Tha~Pro.DiGy \\//s. DaTruth29
 

yo know the rules
if i beat u do i get ya vote?? lol for rookie,
okay 3-0 k.o 5 to win
post a half hour within ur checkin or and hour within this
doesnt matter who is 1st just post
3 to 5 bars 6to 10 lines

this is mah check in
good luck

check in.. i'm back.. and 5-0 is Ko over hear cuz..

I agree to everything else though, as long as there is No feeding off my verse. if so, this will be DQed.... blind spit, just raw talent, that's it.. ok.. i'm movin

yo
 

yo check it


I keep teelin ya *your whack* and thats ''Da-Truth''....| but u missin *tha-clues* like an ~old slueth~....| count this loss as me making u *pay* for crossing mah lines like fucking ~toll booths~....| 1

With rhymes this ~guy-slacks~....| with mah verse i ~rised-strapped~....| we all know your ~lifes-whack~....| i geuss ur ~mics-cracked~....| because ''Truth'' known to *stick to paper * harder than bugs in ~fly-traps~....| 2

''Truth'' goes down on *pirates* the way he ~blows-hooks~....| get *punched* with ~no-looks~....| this kat not that ill he just has *D/R* to *Cover* his story like when you ~fold-books~....| 3


ima only do 3 so uppin ur verse good luck

Expell Jolts of Force, decimating strong holds wit a Passionate Glow
You chose the Wrong Pro coz yo style's bout as Average as Joe
I start Rappin a Flow n begin Bashin ya Skull wit Tactics I Wrote
I'll have em cry a river, build a bridge over it, n charge this Faggot a Toll
So much Bull shit comes out yo mouth that when u spit, Plants'll Just Grow
Hide like Rabbits in Holes,I wear u out, throw u in the Hamper with Clothes
I "came hard" on you like a dick, shit, what was I Supposed To Do?
Coz in battles, U'r Like President Bush ....Only stupid people Vote for U
So why Try This? You're Spineless, U'r so weak that U x Me = a Minus
+ Yo rhymes wouldn't even "go gold" if they were touched by King Midas
Biotch! Oakland!



peace....

Honest Votes Please

good battle cuz...

ya'll see that we droped in the same minute.. 1:44.. so both of us coming up with a "Toll Booth" punch is a coicidence....

I wanted to make sure that neither of us fed off each other..

uppin.. this is a cool little battle, if I do say so myself

personals-prodigy
punches-prodigy
flow-Truth
multis-ummm truth his multis flowed better than prodigys...
structure-truth...


ncie battle.... truth had more of a a constent flow...backed by nice punches... prodigy u have real nice ideas... but that line structure is hard to get into whenj ur reading... feels choppy fix that up and let ur multis flow together.. ur shit will get dope....

*prodigy... maybe u cab be rook of the month...good looks...

nice job both of u...

v/ Truth....

return the favor and vote on my battle...

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...535#post1428535

nice drop fam good luck hey r there tourneys or ne thing for belts on this site?>


0-0 still uppin

mah bad 0-1 in datruths favor

Punches: Da Truth
Flow: Tie
Multis:Prod
Originality: Da Truth
Structure: Prod

Final Vote Da Truth.. peace

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hey if u win punches and personals u should win tha battle so just think about that 0-1

that ain't true.. stop using propaganda just to win.. I thought that you were coo..
plus in my opinion.. my punches were better, but they're opinions, right?

Punches: Da Truth
Flow: Tie
Multis:Prodigy
Creativity: Da Truth
Structure: Prod (very original)
Fun Factor: Da Truth

Overall: v. Da Truth

nice battle y'all

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i dunno this one was close....i really don't know who to vote

Truth-You had a good flow...a lot of multis and good punches....i liked yours a lot...opener and closer was good

Prodigy-You were pretty match to him i think...good flow, multies, and punches...opener was good and your closer was ok...i liked yours and Truth's alot...just liked Truth's a tad bit better no beef tho :-/

v/DaTruth

vote for my battle

(Me \V/s Ruff Tuff Thug)
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136633

uppin

none takin 4-0 still uppin

uppin

ok prodigy ya structure was off you need to work on that
but i liked ya punches and mettas need some more personals tho
da truth you had some good punches and ok structure thats why you took this one

Da Truth gets my vote

Mn, I won this already, now I have too many battles open.

Although I ain't really like either of the verses that much im votin for Prod.
His had beter better punchlinea and half of the other dudes ain't make sense(no offense) so of the punches in his wwere aight though

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chose winners verse....


Expell Jolts of Force, decimating strong holds wit a Passionate Glow
You chose the Wrong Pro coz yo style's bout as Average as Joe
good punch......nice flow......
I start Rappin a Flow n begin Bashin ya Skull wit Tactics I Wrote
I'll have em cry a river, build a bridge over it, n charge this Faggot a Toll
once again good punch...better than opener......keep hittin like this you'll win
So much Bull shit comes out yo mouth that when u spit, Plants'll Just Grow
Hide like Rabbits in Holes,I wear u out, throw u in the Hamper with Clothes
this lines a little played....but you changed the wordplay around..so it was all good
I "came hard" on you like a dick, shit, what was I Supposed To Do?
Coz in battles, U'r Like President Bush ....Only stupid people Vote for U
nice punch....your verse keeps gettin better and better....
So why Try This? You're Spineless, U'r so weak that U x Me = a Minus
+ Yo rhymes wouldn't even "go gold" if they were touched by King Midas
dope closer...when i heard it i was like "damn".....

vote/da truth

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137008
return the favor^^^

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Was a pretty good battle...Pro the only thing that I wasnt really feelin was a few of your rhymes were kinda streched, you coulda made em rhyme a lil better. The flow was decent once i got the hang of it, i had to read it a couple time to feel where you were comin from...but it was tight. Some nice punches, multies were here and their kinda hit and miss, which took away from your flow. The metas were decent but I just thought you coulda worked on more of them.

Datruth29 I think this was the best verse ive seen from you yet. The flow was very good, could be flowed slow or fast and switched up easy...I was feelin it. The Metas were nice, I liked the bridge one, and kind midas very nice. Punches coulda been better I thought, and no personaly either. Vocab was nice and was really making sense, I notice a lot of people use scholar words and dont make sense...so that was a bonus. Just the overall structure and additives in your verse made it sound much harder than his, which gave you the clear edge.

Good battle though...no beef...BIG UPS

v/Datruth29

Ups

yo is it 4-1? or wat still uppin

Damn that battle was illl.
Aight...
opening : truth
Close: close cuz o-boi came hard, but truth gets it.
Metas: Truth
Multis:o-boi
Overall: Truth...the shit wass mand ill.

V/Truth.