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Ice Pick Vs. Big Bad Wolf
:shoot: U Spit it First
no bitin no recyclin no hate No Dick riden All explained votez. :shoot: 10 linez :gfy: |
im here chekcin in
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okay,
this combatical inferior warrior is about to get a satanical sabbitical- your amateur swings cant surpass Pick the professional- congressional battle medal make wolf a quick disposal- stretch our beef to coastal, I snapp it and blast on you like a Postal- you a fuckin RAP BATTLE BENCHWARMER- brawl wit the Allstar, RAM you like Kurt Warner- I *axe* you wit a guitar- and multiply the volume through an amplifier- You be the wack shit spitter and i bet you a BITER you only talk shit when you on the toliet- you wanted to cook some beef with me but I spoiled it- how foolish to beef wit ya worst nightmare- fuckin standin there witta mic, blanky, and teddy bear- I aske ya dad if I could beat the shit out of you, he said he didnt care- slayin emcees is my favorite bad habit- I foam at the mouth and hunt you down like I was rabid- I swing blades at rapid speed, burn a hole in a skull with acid- I once knew this dude Wolf the big bad- visited his grave today, left flowers on the sod mat- to battle you gotta ask permission, beat this fag into submission- cause you need help, maybe a pshychiartist- to tell you that you beatin me is ridiculous------------ I'm battlin like GEORGE, just cause Im curious. My flow mrders it's so fuckin obvious |
sorry i took so fuckin long
i had a brain fart u better be here and i better not had wasted this fuckin verse |
Dog you fuckin wit someone dat likes watchin niggaz bleed helplessly
Already sick of me,In your case ill put this fag outa his misery Even gettin dis far for you deserves a medal curious bitch im skeptical, leave ya bleedin and have you seekin da medical agreein to battlin me is like sellin you soul to tha devil come into dis battle youngin wasnt ready speakin of beef i cooked his and made spaghetti fuck teddy, bitch you wet da bed fuck wit me ill wet ya head, wit lead,fuck dat shitty shit you said you swing blades at rapid speed, but wat the fuck you gonna do if im packin heat Ima flame spitter, your rhymes is shittier than fuckin kitty liter callin me a little kid dog but i fucked yo baby sitter fuckin yo mother is my favorite bad habit cuz i produced so many kidz ya momz called rabbit bout to cry is why his nose is runny in Boston beatin his dick like it owez him money he just had his first erection, im his father figure teachin him a lesson your lyricz dog, why the fuck do ya write em your name is gay cuz an ice pick is a household item you fuckin nitwit,tryin to spit shit you'll end up gettin your whole frame split Ice Pick, ask ya momz bout dis nice dick, she rode it like a motorbike, i know she likes it uppin(nice rhymes ice) |
Yo my computer was fucked so my bad it was late.
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Weak battle
Punches: Not Many Decent On Either Side Flow: Big Bad Metaz: Niether Wordplay: Niether Personals: Niether Vocab: Ice Pick Structure: Ice Pick Originality: Big Bad Wolf Final Vote---- Big Bad Wolf Peep my battle n vote fair.. peace http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136850 |
Woah, Ice won this hands down.
Ice: good flow, good vocab, good multis, great wordplay, good punches (though you could've used more of them), but don't EVER do a self-glorification closer in a battle... it's just not right. BBW: Structure was out of whack, I couldn't really flow with it, you had some decent punches, your rhymes were basic... The opener was that great, and the closer was refrigerated. Not hot, but cold. V/ Ice |
Aiight den. Still uppin. will return tha favor.
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Kronuz is a fuckin bitch ass pussy
he votes against me in every battle i have ever done GEE why is that cause he is a bitch if you ever wanna battle DAWG HOLLA |
I thought da rulez was 10 lines
bothof yall did ova 20 ???? |
NOPE
MY CALLOUT WAS FOR 20 lines max 10 minimum vote ----------------------------- |
STill uppin 4 votez.
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Aight NiCe Drops By Both Emcees But The Problem With Both Of Your Verses Its Not Structured Good...Even Yo Linez Out...Both Of You Used damn Good WordPlay And Was NiCely Done....But Both Of Yall Need 2 Try To Find Some Personals On Your Opponent Look At Some Vet Battles They Have Links To Stuff They opponent Did And Use It Wisley Yall Had Good Vocab But No Personals Sum Punches But Not Connected.. Dog you fuckin wit someone dat likes watchin niggaz bleed helplessly Already sick of me,In your case ill put this fag outa his misery ^^ Didnt Rhyme....Misery And Helplessly Say It To Your Self.. congressional battle medal make wolf a quick disposal- stretch our beef to coastal, I snapp it and blast on you like a Postal- Do You Mean Pistol??? GunPlay Is Weak In A Battle Couldve Done congressional battle medal make wolf a quick disposal- stretch our beef to coastal,Unoticed Net??Online Local.... ^^ Not The Best But Get Real Info Bout Yo Battler..Yall A Get It Winner- Ice Pick |
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Vote on dis an ill drop one on ya battles....uppin
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Uppin 4 votez.
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Vote on dis an ill drop one on ya battles...
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this was a weakbattle
but i say Ice Pick he had a little better flow |
Ok still uppin on dis bitch. drop a link.
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Nobody won this battle...its a tie for the weakest niggaz alive. First off, why were both of your verses that long...People do not feel like reading that shit...none of yall had structure...both of your concepts and word usage sucked. It feels like y'all went to a thesaurus and looked up the biggest words you can find and threw them in there.
It should be a tie. Now for an example of how a verse is supposed to look...CHECK OUT MY BATTLE WIT JBluntDubs. Holla! |
Fuck you nigga, you must be dum as hell cuz tha wordz wasnt all dat hard to understand...dum fuck. Anyway uppin for votez drop a link an ill drop one on your battle.
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my vote will go to ice... I liked the punches more, the words, the metas , and the delivery...they both really didn't have any personals. but the shit was tight. Sonded ....premade...nah mean. holla
V=ice |
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big bad had this one even though it was weak and whack as fuck big has ma vote cuz of flow and rhymin
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yo this was 90 lines of bullshit i only liked one bar which ice said ill ram you like kurt warner wolf aint rhyme in the end or in other parts and his struture is hard to follow so ice gets struture and personals goes to wolf but better verse goes to ice for overall effect.you is both better then this dont do this shit again.
vote honest on my shits and i do the same |
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