LyriCal Havok vs Ice pick
 

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im bout to give this kid Ebola...


you think you got a chance, lol your a hard headed fellow.
but your rhymes are "soft'', eat you up like "jello"//
checked out some battles of yours, seems like you got "uneven lines".
type blindly, keyboard is brail, must be a "barber thats blind"//
kid you dickride(write) worse then "guys in san francisco".
but it comes back to haunt you, like aids in the congo//
your raps are long and corny like women from texas.
i speak for all your oppenents, why did you juss fed ex us//
time to end this kids future, send him back to the "past".
get robbed by farmers with pichforks, "while you were on the mast"//

explanation:
boston tea party hes from boston, mast = ship where tea was stolen...
guys in san fransio are mostly gay...S.F was a place where they could get married.

L HAVOK CALLIN ME OUT HUH

I'll give your verse respectful earth burial when I kill it,
You think because you have diarrhea you're making ill shit?/
I Shatter all bastard rappers in battle like they're porcelain,
My best suggestion for you is :Just back out like a dorsal fin/
disrespecting me's a good way to get your balls kicked,
colon and esophagus switched...so now you can really 'talk shit'/
Its not a good thought to battle me....Duck my wicked flow/
You honestly got mentalities of a bitch....It shows
Crush this individual just for being so pitiful,
bust his skeleton up till his x-rays show up invisible/
I'm high on my own shit when I flame it,
You're only high on litmus paper charts cause your style is so fucking 'basic'/
Lyrikal Havok i bet you think your Marshall Mathers /
you couldn't make up news, if you did the cosmetics for Don Rathers /
so take your mom and have her.. nah fuck it, filthy rhymes /
you're constanlty cock faced..
like male siamese twins, born in 69's /

wait a minute thats bitten....ive seen most of that somewhere else...man you fuckin biter....

only reason i say i can tel is cuz he most of it is lower case than he added lyrical havok.. or atleast so it seems

DID
I BITE THIS

I HAVE BEEN ONLINE THE WHOLE TIME
HAVNT LEFT THE SITE FOR A THING

your verse sucked

I DONT BITE , that is for assholes with no skill

ALL THE PEOPLES NAMES I CAPITOLIZED


YOU CAN SAY WHAT YOU WILL

I Capitalize alot of my words

then why....haha..man i cant believe you would actually do this...tsk tsk tsk...somebodys gettin banned...

well i dont know but you gotta provide a link to where u saw it or its str8....

LMAO, OMG I HAVE TO PASTE THIS WHOLE VERSE: L HAVOK CALLIN ME OUT HUH

I'll give your verse respectful earth burial when I kill it,
You think because you have diarrhea you're making ill shit?/
I Shatter all bastard rappers in battle like they're porcelain,
My best suggestion for you is :Just back out like a dorsal fin/
disrespecting me's a good way to get your balls kicked,
colon and esophagus switched...so now you can really 'talk shit'/
Its not a good thought to battle me....Duck my wicked flow/
You honestly got mentalities of a bitch....It shows
Crush this individual just for being so pitiful,
bust his skeleton up till his x-rays show up invisible/
I'm high on my own shit when I flame it,
You're only high on litmus paper charts cause your style is so fucking 'basic'/
Lyrikal Havok i bet you think your Marshall Mathers /
you couldn't make up news, if you did the cosmetics for Don Rathers /
so take your mom and have her.. nah fuck it, filthy rhymes /
you're constanlty cock faced..
like male siamese twins, born in 69's /
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Think once think twice and you wont want go there with me!!!!!

E=MC2
Me = EMcee's Scared




tHAT SHIT WAS RIDICULOUS THAT WAS TIGHT PICK. STRUCTURE, METAS, PUNCHES IT WAS ALL THERE AND IT JUST ALL FLOWED NICLEY MAN.



lYRICAL: THERE WAS NO COMPETITION ON THIS I FORGOT YOUR VERSE AFTER I READ ICE PICKS. NOW I AM NEW TO RB AND SHIT AN I'M TRYIN TO ELEVATE AND ALL BUT YOUR FLOW WAS AS BASIC AS MINES.

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THIS KID HATIN TALKIN SHIT
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He thought i was a newb
well i am but i am newb to this site with some fuckin skillz

yo HAVOK
ICE PICK crushed u man
no diss respect but he had way more
punches and way betta word play
so i went wit him
v/ICE PICK

almost 4got vote 4 deez battles
amayze vs forgotten flow
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031

murda-gram
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136506

2hard2lose
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487

novakane
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749

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YO,
ice:you took this by a landslide, ya whole verse was tight, you had flow, structure, personals, wordplay, basically all the ingredients for a good verse, u ate him,ya punches were on point and your usage of words was creative from start to finish...
lyrical:you had a decent verse but it wasnt strong enough of a match for ice's verse, you need to come harder and use personal disses, watch your vocab too, cuz it kinda seemed like you just threw a verse together and hope dfor the best.........decent overall though
VOTE:ICE PICK

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ICE PICK ha a lot more punches and his flow and used his word right

ICE PICK got this vote

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<an this kid makin accusations and now he aint been here in a week
he mad he got ripped up plain and simple

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you couldnt make up news if you did cosmetics for dan rathers and i shatter rappers like porcelian i suggest you back out like a dorsal fin was the highlights both from icepick.
flow-ice
wordplay-ice
vocab-ice
personals-tie neither had any
punches-ice
ice won this battle basically hands down and lyrical san fransisco and congo.say them they dont rhyme!!!!
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give honest votes back i always do

ice pick cuz he had punchlines and flow was great.

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