Gee Vs Wordman
 

Yo ok.. you spit First man....

iam still at workk... later on tonight i ll be uppp


Peace!!

Alright..Rules:

10-16 lines
No feeding, recycling
No Bullshit votes, dickridin, crew

I'll spit then you can 40 minutes after you check in.

Wordmans broke ass can neva be a balla,
look at his name, he only earns per"cent"ages of dollas.
He likes pipes, has a Hunger for More like Lloyd B.,
this fag deals with more sausages than a weinerschnitzel employee.
This bitch says hes a blitzer, takin pride in QB defensive "cracks"*,
he thought he was gonna suck some nuts, when his coach said effective "sacks."
When I "drop" my verse, I'm bringin what you say "down".
this fakeass couldnt push a "heavy bar" if he constructed play-grounds.
With "2" pens, you still couldnt amount to what I've wrote.
5 pictures of "pac", too bad you wont get that many votes.
I serve you up like a waiter, slice you up like a lime,
and drop your blood on your paper, so you can evaporate with your rhymes.
So at this time..I'll let the voters choose who is the loser,
but I'll tell you in this line..I'mma "shut you down" like your computer.

*Cracks is another word for Tackles.

-Look in his sig and avatar, youll get the punches.

Sorry man, i got CAugt Up with some Stuff.. I ll Be up Soon..

Aight Yo, First off start up a new Room Of RB Funniest BloopersThis cant Cat battle, cant Even Hold his own against J-TrooperClaiming you had better Personals, Obviouse you Lack Credentials
Iam Lyrically Gifted To Challenge these False Facts –That- you- StateIam a Giant, you Leaving Caterpillar Tracks-Fuck’in-LightWeight
Losing this battle worse then the Aussies against Frederick the Great
Gee coming in Last in this battle Grand Prix
Understand, that u always Gonna Be Petty Bourgeoisie
You ant Shutting Know One Down, yah Fragile and Weak
Iam Breaking Down Yah Credit, Like the Coral Reef
You couldn’t win this battle if you were the Commander in Chief
If you thought otherwise, it be a Psychotic Belief


peace......

Punches- Both Threw Pretty Much Equal Amount
Personals- Gee With The Avvy Line
Flow- Tie Both Came About The Same
Metaphors- Wordman Got It
Wordplay- Gee His Was More Complex Than W/m
Originality- Tie
Structure- Gee Better Bar Structure
Multis- Niether - - - Dont Make it A Multi
[/b]Final Vote- Gee[/b]

Yo the Only reason The Structure is kinda fucked cause of the Bolding.. iamm re-post it with out it..

Aight Yo, First off start up a new Room Of RB Funniest Bloopers
This cant Cat battle, cant Even Hold his own against J-Trooper
Claiming you had better Personals, Obviouse you Lack Credentials
Iam Lyrically Gifted To Challenge these False Facts –That- you- State
Iam a Giant, you Leaving Caterpillar Tracks-Fuck’in-LightWeight
Losing this battle worse then the Aussies against Frederick the Great
Gee coming in Last in this battle Grand Prix
Understand, that u always Gonna Be Petty Bourgeoisie
You ant Shutting Know One Down, yah Fragile and Weak
Iam Breaking Down Yah Credit, Like the Coral Reef
You couldn’t win this battle if you were the Commander in Chief
If you thought otherwise, it be a Psychotic Belief

nah i dont look at how they decorate there verse.. its how they set it up for a punch or wordplay or diss or something..... decorations dont win shit in battlez....

Uppin.

I personally think GEE hit harder.

Gee had better punches, better structure, better opener, and better closer.

Wordman, your structure did jump all over the place even without the bold codes. It ranged from 18-11. I couldn't really flow with it. You had some good punches, but not as good as Gee's. I liked your rhymes better though.

V/ GEE

Uppin.

Ok First Of WordMan Advice Switch Yo Style Up Your Structure Is Fucked

You Can Do

Aight Yo, First off start up a new Room Of RB Funniest Bloopers
This Cat Cant battle Cant Even Hold his own against J-Trooper

Try That Kind Of Structure In Your Next Battle You Might Get More Votes....


Your Structure Wasnt Pretty Either Even Yo Linez Out Like

Wordmans broke ass Like Master P can neva be a balla,
look at his name, he only earns per"cent"ages of dollas.

^^ Master P Cant Get In tha Nba 4 Nuttin Even It Out...

Winner-Gee

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return of favor to gee
 

GEE

Wordmans broke ass can neva be a balla,
look at his name, he only earns per"cent"ages of dollas.
nice opening 5/10

He likes pipes, has a Hunger for More like Lloyd B.,
this fag deals with more sausages than a weinerschnitzel employee.
one more gay line for GEE man please stop with the pipes 3/10

This bitch says hes a blitzer, takin pride in QB defensive "cracks"*,
he thought he was gonna suck some nuts, when his coach said effective "sacks."
lol still gay but made me laugh 6/10

When I "drop" my verse, I'm bringin what you say "down".
this fakeass couldnt push a "heavy bar" if he constructed play-grounds.
decent 4/10

With "2" pens, you still couldnt amount to what I've wrote.
5 pictures of "pac", too bad you wont get that many votes.
nice punch liked it 7/10

I serve you up like a waiter, slice you up like a lime,
and drop your blood on your paper, so you can evaporate with your rhymes.
dope shit best line 8/10

So at this time..I'll let the voters choose who is the loser,
but I'll tell you in this line..I'mma "shut you down" like your computer
bit streched aint a great finish 4/10

37/70
5.3/10

this verse was decent flow wasnt great but you had some nice personals and strong punches

%$ WordMan

Aight Yo, First off start up a new Room Of RB Funniest Bloopers
This cant Cat battle, cant Even Hold his own against J-Trooper
whack second line is fucked read it again 3/10

Claiming you had better Personals, Obviouse you Lack Credentials
Iam Lyrically Gifted To Challenge these False Facts –That- you- State
not rhyming shit all 2/10

Iam a Giant, you Leaving Caterpillar Tracks-Fuck’in-LightWeight
Losing this battle worse then the Aussies against Frederick the Great
where is the punch or personal or anything 3/10

Gee coming in Last in this battle Grand Prix
Understand, that u always Gonna Be Petty Bourgeoisie
not bad best so far 5/10

You ant Shutting Know One Down, yah Fragile and Weak
Iam Breaking Down Yah Credit, Like the Coral Reef
weak rhyme 3/10

You couldn’t win this battle if you were the Commander in Chief
If you thought otherwise, it be a Psychotic Belief
ok finish nothing special 4/10

2/60
3.3

you need to work on your flow and read your verse before posting to aviod mistakes you had a personal or 2 but didnt really hit work to boost your imagination and vocab

voting for gee for having better punches and more personals

vote: GEE

with respect for both of you

hit up my battles

peace

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Wordman- Your verse was okay wasnt tha best or good or anything...your punches sucked seriously i didnt like them...your flow well you really didnt have a flow to go along either...your structure was decent...but overall manye elevate...
GEE- your verse was pretty decent...but your punches were good...some hit hard some didnt...but they were good...your flow you had an okay one...your structure was also decent...and you had a few personals in there...but overall you get this for better in everything mostly ...

v/GEE
I WILL POLL MY VOTE WHEN YOU VOTE ON 1 OF MY BATTLES IN MY SIG..& POLL TOO...

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personally no hatin~~but gee took dis one wit da punches and leadin up 2 em..he had da structure and da flow...return da favor EVERYONE
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