"Undiscovered"~ BigChase, Met-A-Four Hot new Keystyle
 

ME and Meta-a-four
This was a freestyle i turned into a collab...it goes by the alphabet........the narrator is the first part (me)....the mcee is the second (meta)........the story u can figure out

I moved dis shit cuz the old thread had a wack name.....uppin fo feedback.......atticus ur right it is better thasn yours lmao....hahhaha



An enygma, born with the breath of his last suffering among death of lifes cycle
BBloodshed surrounding every possiblity, tactics providing fear in spite tho
Contimplating life at its prime position, his talents tuned to every nerve of his brain
December, the month when his reign of supreme musical intellect began followed by pain
Earned his title and respect among elders through underground exploits of skills
Found a home in the shelter due to his mother using his hard earned income for crack not bills
Guaranteed nothing only granted hunger, poverty, and the right of remaining silent
Hope a concept forsaken and of none's understanding; uneducation is as common as violence
Incompetence is forced on others; as books thrown away resulting in the expansion of drug trade
Jail, or death the only alternatives to absense in illegal activities with involment since the 3rd grade
Killers living next door, life holds no personal value except gettin paid in full
Lets review once of all the undistputed lyricist whose flows shrouded with notouriety
Magnetize the mic with lyrics of steel, opposties attracting due to versatile veriaty
Neva abandoned hope but detrimental to Americas moraly correct uptight society
Opposing the system used to oppress minorities but were continueing the cycle so we wont be free



Prospects of this battle, im getting psyched, LiL G-Get Ready for a rattle
Questions, NO! he needs a sucker and a rattle, ima make this bitch a huge calatter
Regrettably like Eminem, Im getting signed if i win, “failure is just not an option”
Stupid, No Personal On Me, Some Punches I got, well just about everythin hes rockin
Times come up, I’ve Heard My Name Announced, Here It Goes Its My only Shot
Unfortunately I see Record Executives, ILL Is my Goal, Lose Is My Cannot
Veering left and right as I spit, my hands are getting sweaty already
Watchin the crowd jump and my opponents eyes gleam, I start to become steady
Xtremely Frozen, Im gunna choke, I know it, I don’t hear my self when I spit
You can see my nervousness, if I murdered someone you could tell I’m the culprit
Zenith, I Finished, Im at the highest point, nothing can fail me now, im the motha fuckin greatet

i liked da idea for i aint hatin yo big chasew/e da fuck it is u got problem wit b a man bout quit hatin over senseless shit n keep droppin it i felt da way ya'll did dis hell ya its worthy for da july/august shit keep doin ya think n calm down a bit shit bickerin n fightin like a bunch of 4 r olds im da type dat admits beef for a reason not playground bullshit think bout is it dat serious peace out

no beef den....stop sayin nigga tho.........and take my advice ya structure sucks fix it.........forget that one thread..wen i get pissed i lose control....

yo im sry if u dont like it when i use nigga in raps but u cant judge sum1 u dont kno feel me like i said ive lived round blacks my whole fuckin life i cant help the slang rubbed off on me 2 my people in jersey n even homie's i met in da army i was always considered one of da nigggaz so i cant help if i tlk like u so freely try n understand from my point of view...n yea i kno my structure need work but u gotta admit i aint dat bad c'mon now i got 2 open battle's both im winnin so far n 1 of them da person im battlin aint even drop his verse yet n he challenged me n i already 2 votes c'mon think bout it thanx peace holla its all love rememba its jus music

kool man...but just keep it on a low............like Eminem was surrounded by blacks but if he said niga....hiss career would be done wit black people..........uppin fo feedback.....

uppin fo dis shit................comeon people.....

