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Kizza 07-22-04 10:32 PM

Kizza--VS--Kronuz
 
10 lines
no dick ridin
no crew votes
no hate votes
verses due 15 mins after both emcees check in.

KroNuz 07-22-04 11:02 PM

Doesnt Allow just check inz so im makeing this long lol....

Check In.. good luck

Kizza 07-22-04 11:03 PM

check in.....good luck 2 u 2

Kizza 07-22-04 11:08 PM

Kronuz is a neverending epidemic better call forensics
he can't see the lights even though yesterday he repented
Kizza make it hot on ya block
wit dat underground bass laden trunk of hard knocks
my shock-ing voltage stamp ya ass now you stumped
male, you just like postage,but you ain't goin ta Jenny, Gump.
my rhyme reflect like prisms
when I breathe flames you see as 3 dimensional visions (ya trippin)
I'll sing you ta sleep cause I know you was born bastard
impenetrable flow, lock you in like a fly trapped in plaster.

good luck dog.

KroNuz 07-22-04 11:11 PM

A Structured bruisen, trust my movements, you battle 5 timez a day dont you get enough of losein/
Kron Leavein you torn wit scarz, u born fat lard, you wack n ya punches just as bad as you format barz/
I cant decide ya style or ya linez,which the worst is,n if you posted ya pic RB would have something to laugh at besides ya verses/
My deaths rebuked, you cant get a win, respect the truth, so dont take tha loss hard, thats all RB expects from you/

Ight Quick key.... 4 barz.. 8 linez.. a lil under but dont wanna take to much time up peace... g'lucc

Kizza 07-23-04 12:13 AM

uppin dis for some votes ya'll.

Justify 07-23-04 12:53 AM

Kizza had everything...structure was a little off and it messed with the flow...but besides that, Kronuz=merked

Percept Shun 07-23-04 12:55 AM

Quote:
Flow - KroNuz. Even though the structure looked like it was gonna be hard to read, it flowed well and actually had multies. The lines were also about the same length. Kizza had an alright flow too, but some lines were too short and uneven.

Next time turn this:

A Structured bruisen, trust my movements, you battle 5 timez a day dont you get enough of losein/

to this:

A Structured bruisen, trust my movements,
you battle 5 timez a day dont you get enough of losein

Punches - KroNuz. Hit harder.

Personals - None.

Wordplay & Metaphors - Kizza. Had more metaphors and complexity.

Originality - Kizza. Had more original concepts.


If you haven't noticed KroNuz went below the line limit, so I should be giving this to Kizza. but....Overall. punches are what wins battles and KroNuz hit harder. so

V/KroNuz - harder punches.

Percept Shun 07-23-04 12:58 AM

blah, changing my vote.

Sorry but Kizza had more original punches and besides you went under the line limit.

KroNuz 07-23-04 12:59 AM

cool.. went under so it would be harder for me to win... peace

Kizza 07-23-04 03:31 AM

uppin fa votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kizza 07-23-04 10:45 AM

uppin for some votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KroNuz 07-23-04 12:19 PM

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KroNuz 07-23-04 02:18 PM

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The Reaper 07-23-04 02:32 PM

Flow: Kron
Structure: Kizza (Kron on your bars you need to do what PerceptShun showed ya)
Punches: Kron
Metas: Kizza

This appears to be a tie, but a battle is about punches and Kron was stronger there. Kron got my vote.

G 07-23-04 02:44 PM

Kron takes it with better punches. His structure was a lil off but he got Kiz on tha punches. Kizz had some good punches but they just wernt hittin as hard. You also had that one bar talkin about how hot you are. That just takes up bar space. Kron wins it with better punchlines.

Vote-Kron

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136136

RapMisstress 07-23-04 02:51 PM

Well I would say that Kizza, had a more complex approach and had some metaphors but punches weren't hard. But Flow was good.

Kron: Structure, structure, structure those were some long ass lines. It would had flowed nicely if the structure wasn't so bad but u had really good punches, I like the intro but the ending sucked seems like u just put it there.



Overall: Kron because his punches.
But it was close.

Immense 07-23-04 04:20 PM

kronuz-nice verse,but structure was messed up,wich made flow bad,some good punchlines,an few multis.nice verse.

kizza,another decent verse,better structure and flow,but ya punchlies dint hit as hard.

my vote-kronuz

tourn 07-23-04 05:31 PM

no matter how many bars he kron went under honestly...it really doesn't matter...i to say punches win battles...kizza didn't have one hard hittin punch in my opinion...kron didn't have the best structure in the word makin it a kinda hard read but he still pulls it off with punches...

v-kron


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