FlOw InTeLLiGeNt Vs. Verbal Abuse
 

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D2R Check......im guessing this is blind

Hmm That Was A Decent Verse Only One Personal Tell Me Why Everything Else Is Underlined...Trying To Make It Look Like A Link ?!?! Anyways I'll Drop My Verse Later Good Multies

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Verbal Abuse Got Lame Drops...Check His Spits He Ain't Hott
I Would Have Put Effort In This But You Already Lost To J Dot
VA Thought I Would No-Show But That Verse Was Quite Ill
Too Bad It Was All Fake Like Your Clothes From Good-Will
I See You Wont Battle Newb's...Must Be Worried About Their Health
The Problem Is...You SHOULD Battle Rook's Cuz You're A Noob Yourself
Verbal Spits Wack In His Threads And He's Slack With His Pens
Watch As His Eyes Roll Fast...Straight To The Back Of His Head
Trash Verse I'll Bash You With Lead If You Come Back With A Threat
Wanna Get Some Votes ? You'll Have To Come Back With A Friend
Move Your Verse To Front Lines So You'll Be Put In Your Place
Only Time Your A 'Shoe-In' Is With My 'Foot Through Your Face'
VA I Hear You Have Passion For Clits...But Yet No Action Persists
You Could Try All Day And Get Nothing But The Attraction Of Dicks


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I Lost To J Dot By D/r. uPpin....

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um i dont know you verbal abuse but u came pretty weak but it was aight tha thing that flow got you in was personal's u didnt have alot of them in my eyez

flow u did good i liked tha flow alot betta had more personal's u did good



flow~flow intell
structure ~flow intell
punches ~flow intell
personal's ~flow intell
vocab~neither
enjoyed ~flow's
overall vote ~flow



i'll be back wit a link

by tha way this is legacy i changed ma name here's this 1 i'll be back wit the other please vote i need em closed http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136884

and here's tha other 1 don had metaskriptz blacklisted so he couldnt poll but vote on both please i need em closed leave a link http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135130

Verbal Abuse- yo verse was good...i don't know why u had SOME under line words that wasn't links...but anyway...you had a pretty good verse structure was ok 'n' shit and tha flow a little good...

FlOw InTeLLiGeNt- yo verse was good...u had harder punches than VA...cuz u kept landin' them 'n' shit..flow was good and tha structure was ok wit it...

Overall- FlOw got this one...just came out there wit some harder punches that landed and shit..

v/ FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

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VA Try Out For HardWood Class-Sickz Looks Like You'd Be A Good Addition To Our Topical Division Good Battle ~!1!~

Flow Turns From Guest...Ask Mama Whos Ahead, 'n' From 'er Youll Learn The Best.
My Flow's Intelligent, My Creation Of A Butter Verse Will Churn Your Breast.(milk)
stretched
Quick Key And Burn The Rest, When It Comes To Basics Your Like The Amish.
Collab Cant Rob This, ...Honest...Not Even Time Can Look Into Or Future This.
yall Your Character Holy, Cuz Ill Expose Your Beliefs Like The Crusifix.
Like A Missing Keyboard Ill Defuse Your Wrists, Call Me The Enemy.
decent
Like Little Mermaid's Deal With Ursula...You Gotta Kiss A Man 2 Gain The Remedy.
Drowned Til You See-AN-enemy(sea anenimies), Caused By Claims Of In-Humanity.
stretched didnt hit hard
Unworthy Vanity. Youd Be In Luck To Win Like If Hugh Pampered Me(sent me strippers).
Crews Damned To Be Danished...These Index Fingers Will Put Away With These Rookies.
Classicz Took Me?..Watch These Two Fingers Skillfully Finish These Pussies.
decent

Verbal Abuse Got Lame Drops...Check His Spits He Ain't Hott
I Would Have Put Effort In This But You Already Lost To J Dot
nice personal
VA Thought I Would No-Show But That Verse Was Quite Ill
Too Bad It Was All Fake Like Your Clothes From Good-Will
soso
I See You Wont Battle Newb's...Must Be Worried About Their Health
The Problem Is...You SHOULD Battle Rook's Cuz You're A Noob Yourself
decent punch
Verbal Spits Wack In His Threads And He's Slack With His Pens
Watch As His Eyes Roll Fast...Straight To The Back Of His Head
didnt rhyme
Trash Verse I'll Bash You With Lead If You Come Back With A Threat
Wanna Get Some Votes ? You'll Have To Come Back With A Friend
blah
Move Your Verse To Front Lines So You'll Be Put In Your Place
Only Time Your A 'Shoe-In' Is With My 'Foot Through Your Face'
nice wordplay
VA I Hear You Have Passion For Clits...But Yet No Action Persists
You Could Try All Day And Get Nothing But The Attraction Of Dicks
decent closer

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verbal abuse-what kinda a fuckin structure is that all kinds of fucked up to read ya punchs wasnt really all that good to me had soem wordplay attempts none where really worded good an mostly stretched out an killed every punch u attempted had some creativitie on a few lines but no personals really overall not a very good verse to me brah

flow irrelevent-didnt feal your shit really had personals over an over but nothin that really hit to hard in this verse u spit guess that opener just named the verse not tryin or somethin but naw weak battle on both sides to me but u had a better verse to me for all the personals

vote flow irrelevent

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Really...i think flow won this battle because his sturc was mad good..his wordplay was ok..and his punchlines just hti way harder....verbal..idk wat u were doing wit ur struc but it mad sloppy..damn that was ugly....ya verse was ok..i guess..it was ok ..but not no were enough to be flow intelligent...verbal i did not really fill ur vers.e..i thought i was full of fillers..enougn saye..flow intelligetn won this battle with a long shot..not downgrading noone but i think u just came make we...V.A....ok iight

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