Da Jokah Vs Exit Wounds
 

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Da jokah-vs-Exit Wounds
 

Da jokah-vs-Exit Wounds

HOOK= It WASN'T WISE TO SUMMONS KID NOW THE TABLE IS SET,AND YOU CAN BET YA BULLET WOUNDS I'M A RUINE YA REP~
WOKE ME WHILE I'M RESTING KID IS SOMETHNG DADDY DON'T LIKE,NOW YOU'LL REGRET THE DAY YOU EVER WANTED TO PICK UP A MIC.

I suppose you think you iller cause you battling aids,but the drama you've endured wouldn't fill up a page~

I announce another victory that's 3 in my belt,lil ry, deliqient and now the likes of yourself~

Maybe you a prankster I got jokes of my own,like I saw ya mother in her panties with her dick on the bone~

I'm known to too terrific but see gifted is me,like pissing on ya grave then crip walking with glee~

I devise to mesmerize and put that thang to ya eyes,take knives and head dive in ya ass to sever ties~

back up don't loose ya focus cause next i'm a flip,back simmy twist and put some sport on this bytch~

Im the first of 8 wonders the other seven wont do,I can't be destroyed by Benladen if he teamed up wit you~

you a pink panty pussy putting penis on ya palets,dick sucking coward laying still while golden showered~

now its time I rip you like you tissue in ass,lock on his ass so tight kids will think i'm a rash~

jokah jokah jokah its a joke that you flow,and stop telling lies that you ripped up a show~

you ain't never seen a stage ain't never picked up a mic,last year you riding scooters now you thinking you tight~

get back on ya bike a wheelie ya ass on home,befor I fukkin get mad and put this peice to ya dome~

Da jokah-vs-Exit Wounds

ayo chek chek..

you be feelin tha pain wen dese bulletz Exit ya Woundz//
Acme anvilz fallin on ya head..like its dem bugz bunny carttoonz//
if your aids...then iam hurpyz...and iam so Sik-Wit-It//
ayo my flow stays dangerous..unlike yurs..I..Stik-Wit-It//
every time i spit..i feel dat burnin sensation...(haha)
Code name iz BIG Penis cuz iam straight Penetration..(ewwww)
smash u in da face..wit da side of tha burner..leave u wit Jay-Z Lipz//
my flow flow iz $Cash and Money$ so i can pay-these-tipz//
ayo day call me Armerol cuz i Sprey-dese-whipz//
ya flowz iz Sleepin wake dem up u Lay-Z-Shit//

ITs DONE... its a WRAP like a condom on a dick biatch...

uppin this lets goo dont sleep this iight holla wun ill return after...

rofl wtf was this rofl

punches joka
personal's none really
structure def joka
vocab joka
complexity neither
enjoyed joka
overall vote joka


nuthin more other than wounds elevate kid u dont have much vocab and work on ya structure and dont go anywhere cause i got a battle that needs votin on be right back wit tha link

vote on this leave a link i'll hit it up http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136884

iight thanx mayne 1-0 me,,,uppin this yo dont sleep

Jokah, vote on my battle wit DJulien

I didnt like the way exit wounds battle structure was set up..just dumb as shit, didnt come as hard as jokah, nothin was quite as good as jokahs...elevate son

V/Jokah

iight uppin this dont sleep wun..

uppin this dont sleep niggaz

i liked joka better he used his opponeants shit aganist him and killed him .the other kid spit too long and lost my attention with wayyyyyyyyyyyy too much bullshit plus i couldnt follow his verses.


vote on my battles daillest verses caliph and killa vs caliph vote fairly.return the vote i gave yall niggas

uppin thi dont sleep on dis niggas wun..

these have gotz to be crew votes, his verse just like everybody i've battled was weak as hell! ya'll need to catch my flow or something.just 1 of my lines (pick one)destroyed his whole verse!

haha na nigga u fuckin suck iight so jus take ya fuckin lose lil bitch wun...
anyways uppin this

uppin this shit yo dont sleep niggaz

uppin this lets go niggas dont sleep

uppin this

aight wounds i was'nt feeling any personals but your punches were good,some stretched lines but ya had better vocab n content in ya verse...
jokah:ya lines were'nt consistent in syllable count n some of your punches were really simple,good drop but you did'nt have the content,overall i gotta give this 2 exit wounds jus cause of his outright consistent verse...i matched up line for line n thats how i determined tha winner.........no hate ya'll nice drop.........
VOTE/EXIT WOUNDS

please return da favour:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136831
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...059#post1440059

iight hahahah ok but anyways
uppin this

uppin this shit

i enjoyed readin cuz of structure flow punches and exit wounds gave my eyes wounds cuz it so terrible.

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da jokah.....whole verse was sikk......good flow from exit wounds......but jokah had better everything....punches, werdplay,structure was good as well...jokah had him from the start wit tha opener....much respect to both of ya
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