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LEGACY vs Poison (TOPICAL)
aight verses due 35 mins after check in tha topic is u just cheated on ya girl and u want her back no dr or crew votes 10 lines min 20 lines max lets get this poppin |
checkity check check come check in poison so we can play lol
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Topic just cheated on my girl and now i want her back i love my girl but i was lovin on others that night name was jenny and that ass was on my sight drunk and before i knew it we was flirtin an hugin then came tha sexual intercourse kissing and loving i was loven tha way her fingers went through my hair on top i took a cold stare then realized we was no clothes bare now what have i done so i picked up my clothes and run back to my house where my girl saw all tha gigglen fun she said it was over and she never wanted to see me again i pinched my self cause how could i have been stupid it's gotta be pretend but she was packin and in about 10 mins a great girl i'd be lackin rite their i found out that it wasnt all good bein a pimp and mackin she left on a evil night wit a dark black wit a red outlinen in tha sky i was so imature cause before i neva thought over a girl i would cry for days to months i tried callin but over and over their was no answer now my heart is dien like i cought some sorta heart break cancer but over time u heal and be strong cause u gotta someday move on but even though she wasnt wit me i felt that she was riden all along |
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Topic: jus cheated on girl an wants her back. Listen, before u curse me out an slam tha door... I apologize, an im not Ruben Studdard, but sorry for 2004... Im on tha ground wit my knees to tha floor... Beggin u to take me back, cuz u tha tru one i adore... That otha girl was a mistake, cuz u my tru destiny... An when im with u, no otha chic can get next to me... We was meant to be, u was my queen an i was ya king... After highschool i planned to provide ya finger wit a ring... So we could be togetha fa eva... I want chu cuz nobody can treat me betta... I kno ya life been a mixture of sunshine an rain... Thas why i wanna bring u happiness not teardrops an pain... Please take me back ill show u endless love an affection... Ill be ya restin place an protection... Through ya hours of trouble, sorrow an rejection... I cheated on u an thas my confession... I cant live with out u an theres no otha exception... |
Damn i never did topical this is first an last one.
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Meda Took this...Lol easy and Why
Poison-You had a Hot Drop but your structure was un even leaving flow Way off but nice Wordplay and Good Focuse though and No Vocab in there Legacy-Yours had Vocab and killed it...Easy Because you had the structure even and verse and flow was balanced and I liked how worded and But ya verse wordplay wasnt there Like Poison but you took it Because of dat v/Menda |
thankz uppin for sum more votes people leave a link
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lol thas why i will neva do a topical again rofl.
but id merk him in a regular battle. haha |
^^^lol uppin for votes guy's leave a link i'll hit it up
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Legacy- Your verse was hott....you stayed on topic...you had some very very nice vocab...your flow was good....your structure was good also....but overall you get my vote for better verse and better vocab....plus i enjoyed your too...
Poison- Your verse was nice too....Your structure was decent but could have been better...your flow was aight but i wasnt feelin it that much...your wordplay was nice...and also your vocab really didnt have any....but overall elevate in Topicals... v/Legacy... |
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yo poison i thought u neva did topicals? funny
anyway virtue has a good flow great good story everything jus overall good maybe add some meti in the flow poison you had an ok flow nuthin special it was ok some refrences ion their like ruban studdard threw the flow off ok story v/virtue for better flow and content |
thas why this is my last one...........
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uppin for votes nuff said.................................
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easily sed.... wise takes this, better wording, more on topic....
good desription.... good story telling... poison, elevate. vote -ww |
^^my name is virtue not wise ways uppin for votes nuff said..........
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legacy you had a better drop due to vocab and better wordplay i liked poisons flow better but i didnt like neither of your strutures and it looked streched
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Menda had flow and vocab and a better drop
poisons flow was messed. had a pretty nice drop though. not too good of vocab V/Virtue |
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