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Battle For East Bay Supremecy
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no crew or d/r due in 30 min. after check in. or DQ let's go.. East bay battle This is to see who is the best in the east Bay area of California.. I'm from Oakland (live in Richmond, Ca) he's from and lives in Richmond, Ca |
yo but i need you to vote for me and novakanes battle homie so i can battle can yuo?
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Yo We Can Do This Easily Or Illegaly, Believe-it-Be Known Seemingly, That Delinquint has Already Owned the Battle For Supremecy This Is Shot-Prevokin, Devide Ya Face I Am Not Jokin Enough Hot Rhymes To Have Oakland Really Smokin*** Richminions Beat-You-Down, From 7000th To 9000th They Mad-Atchu E-1-4 Laugh at This Clown**, Keek The Sneek-Will Laugh-Atchu This Shit is Spiritual, This Lyrical Boar Is Sneerin-You Erbody Knows Of Oaktown, But Like We Was All Def We Will never Hear-Of-You Your Power Is Under-Me, Comfortably In A Month-You'll Be Dead And Gone, Like The Truth* Of Cigarrette Companies explanations: ***A Saying In The Bay Area Is Smokin-Oakland **E-1-4=East Oakland 14th Street *The Truth=Anit Cigarette Coorparation |
THIS IS MY VERSE FROM WHEN WE WERE SUPPOSED TO BATTLE THE FIRST TIME, BUT HE NO SHOWED...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136421 OH, AND THE LAST LINE THE WORD "yOUNGE" SHOULD BE TOUNGE.. OBVIOUSLY |
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Yo Copy And Paste Dat Shit Here
But Yo Good Battle Homie And Yo You Do Know What Richtown Is Right? |
Don't Insult Me Cuz.. I Live On San Pablo Damn Road, Right By The San Pablo Casino.. I Live In The Rich (richmond Cali)... Do You Know What The O Is?..
Naw, Fuckin Wit You.. Oh, And When I Said He Took A Name From An Oakland Rap Group, There Is A Group Of Two Out Here Called "the Deliquints".. |
aaight man so you beefin wit me or what
man we coo we boff from the bay nah mean? |
Naw, I ain't beefin wit you, I said I was jus fuckin wit you... you asked me did i know what rich town was ,I was jus tellin u that i live out here.. good battle cuzo..
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yea uppin for votes for this bitch some on yall bring them votes
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com on yall we waiting for the best of the bay bitches
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I think Truth had the better verse in this one. I'm feelin this Oakland battle here cuz I used ta live in the Bay area too. They got some rappers that came outta Oakland...the Luniz, the old Digital Underground...and yea. But back to the battle. Truth got him with punches that were hittin a tad bit harder than D's. D had a better closure. I'll give ya that. That line was tite. Both structures were good. I gotta give it to Truth for better punches. I respect both. Keep doin it big..coming out of the bay.
Vote-Truth Vote on this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136783 |
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Nice Battle... props 2 both
Punches- Deliquint Flow- Da Truth Wordplay- Deliquint Personals- Da Truth Multis- Niether Metaz- Niether Structure- Da Truth Originality- Deliquint Final Vote---- Deliquint... Close Battle But My Votez 4 Deliquint.... nice battle both of ya... Return Tha Favor Vote Fair On My Battle.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136850 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Punches: Truth
Personals: Truth Flow: Truth Wordplay: Deliquint Structure: Da Truth Originality: Da Truth I liked both verses. They were both tight as hell, but I thought that Deliquint's was more of town-glorification. It was more defensive than offensive, and battles are offensive. My vote went to Truth. |
Truth, where the hell is your drop at? and if that link is, then you're recyclin and Deliquint gets my vote
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You must be a fuckin newbie.. Bitch he was a no show, if he no shows i can do that shit.. plus he had the upperhand, he had days to feed off my verse.. so u can't vote on this battle then, you will be DQ
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Vote/Delinquint...Truth recycled a verse and he just isnt creative enough to think of another one..learn how to battle
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deli:
had great wordplay but thats about it. nothing else was rele stickin out, not much to say b/c you need to hit more punches, get some structure and find some personals. you had one. truth: had good punches, decent stucture, good flow and some worplay, nice creativity, need to work on the vocab.. but you won. vote: truth return the favor. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137008 |
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i liked delinquent verse better harder westside rap i aint gonna judge flow or struture cuz theres no such fucking thing in a text battle and niggas need to stop saying that dumb shit .i liked deliquents verse who he called the nigga hood out and shit it was real personal
yall niggas return the vote on my battles aganist daillest and killa vote fairly. caliph |
ok yo i could tell yall were gettin serious. im from the bay too man. vallejo. but i think both had some kinda good verses. umm some of delinquints stuff didnt make sesnse it was like he jus tried to fit in words so that it rhymed. datrths verse was kinda good not too many punches or anything but i think he won because the punches he did have i felt alot more than what delinquint had to say. but anyway hit me up on the pm maybe we could a bay area collab thing in open mic
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Caliph, you didn't even explain yourself cuz......
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vote on da prodigy vs exit wounds an i'll return the favor
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Damn! Can We Get Some Votes In This Bitch... Shit
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yea truth took this one..his punches were way better and his personals were better..
good flow dilequint but that aint enough |
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