MaRVOLOUSJ1009 VS MONSOON
 

aight umm 10 lines like u said dunn....lets go aint no reason da have rules cuzz niggaz gon break em aneway u spittin first

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You Dont Have To Dickride To Get Your Votes In......... I Mean If You That Good

???? how can i dickride and ima be da wun spittin?? who ima dick ride lmaoo

dunny im goin da sleep u fukin bullshittin it dot take ahour da come up with 10 lines ur a waist of battle credits

Ill stand on the highest mountaain peak vocalizin in tongues,
rhythmetic verses to your heart beat like im callabin with drums........

fuk mann, It still amaze me that you off a beat, pacin up and about in your room
thinkin of a verse to sneak.....
what you think? your a rap god !?, you more like a rapdoll, you aint no action figure
just a doll with a strapon, suckin on tampons, thats why you the sickest on this site

I see through your hardwood glass, and your a clear picture to snipe
thats serves you right just chill and let my words unite
to form a wind so violent you could hear the leaves when you write
See im new to rb, your a vet to R&B,
whoever votes this cats poll must of pressed the wrong key!!

I beleive that strongly,


aight yall, newbe vs vet
There you have it !!!

so what you gonna take an hour too..................

i dont think dis quer is hott,fukk vocab i talk about how i wear da glok-
u da "twin tower's" with bar's cuzz in dis battle it took u "year's da drop"-

da whole site could see dat u dumb,first battle already see dat u done-
yeah keep talkin fagget ima send da "5-20" niggaz da be where u "from:"*

stepin 2 a vet da kidds all respected,im da reason ya chick often naked-
even if u was a "dj in a storm" u wouldn't have a "win(d) on ya record-

why da fukk would even battle marvolousj you know he gon slay ya-
ya moms a hoe dat had more "balls" on her then a "pokemon trainer"-

u couldn't name a cat who as sick as me,im da cat who u wish da be-
u cant key so u always got a "book in ya hand" like da "statue of liberty"-

*look at his location it say's 520 u'll get da punch

pleez vote rite ppl da favor will be returned

uppin 4 da ppl............................................... .........

aightt yall you know what to do
please explain yo decisoin

favors returned in your upcoming votes

aightt yall you know what to do
please explain yo decisoin

favors returned in your upcoming battles

i wanna give a shoutout to my brother, my mental
this shitt will never end...........

Marv J takes it easy with a better structure and harder punches. Monsoons verse was alright. That closure was pretty tite. But Marv just had you in everything else. Whether it was punches or metas, he had you. All of Marvs lines were hittin hard. Monsoon-fix ur structure a bit and it might flow better. At points I got lost and didnt understand some lines. Good battle, but MarvJ gets tha vote.

Vote-Marv J

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http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...36&page=2&pp=15

jea uppin 4 more votes ppl...dont sleep.................................

this was a very tight battle. i was suprised by monsoon's verse. both had some decent punches but i was feelin tha flow of monsoon a bit more

vote- monsoon

aiight.....monsoon very gud spit 4 a newb...very gud wordplay...
nice structure..i liked your verse..jus maybe wasnt that hard in punches
marv-basically u had harder punches,gud multies
and a nice flow......

vote-marv

2 gud verses but marv had beta punches..tite battle

RETURN THA FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1433412

return of favor to moon soon
 

breaking this shit down

MONSOON

Ill stand on the highest mountaain peak vocalizin in tongues,
rhythmetic verses to your heart beat like im callabin with drums........

fuk mann, It still amaze me that you off a beat, pacin up and about in your room
thinkin of a verse to sneak.....
ok opening nothing special 4/10

what you think? your a rap god !?, you more like a rapdoll, you aint no action figure
just a doll with a strapon, suckin on tampons, thats why you the sickest on this site
flow is allrite nothing more 4/10

I see through your hardwood glass, and your a clear picture to snipe
thats serves you right just chill and let my words unite
best bar so far personal 5/10

to form a wind so violent you could hear the leaves when you write
See im new to rb, your a vet to R&B,
whoever votes this cats poll must of pressed the wrong key!!
nice i like it you could'v made it better i can see a way or 2 6/10

19/40
4.75/10

ok your vocab is nice you just need to adjust it making harder punches not much personals and the weak structure got you down try to have one united structure otherwise you lose the flow i see your not bad for a newb you will elevate fast good luck

MARVOLoUsJ1009


i dont think dis quer is hott,fukk vocab i talk about how i wear da glok-
u da "twin tower's" with bar's cuzz in dis battle it took u "year's da drop"-
nice imagination good for an opening 6/10

da whole site could see dat u dumb,first battle already see dat u done-
yeah keep talkin fagget ima send da "5-20" niggaz da be where u "from:"*
i get the punche but i think it missed big time 3/10

stepin 2 a vet da kidds all respected,im da reason ya chick often naked-
even if u was a "dj in a storm" u wouldn't have a "win(d) on ya record-
no relation between the lines in the bar 4/10

why da fukk would even battle marvolousj you know he gon slay ya-
ya moms a hoe dat had more "balls" on her then a "pokemon trainer"-
lol second line made me laugh first is shit though 5/10

u couldn't name a cat who as sick as me,im da cat who u wish da be-
u cant key so u always got a "book in ya hand" like da "statue of liberty"-
if you only had a nice finish as the nice start 4/0

