scared to loose or wha?..damn fuck this

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Uppin so this shit could be closed already....................

alright a honest vote cuz i think a few niggas is dring cuz rap looks good.manupalition had better bars even though his shit fell off at the end a little.rap oded on the nigga name and that killed her whole shit and made it whacked.fuck whos more personal the vote is for whos verse was hotter yall niggas be getting it fucked up.manupalations verse was slicker and hotter so he get my vote.peace.

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i cant really decide who won, i got to say u was both good, and i am likin both ur style,

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MAnipulation took this battle without a doubt,
Her punches werer better wordplay and flow were better
Rapmisterss: not very good but your personals are better than manipu's

Vote Manipulation

please return the favor by voteing in this battle so i can get it finished
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137238

Yea Minipulator Won This..his Personals Hit Harder...u Did Kool 2 Rap Mistress Ur Personals Just Didnt Hit Hard Enough