Lol I Already Responded On This So Im Not Gonna Give Some Long Thing Like The Last...
But Nice Job...
Can't Knock Me Off The Top Though...
Haha...
~One~

no we already did..........lol.........we pissed in ur gun that shot our bullits

uppin plz playas.......

never noticed this thread, lol bummp

lol its new skool....the odl name was too bad......

alright, yes this drop was dope too, very creative and flowed very well, beautiful imagery in ya words, all of you nice job.............

thnx alot...open mic....stuf.....atticus if u see this recommend us......

yeah its hot...but not really the greatest thing in the world......nice scheme and all...vocab was hot....flow was on point........but really not mag or vet material onez

thnx lol...........but we both really oyung an just started it was ruseh too....btw vote for open mic of july lol thnx yall

it was good not hot but above good work on ya vocab though

and that is it pc

^ thanks bump...............

bump!

thnx all 4 fb....more plz...open mic of july/august plz...lol

The only problem that I have with it was that the lines seemed stretched. Oh and that you seemed like you were throwing complex words in there just for effect. Other than that, dope drop. NOT flow of the month shit though.

they arent.. and its wordplay. please dont give fb if u dont understand

Ass. Wordplay is beyond just using words that you really don't know just to sound cool. Don't critique feedback if you don't read it properly. Now, like i said, some of the lines seemed stretched and throwing complex words in a drop just for effect isn't good.

it doesnt matter if lines are stretched in text, read it out loud or there isnt any flow, and if u can critizie so well, write something better.

What? First and foremost, it DOES matter. Text is nothing but writing your rhymes. If your written shit don't have a decent flow to it, we know how shitty your audio sounds. How do you figure that it doesn't matter?
Second, if that's what you want, then I will. Give me a line limit.

dont relly know I knoww all the words I used duh.......not everyones stupid...

but thnx 4 tha feedback

I'm not saying you're stupid. Hehe, I was simply saying that the amount of big words you put in there gives off the impression that you wrote that using a thesaurus for every word in there. I'm not hating, unlike what your partner thinks. Keep it up.

too k me 5 mintues to do mine.......and thnx we NEED constructive critcsim

bumpizzle

yeah that was tight man, good work

uppin........

~we're All Brothers~
 

Yo Im black an I dont have a problem with him saying it,,,because I feel where he comming from with it,,,,We use it the same way he do,,,So why do blacks get mad when a different race says it,,Im only saying its nothing wrong with him using it?,
If you already know he not being a racist,,,So lets a give him a brake,,,on this judge me thing,,because he's my hommie,,an Im black,,,But its just like any one else saying it.
So why preasure him about it,? when he's just being him self,,,,Yo hommie you dont got to change for no one,,,,,They know your not being racist,,,,So just keep being you,,,
My nigga,,,,because im down for what ever when it comes to keeping it real,,,,1

An the flow was tight,,,I like the way you used the letters,,,7-10
God bless all..1

I Like :The Idea Of What You Were Trying To Do .. TheWAy You Put It Brought The Flow Totally Off .. That Is Important In A Topical Verse .. But It Was Just A Keystyle .. So It Was Iight ..

he say i dont reply to others at all,,,,the way he talks,,,bitch I RUN MY OWN GOT DAUM SITES,,,HOW ABOUT I OWN 20 SITES,,,TO YOUR NONE,,,So dont come at me like that little boy,,,,how old are you about 12,,,please come back when your a man aight home boy,,,because I not a fucking kid mask!!!,,,
Like i said erase all my shit I mean all of it,,,If i catch your no ryhming ass bitting,,,I'll have your ass sued you bitch,,,,Fuck mask,,,,you must be mad because you see me getting replys,,
Shit mask show me a flow your dumb ass done wrote in the past 2 days,,,Not including today bitch!!!....But wait you dont write,,,you just judge without thinking,,,,YOU FUCKING DICK RIDING HATING TO YOUNG TO DRINK,,NO MUSTACHE HAVING BITCH MADE MUTHAFUCKA,,,,I mean what the fuck I said,,,,
Your a funny guy trying to ask me to show you something that you can look up your got daum self,,,you lazy bum!!!!

i liked yer idea but it was hard to rap it out loud cuz the style was fucked cuz there was not to much rhymes but i found a few its didnt work ho alright
6/10

Chase if it was a real open mic then u could do it audio, only kids use that f*ing text BS.

hhahah.. i maay be buzzin .. but shit this fool said he liked it.. then read some others reply and said he aint feelin the tEXT bs.. and then this cool cat comes in bein cool.. then posts again on somethin all yellin at somebody i dont get that shit...

dawg that wus some tight shit, keep it up, i liked that shit