23/50
4.6/10

that verse was weak structure is fine but the flow put me off you had punches that missed no real personals if you can relate your punches to personals you will win easly

i have to give my vote to MOONSOON for having stronger punches and vetter vocab
vote:moonsoon

with respect for both of you

hit up my battles

peace

shit forget about this vote^^^^ i made a mistake good i didnt pole yet

MONSOON

Ill stand on the highest mountaain peak vocalizin in tongues,
rhythmetic verses to your heart beat like im callabin with drums........
nice imgination good opening 5/10

fuk mann, It still amaze me that you off a beat, pacin up and about in your room
thinkin of a verse to sneak.....
ok nothing special 4/10

what you think? your a rap god !?, you more like a rapdoll, you aint no action figure
just a doll with a strapon, suckin on tampons, thats why you the sickest on this site
flow is allrite nothing more 4/10

I see through your hardwood glass, and your a clear picture to snipe
thats serves you right just chill and let my words unite
best bar so far personal 5/10

to form a wind so violent you could hear the leaves when you write
See im new to rb, your a vet to R&B,
whoever votes this cats poll must of pressed the wrong key!!
nice i like it you could'v made it better i can see a way or 2 6/10

24/50
4.8/10

ok your vocab is nice you just need to adjust it making harder punches not much personals and the weak structure got you down try to have one united structure otherwise you lose the flow i see your not bad for a newb you will elevate fast good luck

MARVOLoUsJ1009


i dont think dis quer is hott,fukk vocab i talk about how i wear da glok-
u da "twin tower's" with bar's cuzz in dis battle it took u "year's da drop"-
nice imagination good for an opening 6/10

da whole site could see dat u dumb,first battle already see dat u done-
yeah keep talkin fagget ima send da "5-20" niggaz da be where u "from:"*
i get the punche but i think it missed big time 3/10

stepin 2 a vet da kidds all respected,im da reason ya chick often naked-
even if u was a "dj in a storm" u wouldn't have a "win(d) on ya record-
no relation between the lines in the bar 4/10

why da fukk would even battle marvolousj you know he gon slay ya-
ya moms a hoe dat had more "balls" on her then a "pokemon trainer"-
lol second line made me laugh first is shit though 5/10

u couldn't name a cat who as sick as me,im da cat who u wish da be-
u cant key so u always got a "book in ya hand" like da "statue of liberty"-
if you only had a nice finish as the nice start 4/0

23/50
4.6/10

that verse was weak structure is fine but the flow put me off you had punches that missed no real personals if you can relate your punches to personals you will win easly

i have to give my vote to MOONSOON for having stronger punches and vetter vocab
vote:moonsoon

with respect for both of you

hit up my battles

peace

Uppin 4 More Votes.....and Tell Me Who Da Fukk As A Text Flow In Da World I Wanna Know I Mean U Ant Hear Da Niggaz Letter's Be 4real

uppin 4 more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!................................. .

uppin again............................................. ..........

yo both of ya'll cats is wack but moonsoon won the battle

ima go wit MARVOLOUS
it was 2 punches i like dat i
felt helped hi mwin da battle

stepin 2 a vet da kidds all respected,im da reason ya chick often naked-
even if u was a "dj in a storm" u wouldn't have a "win(d) on ya record-

why da fukk would even battle marvolousj you know he gon slay ya-
ya moms a hoe dat had more "balls" on her then a "pokemon trainer"-

dats sealed da dealso i gave it 2 em
v/MARVOLOUSJ1009

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peace

jea uppin 4 more votes ppl lets go dis shit been up 2 long ....

yo uppin for votes

you got that mature power shit
then you got the funny man droppin verses thinkin he a rap god

^^shut da fukk up stupid now uppin 4 more votes ppl...........

Monsoon- First Part Of Ya Verse Was Wack... Wordplay Was Ok.. But I Wasnt Feeling It... And That Line About Off Beat... Its Text So It Doesnt Matter.... Other Than That.. Flow Was Good. Structure In Second Part Was Better Than Your First Part.. Punches Hit Here And There A Couple Decent Ones....

MArvolousj1900- Structure Was Better Than Monsoons, Flow Was Decent, Some Punches Were Played, And Some Connected Good, Wordplay Was Played In Some Parts But Was Still Ok....

Punches- Tie
Flow- Marv
Wordplay- Mon
Metaz- Marv
Multis- Mon
Structure- Marv
Originality- Tie

Final Vote---- Marvolousj1009

uppin 4 more vote muthafukkin vote ppl dis shit been up 2 long

MARVOLoUsJ1009 took this for an all round better verse.. harder hitting punches and a smoother flow than MONSOON..
MONSOON you had some good stuff but some weak ass punches which cost you the battle..
pz.