RB STORY ~1 verse~
 

hey niggas this a couple thangs i just wanted yaw 2 know bout dis site....

leme know how u feel niggas/ i worked hard on this shit :)

niggas claim fame for being labled vets truly/
then get ko'd by a 12 post, can't even vote, newbie/
if im lyin then sue me/ but i'm exposin the facts/
niggas always frontin' so i'm havin they back/
be real/ u know u aint packin know heat/
if u online,then how the fuck are u runnin the streets/
we got cheatin niggas that bite/and spit lines from other sites/
claimin they theres, cuz they can't think up shit to write/
so im here on open mic/ hopin 4 respect and some awards/
ya'll know what i want/ 708 4 for rookie,july 2004/ :thumbup:
yo newbies/u know how them multis get ya votes/
don't say nobody shit wack if u got only 4 post/
vote nigga vote/ i know u aint that busy/
that u can't write 2 lines and say that my lines witty/
shity, niggas here/ still use basic rhymes, and wit a crew/
still talkin gunz and spittin momma jokes too/can't even flow it
i'm just sayin if u got talent then show it/
but if u don't/dont spit shit/plant talent and grow it

yo man that was tight its true also

people say they gangstas when they gp on the pc most of the tyme hahaha

yea lol thanx man 4 critisin man i owe u one :)

aw shit ima flyweight!!!!! i aint a fuckin noob no mo!!!!!! :)

ahhhahhahahhahaha :laugh2: :laugh:

upin 4 more crits...


LETHAL SINZ...

i say its on of da best becuz its one of da realest...it says sum true shit about the site and about all da people that be voting and shit on here~~

definitely handlin, no doubt, not because we crew, but because its true, i write that shit SOMETIMES, when i get blocked, and when im battlin i hate stoppn to think, i just type...check it, wut we posed to be doin?

shits tru as fuck i see on mine n every one else muthafuckas view n skim post but cant take da tiem 2 drop they knowledge felt it cuz it was definetly truth keep doin yo thing n dat shit bout pc internet thugs definetly layin down facts good drop yo holla back

yo j-dot i know u been gone.... but i been doin alotta shit for da crew and i'm tryin 2 do collabs here... me, mc death, and dailist ben workin on alotta shit 2 put LS on da map so u wanna do be in da crew collab... or u wanna do one wit me?


Lethal Sinz crew collab comin soon.... real soon.....

lethal sinz....

we spit good shit quick,
audio comin soon so u know how we sound
we run dis shit, and run yo shit...
to the ground....

good shit
 

that was real i like how you dissed all the idiots who front like they the shit but still use yo moma jokes i know im still a noob to but it was good keep that comin

that was tight sun you slacked in a few spots and kinda lost me but i like the concept and the rhymes were offical.good work :thumbup:

yeah i liked it...

thnx all of ya 4 da crits... but ima keep uppin dis and my other open mic untill the lethal sinz crew collab open mic come out so keep em comin :)

that was tight man, i know how u feel when peeps talkin about guns and shit, just cause u think u rap dont mean u automatically get the "thug" motto

To Simple Though Man Like I Said Use Betta Vocab

that was hot. hands down because it was one of da truest and da realist

No rhymes, flow, structure, vocab, metas... No... Bad...

it dont reallly matter, i can get in a crew collab or one wit u, i dont care, just gimme word when shits official

I liked it, fuck all that critquie the structre and shit I just straight up like it.